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[b]techrhymes V.s. Born2spitt[/b]
IIGHT 5 TO 10 BARS MAX U THINK U READY. LETS GO. RHYMES DUE ANYTIME.NO DR/CREW/HATE IIGHT. :thefinger :gfy:
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We each spit once... u spit first 10 bars max.. ill go wit that
DQ'ed. Biting: http://www.illhill.com/forum/topic.asp?TOPIC_ID=6547 -strobe |
Poisin Fire
AY YO, YOU CLAIM YOU IS BORN TO SPIT/
BUT DAT WONT BE DA FACT WHEN YOU TORN DA BITS/ AN IT AINT TAKIN ME LONG TO POST THESE RHYMES/ CUZ IF I WAS I WOULD SHREAD YOU ACROSS DA COST OF EAST LINES/ AND I SPIT MY BARS WIT CUATION/ THIS IS DAT POISIN FIRE IF YOU BITE OFF ME IT'LL MAKE YOU NAUSIOUS/ MOST OF DA SHIT YOU SPITTEN WAS PROBABLY PRE WRITTEN/ FRRRUCK DAT, YO ISH IS THEE BITTEN/ SPITT CANT SEE ME,MY RHYMES IS LIKE A TECH/ SPITT,WHAT HOOD IS YOU REPPIN WOULD YOU GO BACK AND CHECK/ IM REPPIN THA MOTHAFRRRUCKIN EAST SIDE/ IM BETTIN YOU'S A UNDERTHUGGIN BEAST RIGHT/ WHY IS YOU IN A HURRY TO BATTLE/ IM'A STRAIGHT BURRY YOU UP IN A SATTLE/ THE EFFECT OF MY POISIN FIRE WOULD BLIND YOU/ BUT DAT'S JUST MY SPARK,MY HOLLOWS BEHIND YOU/ LIKE I SAID TO THEM OTHER EMCEE'S,IM ROLLIN WIT DA TECHNINE/ JUST KNOW I AINT NEVER STOPPIN MY WRATH DA NAME IS TECHRHYMES. HOLD DAT :shoot: |
LOL.. u wanna make it 10-20?? u called the rule 5-10 then u come pull like 20..
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Your punk ass life, aint nobody gonna save//
Like “DMX” I’ll help you, and give you a “cradle to your grave”// this guy is fraud--faker than a plastic apple// fruit of loom panties make you more fruity than snapple// my impeechment re-jected, sorry Born has been re-elected// if nobody votes for your verse, its cuz u was lyrically ne-glected// youre tha opposite of hot, if u want you can borrow my sweater-and-t's// ill even give you my saliva, u still couldnt spit better-than-me// so this is tha re-election seems like schwarenegger's-in-office// heres my only none hatin comment, give up this battle you already-lost-it// once again as said before "PLEASE" find a lyric-con-verter// and see if C.S.I. can figure out why your lyrics got mur-dered// Tech Came Spittin Sick But im bout Reverse-The-Curse// Write Rhmyes on His "SOAP" Cuz That Be Tha Only Time He'd "DROP-a-Nice-Verse"// My Verse Filled WIt Nutritionist FACTS So Im Baggin Ya Lunches// Yall Came Up Like Anarecsick Boxers, Nuthin But Weak Punches// I’ve done won, don’t vote, it’s not an election// Only time Tech comes hard is when he gets an erection// Im Killin This Dude, I Think I See Blood Drippin From His PC// Ima Take A "V" Out Of This "V.E.T" And Leave'Em Lookin Like "E.T."// Im Ending This Battle, I Murdered This Dude With My Lyrics Quickest Creations// Fuck A Funeral Everyone On hurr Just Witnessed Cremation// |
May the illezt nigga win.. well anyways lets get these votes cmin in people
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Ay Yo, Yo Shit Was Tight, Im Really Feelin Those Punches Kid.why Dont You See My Nigga Hot As A Gun. Verse Him. You Hot.
