check it..feed back please
 

Im here form the chitown so learn how i get em down,
I come harder than a train while you tied to the tracks on the ground,
You can't see me even while you lookin through a telescope
Im deadlier than anthrax and a crackhead on dope
So what is it I ain't battled but come get me
Cause even ya rawest rap line won't hit me
I kill for a thrill on watchin ya drool spill
so amazed by my talent niggas watchin like tipdrill
Im makin niggas go on vacations as permanet
Cause they no they need some serious work in my tournament
Some of these lines thats people spitten im finna lose it
They minds must be going half crazy like musiq
Bitches think they win a battle and they the shit..please
Niggas wanna see me lose just to feel real pleased
Lil kids take in my lesson before they do a teacher
But i don't want nothin like my girl alicia
If bitches really think they burnin up this rap scene
Give me a holla im ready to hit you worse than anything

for someone from chi town this was pretty weak but for a newb it was aight
u lookin for a battle holla

yea..it' is weak

Yo no disrespect shawtie but it needs alot of work, it was really basic an boring, jus being real wit ya

yea it was pretty weak tho.