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Optiksz 04-29-04 11:24 AM

Stitch Up my Empty'ness
 
I hate u for this Empty Shades//
Your my Death wit God's Grenades//
Razor Blades..and Tacks//
Until u Crack and give Back each Peice u Lack//
so precious U are and I'm deranged//
I mean Fuckin you is Strange//
Tie'n My soul to You//
My whole existence//
In this Instant//
Is the same But Different//
U want the Rest of me//
YOUR THE DEATH OF ME//
I got These Vultures and These Symbols On My agony but if that turned around//
Lovin u is addictive and so Summond//
Druling of the Satifaction//
Plus the Things Happin//
Is Dramatic and the peices are Spilling//
I hate you..NO.....I LOVE YOU your so refilling//
I got Worms In my head Swimming and souls are Tortured and No Catch//
Lets see what new Disease you'll Fetch//
I'm so crazy u Know//
and for you to be torn apart is the only way we'll be WHOLE!

yOuNG tIPS 04-29-04 01:13 PM

Like Said In The Last Feed Back I Droppe Dthe Shit You Spitting Is Most Defently Hot But I Really Think You Have Problem You Needa Role Model Or A Hug Or Something....lol.....overall Fire Fire Fire....1

Identity2k 04-29-04 02:57 PM

yo this shit was aight. i liked the beginning part the best but u kinda fell off towards the middle and end. nice vocad but flow was a little off. Aight peice but u coulda done better....



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