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discharge vrs.gotaasswhoopin4U
5-15 lines
no d/r no crew u spit first |
checkin iiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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my clique is evil kanivel, the way we jump yall niggas/
ya clique is fuckin garbage so im gon dump yall nigga/ life aint good when u being chased by an infared beam/ u picked a dumb battle now u gettin ripped like k-mart jeans/ discharge act like he wanted the battle but he fearin my skills/ watch his verse take 2 hours to type cuz he try to mirror my skills/ u better be prepared for my skills/ i aint feel like wastin my time on a dude wit inferior skill/ erbody kno this bum dont wanna see the kid/ but he needed publicity for that piece of shit link in his sig/ cmon dog ill have ya body laid out in th grass/ dude love love the pen(jail) cuz he str8 ass/ ya life is a mirage,u got balls to battle me/ how long this dude be discharged go on, get some new batteries/ :thefinger |
tight verse tight verse iight im checkin in be done in less than 30
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your last battle was your"15-minutes-of-fame",give it up youve already been "slain"//
nothing could help ya"game", "i got my ass beat" to that you should change ya name// none of your "ass-whoopin"skillz remain,all your ryhmes and punches are played// all your ryhmes are just fuckin plain,you have no skillz and thats another win i gained// you and your crew should be ashamed, your gayer than prince in perple rain// your soft like the kids from the "cabage patch" , your weak i already won this match// skillz are something ull never catch,not even if i put them in a bone and had ths bitch "go fetch"// i broke you like a"weak" trojan latex,folks this bitch is "dead" so pay your respects// next time keep your ryhmes book and dictionary intact,good ryhmes or vocab. is what u lack// my punches hit to fast for bitches like you to react,give rappin up,your fucking "wack"// but il cut you some slack,u got less skill then nine-year-olds got hair on their "nutsack"// so ill take your ryhmes and return em to "sender",your ryhmes arnt gold,just fools treasure// ill killed ya ass with one gesture,obviously you fold underpressure// ur a good contender,but i feel like im battelin uncle fester, im wrong even he could ryhme better// yu sexoffender,your a "fuit",thats why you got served like an fruit smoothy fresh out the blender// |
good battle i liked both verses
gotaa -u had some ite shit but u cant use da same word twice at da end it blow yo whole verse bestline-erbody kno this bum dont wanna see the kid/ but he needed publicity for that piece of shit link in his sig/ dat was hott worsteline-my clique is evil kanivel, the way we jump yall niggas/ ya clique is fuckin garbage so im gon dump yall nigga/ ^^ bad way 2 start overall verse get a **8** discharge u had a nice flow and some nice punches bestline-your last battle was your"15-minutes-of-fame",give it up youve already been "slain"// nothing could help ya"game", "i got my ass beat" to that you should change ya name// ^^^ nice start worsteline-none overall yo vere get a **9** winner-discharge |
goooood battle uppin for votes well return da favor
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upppity uppin again and again
will return the favor |
Opin
Oopin Appin Ippin Eppin Nnnnnaaaahhhhh Uuuuuuuuuupppppiiiiiiiinnnnnnn^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 6 |
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^^^^CORNY ASS FINISHER DUNNY explanation: ya verse was madd week dunn u have no punchlines..u had a lil wordplay and wun personal...u get a 6/10 |
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explanation:nice verse punches was there and u had a good lil flow but ya opener finshed him...9/10 my vote-discharge RETURN DA FAVOR....DA LINKS R IN MY SIG |
Uppin This Fuckin Battle Right The Fuck Now
I Hope I Dont Go Lose Im Still Over 500. Niggas Im The Nets Not The Knicks |
discharge won
punches-discharge mettas-discharge multis-none flow-GAAS vocab-none |
ok breakdown for gotaa:
ur trying to be to tough u cant use the same word 4 times in a row overall 5/10 bestline:ya life is a mirage,u got balls to battle me/ how long this dude be discharged go on, get some new batteries/ overall for discharge: 8/10 this was a solid flow but u a bitch i aint gonna lie ill kick ya ass your best line:so ill take your ryhmes and return em to "sender",your ryhmes arnt gold,just fools treasure// ill killed ya ass with one gesture,obviously you fold underpressure// if i was votin on who i hated more discharge would have lost but if im voting on who has more skill discharge won so im givin it to discharge |
It goes down like this. Ass had the flow, and way better structure. Had a couple good lines. I liked that one about needin batteries or some shit, but that was about it
Discharged's lines were a little too long, but he had a little word play and good punches so he gets my vote. |
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