Luminaz Vs Darkman
 

battle 10 lines

Thanx for ratin me luminaz on my battle wiv strini but he did murder me though... i was still fresh though, when is dis sh*t gonna start?!?!

3 votes win
No dickridin or hate votes

You start

Battle
 

darkman think ur are real hard man,
u shud respect my authority like eric cartman,
before i pimp slap you u with my backhand,
bitch i dnt think u really understand,
ill make sink to the bottom like u was in quicksand,
so shut the fuck up b4 i bus ur lip,
make u 'dip it low' when i load the clip slow,
load another round and watch u do a backroll,
cok t'cok t'cok that thing,
ima show u how to make my 9 sing....bang

I kill fakes like you just for jokes,
Talkin shit to me you must be takin deep tokes
Lets be real cuz you ain't got a gat
You don't know shit,but ya still wanna chat, pure
S talkin to me like you can test,
Then again, for a minor i'm impressed,
Talkin like you gotta 9,well i got mine
Held it to yo mums head made 'er gimme shines,
Fool pleez ac'in like you so fuckin big,you're
Gonna fuck about n get wiped out...ya dig?

votes
 

can we get sum votes peeps

dis was a gd battle we just need some judgement
let the judgin commence

this was a weak battle . both of you need to elevate a lil. in the future you will het better, but i like Darkman's verse better.

vote =Darkman

i dropped a honest vote make sure you drop one on one of my battles listed below.

wow very weak but ima give it to lum b/c he at least rhymed all the way through.

Lum=1/10
Dark=.9/10

Yo im gonna give my vote to luminaz just cause i was more interested in his verse but this battle did suk it was just boring
I voted honestly on ur battle so vot on min
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i ain't mad. An honest vote's an honest vote.
Anyway...

MORE VOTES NEEDED

Both Contenders Were Weak But One Gotta Be Better Than Da Other
Luminaz's Post Waz 100% Weak And Wack And I Think Darkman's Was Too
But He Got Better Flows And More Jabs In Than Luminaz So This One Goes To
Darkman.

Overall Rating:
Luminaz: 2/10
Darkman: 4/10



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More votes needed

Luminaz - Alright spit man, you had a good flow on there.. and some punches.

Best Line - make u 'dip it low' when i load the clip slow,
load another round and watch u do a backroll,

Worst Line - darkman think ur are real hard man,
u shud respect my authority like eric cartman, (what?..)

Darkman - Good spit.. had some punches in there and a good flow and even some multi's.

Best Line - I kill fakes like you just for jokes,
Talkin shit to me you must be takin deep tokes

Worst Line - Fool pleez ac'in like you so fuckin big,you're
Gonna fuck about n get wiped out...ya dig? (weak ending)

OVERALL - I gotta give this battle to DM.. for better flow and more punches, Lum you lacked punches in this battle.. you need to throw more punches next battle.

VOTE - Darkman

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more votes needed people....

aight here it is
spit:dark
punch:dark
multi: none

dark:4/10
lum:3/10

thats how weak this battle is.....
aight..both of ya need ta uppin ur vocab...n need ta put more thought into it...aight...also...u need ta make multis to make it interesting@@@