knocked by the newbie
 

So here we go been readin lyrics bout hoes and dope ,but seems these queens with pipe dreams are surely blowin up smoke ,didn t know i married this rap game cuz we eloped and now you feenin but keep dreamin cuz its all mine bro ,the disign inside the mind is any means at any time thats why my kind has developed this lyric in due time ,to take the fakes out the mines and trenches thats why this battle will forever be relentless until you all recognize your sins and start fuckin REPENTENCE!

yo that structure is horrible homie, dont post in paragraph form, but other than that this shit was hot everything was hot except for the "eloped/bro' line i hated that line... up the vocab also.


holla back at mine
THE SICKEST OF SICK

yo im new to this im clueless about how to format in here so if ya need to holla back ill be sluggin a beer checkin out the other lines and shit holaaaaaa like da advice dawg!