nature-vs-mentalist
 

first to 4 votes
3-o K.O
dont care how many bars (max=25)
no crew votes
go ahead and spit

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(sorry bout da dots every time i try 2 reply it say it is too short have to be 50 characters or long

PS wat do i do to fix it or wateva

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wit eyes closed i could pick u out a line up
cuz when u breath i smell pure wet vagina
u sick cuz u fucked in africa wit no rubberz
im sick cuz i used battle crews wit no brothaz
im rich u poor its said that we both veterans
but u still suprised by my rocks like when the flinstones met the jetson
nature i hate to do it
but i have to teach the computer a lesson by pullin u through it
and bruisin ur brain by beatin wit ur spinal chord
u my slave now like saddam to george

wow that was one of the weakest non flowin verse i ever wrote talk about a waste

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my fault son i did not know u already spit
i hit u up tomorrow

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man my falt son i keep havin not time to write a post it seems like everytime i get on da computer i got to get off
P.S i ll try to hit u up tommorow
:huh:

aight im not even goin to spit long on dis chump

nigga i hope u know u funcin wit a god
and u already told me that im funcin wit a slub
i put u in da middle of no where cuz ur cell phone is sayin roam
ur rhymes is hung up cuz u not receving a dial tone
ur rhymes is fucked up
nigga im gunned up
im wit ur mama and ur aunt so im also bunned up
and mentalist if u run up on me u really see u funcin wit a G O D


my ryhme is short cuz i had to rush


PS plz vote

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uppin...................

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hey mentalist my rhyme was not dat great either dawg

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uppin fo votes plz vote and explain people i would do it fo yall

ok

nature...

work on structure and punches.... like your fucked up your gunned up then go into a long ass line that aint gonna work for you... man and thorw in punches not just retarted stuff here and there.

mentalist...

your verse about the vagina is retarted...that might be good if thats what his breath smells like other wise you win...

win mentalist

Yo, Mentalists was just plain better, Nature you really need to get better Vocab, and learn how to put it together, so the Winner is Mentalist

um i kno dat yall have already voted but can yall put it in the poll so we could close this damn thing