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Thx dogg... i never thought i would here shit like this against someone im versin.. anyways thx homie.. ill battle him when i get better dogg
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121594
^^ return tha favor Tech.-Weak opener,it just was too simple and soft. AN IT AINT TAKIN ME LONG TO POST THESE RHYMES/ CUZ IF I WAS I WOULD SHREAD YOU ACROSS DA COST OF EAST LINES/ AND I SPIT MY BARS WIT CUATION/ THIS IS DAT POISIN FIRE IF YOU BITE OFF ME IT'LL MAKE YOU NAUSIOUS/ MOST OF DA SHIT YOU SPITTEN WAS PROBABLY PRE WRITTEN/ FRRRUCK DAT, YO ISH IS THEE BITTEN/ SPITT CANT SEE ME,MY RHYMES IS LIKE A TECH/ SPITT,WHAT HOOD IS YOU REPPIN WOULD YOU GO BACK AND CHECK/ IM REPPIN THA MOTHAFRRRUCKIN EAST SIDE/ IM BETTIN YOU'S A UNDERTHUGGIN BEAST RIGHT/ WHY IS YOU IN A HURRY TO BATTLE/ IM'A STRAIGHT BURRY YOU UP IN A SATTLE/ THE EFFECT OF MY POISIN FIRE WOULD BLIND YOU/ BUT DAT'S JUST MY SPARK,MY HOLLOWS BEHIND YOU/ ^^If ya read this agin,you'd see,this is softer than a tittie.I don't see how that would diss your oppenent.These lines are "meh".They were complex,which is good,but just plain whack. Weak closer.Same as problem as ur opener. Born2 Spitt-Ok opener,nice shit bout DMX. I’ve done won, don’t vote, it’s not an election// Only time Tech comes hard is when he gets an erection// ^^only these lines are whck.That erction shit has goten played out badly.But don't worry,the rest was better then anything tech had. Overall-Kinda one sided.Born2spit had this thing easily. Vote-Born2spit |
ok tech rhymes
--------------------- ok u had good punches(example):MOST OF DA SHIT YOU SPITTEN WAS PROBABLY PRE WRITTEN/ FRRRUCK DAT, YO ISH IS THEE BITTEN/ ok thats not great though keep working you had bad bad bad punches (example)AND I SPIT MY BARS WIT CUATION/ THIS IS DAT POISIN FIRE IF YOU BITE OFF ME IT'LL MAKE YOU NAUSIOUS/ (heres anbother bad one): WHY IS YOU IN A HURRY TO BATTLE/ IM'A STRAIGHT BURRY YOU UP IN A SATTLE/ that made no sense (heres another punch that made no sense):SPITT CANT SEE ME,MY RHYMES IS LIKE A TECH/ SPITT,WHAT HOOD IS YOU REPPIN WOULD YOU GO BACK AND CHECK/ not good keep working 4/10 --------- ----- -------- ----- born2spt -------------- bestline:Your punk ass life, aint nobody gonna save// Like “DMX” I’ll help you, and give you a “cradle to your grave”// this guy is fraud--faker than a plastic apple// fruit of loom panties make you more fruity than snapple// my impeechment re-jected, sorry Born has been re-elected// if nobody votes for your verse, its cuz u was lyrically ne-glected// hella good starter!!! worst line:Im Killin This Dude, I Think I See Blood Drippin From His PC// Ima Take A "V" Out Of This "V.E.T" And Leave'Em Lookin Like "E.T."// it was ok but not great 8/10 good job nice work blah blah blah my vote goes to born2spit |
both did good with da flow,
seemed to me that tech kinda was running out of ideas... Born had a fuckn awesome start... it just owned.... the rest of his shit hit hard as well. Vote : Born 2 own i mean Born2spit lol |
OK THIS BATTLE WRITE HERE WAS *WACK* CUZ THERE IS A NOOB GOING UP AGAINST A VETEREN AND I LIKED HIS WHOLE ENTIRE RAP IT WAS OFF THE CHAIN FROM THE BEGIN TO THE END JUST LOOK.....
Your punk ass life, aint nobody gonna save// Like “DMX” I’ll help you, and give you a “cradle to your grave”// this guy is fraud--faker than a plastic apple// fruit of loom panties make you more fruity than snapple// my impeechment re-jected, sorry Born has been re-elected// if nobody votes for your verse, its cuz u was lyrically ne-glected// youre tha opposite of hot, if u want you can borrow my sweater-and-t's// ill even give you my saliva, u still couldnt spit better-than-me// so this is tha re-election seems like schwarenegger's-in-office// heres my only none hatin comment, give up this battle you already-lost-it// once again as said before "PLEASE" find a lyric-con-verter// and see if C.S.I. can figure out why your lyrics got mur-dered// Tech Came Spittin Sick But im bout Reverse-The-Curse// Write Rhmyes on His "SOAP" Cuz That Be Tha Only Time He'd "DROP-a-Nice-Verse"// My Verse Filled WIt Nutritionist FACTS So Im Baggin Ya Lunches// Yall Came Up Like Anarecsick Boxers, Nuthin But Weak Punches// I’ve done won, don’t vote, it’s not an election// Only time Tech comes hard is when he gets an erection// Im Killin This Dude, I Think I See Blood Drippin From His PC// Ima Take A "V" Out Of This "V.E.T" And Leave'Em Lookin Like "E.T."// Im Ending This Battle, I Murdered This Dude With My Lyrics Quickest Creations// Fuck A Funeral Everyone On hurr Just Witnessed Cremation// |
Omg I Forgot To Vote Well The Vote Is For Born2spiit
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Ight thx for all the votin people.. gotta give tech some props for steppin up and ACTUALLY FINISHING the battle unlike Destin2Die
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Dont sleep this battle out peepz... all i need is one more honest vote .... cmon now
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