lungs Vs. Shady1132 (holla)
 

10-15 lines
no d/r or d/s
no hate votes
no prewritting :shoot:

checccccccccccccccccccckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkin iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!1

they say why Lungs, cause im L.yiricly U.ntamed and N.ever G.ettin S.lain
take bitches like shady down hysterically lyricaly fuckin up there brain
i know why u text battle cause your high pitched voice
your 14, wut r tryin to win kids choice
going against me is like going against oj's machetti
cause i verbal chop u up like im mak'n confetti
u should cherish your one win cause here comes another L
my words are so hot youll think your burn'n in hell
shady posers gettin murder and stabbed this young
cause im clos'n and lock'n ur casket with my tounge
tie u up and hang you wtih ur own fuck'n lung

Nigga you must call urself lungs.......like you talk-in-tongues/
I'd cut ur troat so deep,you'd replace ur missing nut with ur adom apple/
My rhymes are so lethal....it feels worse than a Warren Sapp football tackle/
So what if I'm fourteen,I'll still kill u faster than 2+2 on a calculator machine/
You beating me is like Mike Piazza catching A-Rod stealing a base/
It won't happen,u always gon be late.........and u'll never be laid/
So work on ur rhymes,instead of pleasing ur mom,by giving her "vitamin C"/
Leave that shit to me,cause I got a tall orange tree,that she can suck on/
You got nutin she can sit upon,so you giving sex is nutin but a yawn/
So,get a strap on....cause an orgasim is sumtin u'll neva come upon/

uppin

yo dat battle was kinda tight. im gonna give it to lungs because his punch lines were hotter. i like the machetti/confetti line. shady came at him with the last 2 lines but lungs was constant throughout.

Vote= Lungs

uppin

iight this is how it went down

shady1132
flow=5/10
punches=6/10
vocab=4/10
metas=5/10
total=20/40

lungs
flow=8/10
punches=7/10
vocab=6/10
metas=5/10
total=26/40


vote=lungs i was feeling his rap more


vote in my T12U3 K1LlA vs AuthenTiK

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shady...bad structure..But I think your flows came herder than
Lungs....Not complexity for both....Nice vocab..Very understandable.
Nice everything both had....But I think shady had him by a tad....

v/Shady
Return the favor against me vs...True aight for hookin ya up..Its in front lines

uppin

K im gonna have to break it down like this,

Flow: Lungs,
Punches Lungs (shady you just keep repeating urself wiv all the mam sex thing, i didnt like it)
Opener: Shady
Closer: Lungs

Overall: Lungs