respect it
IF YOU CANT RESPECT THE GAME THE GAME AINT GONNA RESPECT YOU//
SPIT AT THE GAME THE GAME WILL SPIT BACK AT YOU// NIGGA I AINT AHEAD OF YOU IM MILES PASSED YOU// TREAT YOU LIKE A BLUNT LITE YOU UP AND PASS YOU// STEP CLOSE TO THAT BOY TIPS YOU GONNA FEEL THE TENTION// AND DID I MENTION// BOSTON IS WHAT IM REPPING// DRINKING MCs LIKE HEINIKENS IS WHAT IM QUENTION// YOU GOT NO MIC LOVE YOU GET CUT OUT THE SESSION// I GRIP MICS TO PROFESSION// CUZ IM THE NICEST ON THE MIC DEVICES// NOT ONLY IS 16 BARS OF MINES WORTH LOOT BUT TO ME THERE PRICELESS// NIGGAS IS FEATHER WEIGHT// GET YOUR THOUGHTS STRAIGHT// SHOTS TO YOUR CHEST WILL MAKE YOU LEVITATE// ON THE STREETS IM KNOWN BUT IM REAL REAR// GAS YOURSELF LIKE YOU SUPERMAN MEMBER HES IN A WHEELCHAIR// IM KNOWN TO LEAVE PARIPALEGIC// I MEANT IT// COCK MY SHIT BACK AND SQUEEZE IT// YOUR WIFEY AT THE CLUB THEN THATS WHO I LEAVE WITH// CUZ ITS NO LOVE MAKEING STRICTLY BACK BREAKING// TENANTS ON THE FIRST FLOOR ASKING EACHOTHER,"WHY IS OUR TV SHAKEING?"// I LIKE MY BITCHES YOUNG DUMB AND DOPE// LIKE ME TO PULL THERE HAIR AND SHOVE MY DICK IN THROAT// NO GAG REFLEX// SEX ON NO X// IF MY MANS AND THEM ARE THERE I WANT HER TO ASK WHOS NEXT// CUZ IF I HIT IT WE ALL IT THATS THE WAY IT GOES// NO CONVERSATION JUST TAKE OFF YOUR CLOTHES// ONE NIGHT THATS ALL IM LOOKING FOR IM NOT CALLING YOUR PHONE// ONLY IF EVERYTIME YOU PICK IT UP YOU TALKING THAT YOUR IN MOOD TO BONE// COME ON OVER// SUCK ME OFF THEN BEND OVER// IM LIKE DEAN MILENKO IN THE BED ILL PUT A BITCH IN THE TEXAS LEAF CLOVER// SO DONT HATE THE FLOW JUST RESPECT IT// BEFORE I TREAT YOU LIKE A BAD CELL PHONE CALL AND YOU GET DISCONNECTED.......NIIIIIICCA......1 :gfy: :nono: :thefinger |
yo this shit was ok. the structure was bad and the spelling was too. Up the vocab, rhymes were good. Aight peice overall
holla back at mine THE SICKEST OF SICK |
good 2k id appreciate some more feed back......1
|
Microsoft Word---> Tools---> Spelling and Grammar Check.
Repeated use of words is annoying. Quote:
Feel me? Structure was crazy ugly, work on that a bit for sure. Theme was ok, Flow was ok. Keep it up. Peace. |
LOL.. agreed.. excessive overuse wordplay.. ~~nuff said
|
And fuckin take caps lock off.
|
I just tryin ta' get my post count up though truthfully.
|
shit was ok.
just work on spelling and grammer and you'll be alright/ |
All times are GMT -4. The time now is 10:10 PM. |