TonySelf LetMeExplain
 

Ok here it is
listen to this shit
you find out everything you need to know about the kid
back in the 8th grade i got in fights everyday
come to school see that face now its on o. k .
im reloaded.. another struggle stumble back with emotion
fist of fury
eyesblurry yet i feel like im chokin
this aint suppose to happen time passes perhaps im close
then to dismissin this enemy and makin his time over
u need that 4 leaf clover cuz i roll you like im boulder
rock ya shock ya dead victim ...body colder

hold up...now this second verse i soon dispurse arrays of heat
its just a curse an evil demon who eats lyrics like flesh meat
your dead on your feet
im quite unique when i speek
with various nouns and verbs to get herbs right out they seat
and smoke weed and drink
ive stressed that im the one with facts about my time
recalled from the mind line for line over beat and time
great design
set sail for another tail its about my glory
naw forget it with that topic its just the same old story

yo can i get some feedback

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rhyme large because my mind charged// with weighty matter crazy platters// of junk in my brain. Its really some ballistic crap how rhyme is the characteristics of rap try twist it and get slapped// body hot itch with wet pores time to spit rich metaphors//posing to herds with well chosen words//