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Identity2k 04-29-04 02:53 PM

The Sickest of Sick
 
Shit is Fire

No one will be sicker after me//
Light the tip of my tung and spit gasoline//
I ready for war, like a TOP-SPEED-SPARTAN//
Goin on shoppin sprees at LOCKHEED-MARTIN//
You are not me pardon// you lack da rhymes//
Clit-clack, while I rip backs and spines//
I’m known forever with skills// my letters are drills//
Clever and real// nigga if I ever get killed//
Put a chainsaw and shovel inside of my casket//
Dig myself out, first nigga I see is getting his ass kicked//
I been round niggas who are cold and killas//
And yall are juss fake like smoke and mirrors//
When it’s quiet for a while, they think the horror stopped//
Then they opened and let me out of Pandora’s box//
The biggest mistake ever made to date, I paved da way//
Yall niggas cant escape the hate//////////

bitch

Identity2k 04-29-04 03:56 PM

yo i want more feedback...........

gimme some and drop ya links or titles and i'll give u some feedback. come on yall..............

HOLLA

Identity2k 04-29-04 05:03 PM

gimme some fucking feedback... come on

$ike 04-29-04 05:05 PM

yo that was tight but not the best i seen but it was tight man nice job

Identity2k 04-29-04 06:47 PM

give me some fuckin feedback

Identity2k 04-29-04 08:05 PM

ay yall i need more feedback come on yall

Identity2k 04-29-04 08:58 PM

ay come on wat the fuck do i need to do to get more feedback....

i give everybody else feedback and no one gives me any back come on yall lemme get some feedback.................

Killah Bwoy 04-29-04 11:15 PM

you ddidnt give me feedback but here it was aiight not the best u need to stretch ya lines a lil bit more..makes it look better but all in all i give this a 6/10

Paper Man 04-30-04 12:18 AM

why do people keep sayin this is iight or its great.this was awful..almost as bad as Young AMos piece and 420's...........i mean come on now...the flow was iight, the structure sucked ass, the content made no sense in parrts, the vocab sucked..looks like you found any word that rhymed and put it together no matter if it fit correctly or not elevate kiddy.....

2/10

yungsir 04-30-04 12:14 PM

nah meen i seen better but it was good

For$akeN 04-30-04 01:16 PM

it was aight 7/10

yOuNG tIPS 04-30-04 04:04 PM

that shit was hot but i defently would of lik eto see that go just a lil bit long playboy ......1


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