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discharge vrs. XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
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no crew votes no hate votes u spit first u spit good u might .... u might earn my respect good luck |
AIGHT LETS GO//
DISCHARGE known for 'exposing-lungs' when 'folding-bums' unless you do like people having a seizure and 'HOLD-YOUR-TONGUE'// i'm the 'bomb' you'll get your style 'blown-to-crumbs' and call aurora AGENT SMITH cuz you couldnt handle 'THE CHOZEN1'// answer my challenge? i see that you've 'gotten-bold' but all this text has got your career going nowhere like immigrant's 'WITOUT-THE-BOATS'// your a slick rick 'witout-the-gold ' So i'll have you RUNNING FROM THE NET WITH YOUR HANDS UP like 'SOCCER-GOALS'// if you seen this kid win it's obvious the 'shit-was-luck' so DISCHARGE'll have you like kid's without NICKLELODEON...'MISSING-GUTS// close your 'slut' mouth everything your 'spitting-sucks' naming yourself after a porn star guess you knew you were 'GETTING-FUCKED'// your lines are 'far-fetched' better 'hold-your-distance' and 'bite' while you can cuz these punches will have your 'MOLARS-MISSING'// you seeing me? naw you better 'control-your-visions' and the only time i'm feeling AU is if i'm measuring in the 'SOLAR-SYSTEM'// a bad rep that's all this 'lame-is-holding, plus we all know your skills have been at a stand-still like a 'DAME-THAT'S-POSING'// you should retire holmes the game-is-closed-in' plus your wack so the only WEBSTAR s.o.e will ever recieve is a 'CABLE-MODEM'// NIGGA U WAS LAUGHIN (BY MAIL) NIGGA WHY U LAUGHIN WHEN YO CLOTHES STICK TO YO SHIVERZ// I DONT COME WITH IT// I COME BUST CAPS MAKE U LOOK LIKE A DEAD FISH IN A BLOOD BATH// |
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So Dont Get Confuse Nigga Aight |
i cant believe that im batteling this same bitch toxic verbs//
this cats gonna get smoked like them cali herbs// you have no "toxic words",your ryhmes are just plain "absurd"// your weak,so ive heard,i took-a-look at ya record now im sure// you have a diseas called"wackness" and theres no cure// your not toxic just a little 11 year old computer nerd// your balls havnt droped yet come back when uve matured// your "fucking wack" when i give you advice just listen, use it// your a fucking white trash hillbilly,switch to country music// ur girls with me dont throw a fit,give it up!,ull never even see clit// "uve been hit!" i won and your rhymes are even pre-writ// ur rhymes r shit, kno one wants to hear this"toxic retard" spit// you kno something? you bite rhymes bitch thats called theft// take your wackass crew and leave ,then we wont have any fake mc's left// take a break take a rest! your rhymes are flatter than your girls chest// |
Holy shit man... this battle was realy close... lemme break it down further
Toxic: wordplay=6/10 punches=6/10 flow=7/10 creativity=6/10 total=25 Discharge: wordplay=6/10 punches=7/10 flow=6/10 creativity=7/10 total=26 Close shit.. much props to both.. im just feelin discharge more cuz them punches.. maybe it would of changed if he had went first.. but its all good |
Yo I Know What Dis About Now// Its A Fuckin Crew Battle// Nigga U Neva Told Me Dat// If U Did// I Would Bring Somethng Hot!// Nigga U Neva Told Me//
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i'm a break it down simple
flow - discharge structure - discharge punches - tie opener - toxic closer - discharge OVERALL - discharge i was feelin his verse a little more and i thought he came a little harder with his punches yo return da favour playas on my battles the links are in the sig. |
nice drop both fellaz
discharge u had some tite lyrics and some punches and easy strucutre bestline- cant believe that im batteling this same bitch toxic verbs// this cats gonna get smoked like them cali herbs// ^^ nice start- worsteline-none good job overall verse gets a 9/10 toxic nice drop ok verses and alright structure rhyming needz work sum shit u said neva rhymed bestline-DISCHARGE known for 'exposing-lungs' when 'folding-bums' unless you do like people having a seizure and 'HOLD-YOUR-TONGUE'// i'm the 'bomb' you'll get your style 'blown-to-crumbs' and call aurora AGENT SMITH cuz you couldnt handle 'THE CHOZEN1'// ^^ nice start worsteline-answer my challenge? i see that you've 'gotten-bold' but all this text has got your career going nowhere like immigrant's 'WITOUT-THE-BOATS'// your a slick rick 'witout-the-gold ' So i'll have you RUNNING FROM THE NET WITH YOUR HANDS UP like 'SOCCER-GOALS'// boooo overall yo vere gets a 8/10 winner-discharge |
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it dotn gotta be acrew battle man what ever i dotn care ur crew leadre is leavin anyway cuz he got merked so there is no crew |
Iight Here It Is
Flow=toxic Punches=discharge Wordplay=tie Vocab=discharge Killa Rhymes=discharge Vote =discharge |
Flow/ Discharge
Rhymes/ Discharge Punches/ Discharge vocab/ Toxic verbz Personal/ tie Best line:"uve been hit!" i won and your rhymes are even pre-writ// ur rhymes r shit, kno one wants to hear this"toxic retard" spit// you kno something? you bite rhymes bitch thats called theft// take your wackass crew and leave ,then we wont have any fake mc's left// take a break take a rest! your rhymes are flatter than your girls chest// Toxic Verbz your structures messed up, you probably would have won if it was better My vote : Discharge |
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