CJ vs. Wanna-be Jay
 

Aight, I don't want niggaz to get shit twisted, I battle on elevated, but this lil' dickless prick wanted to talk some shit, so now I gotta son his poor ass. Ok lil' bitch, this is how it's goin' down.

5-15 bars
No hate or d/r votes
No crew votes(I know your whack ass ain't got one, this is just so you won't bitch and to show I don't need it at all)
3-0 TKO even though the mods neva close it
We can check in and drop at the same time, but you prolly a lil' bitch, ima drop in a few, feel free to feed off it if you need to wit your bitch ass.

i dont need to feed off ya punk ass blind spit straight after check in.

Aight, this is how it's goin' down you lil' shit talkin' bitch.

aahhheeemmm, that's I just had to clear my throat, Herbs about to get loked/
Spit or swallow you alway choke, Uz a joke, now I'm leavin' you witout hope./
Name's CJ, you gonna talk about guns, you couldn't see me in your scope,/
Mom Coulda smoked crack through pregnancy, U still couldn't come out dope./
Stumblin' ova your verse like a gimp, In your profile you claim to be a pimp,/
Heard that in you pants youz a shrimp, and that's why girls leave you limp./
Dogg don't you know you could neva wear my name, you only bring shame,/
You on the bench catchin' splinters in yo ass why you watchin' me win the game./
Nigga wanna talk tough, Neva heard of a gangsta from scot-land,/
Isn't that where they blow on pipes, and floss dresses instead of pants?/
Well that's fine 4 U, you prolly feel right at home, Skirts make it easier 4 U 2 Give dome,
That's why you wanna become a priest, cause you can't leave little boys alone./

It's done bitch, spit. And that was str8 freestyle bitch. And What?

And you blacklisted me you lil' bitch? Damn, you a sad lil' herb, now that bullshit gotta pop up everytime I check to see you weak-ass verse? Damn, you fuckin' pussy nigga.

best of both worlds in your biography, i think you got it wrong/
im the common european jay, bitch ass drop out dont know whats goin on/
duh eh um its unnatural to be that dumb, whats that is it cum/
drippin down from your toung, thinkin he is hard wi a gun/
so if you are Hip-Hop, why cant you drop, bitch more like iggy pop/
now this bitch has more experiance than me, ill still drop like im on top/
thats life not a hobbie what a joke, bitch sittin there ready to choke/
better watch your old ass dont have a stroke, fuck this out for a smoke/
mc of da wood, posh ass fag thinks he is from the hood, still in the mood/
welcome to the doggpound, where bodies are found/
mama look i beat a newbie, thought he was gonna go through me/
ok son well done, maby now we can move out to the counTREE.....jay/
hold my hand so you dont go astray, maby lose you when we run away/
guess ill be on ma way, its over, done, finished, time for the fatality/
dont need nothin special but i guess ill use the animality/

its done peace out bitch l8r homie

Lol, first of all, I neva rap about guns, don't claim the hood, and I know you didn't try to come at me wit a weak ass-closer based on fuckin' Mortal Combat. Lol, that's some funnie shit you lil' homo thug. :laugh2:

not the best battle but good for cj. your verse was better clearly. you lyrics made more sence. JAy you just was out of it. i don't know what the hell you were writting. but anyway. my vote still stands:
vote=Cj

yo it was a tight battle but i thought countree had the more devestain punches

dont forget give and take my dawgs got a few that need to be voted on

i'm a break it down simple for this battle

flow
CJ got the flow cuz he kept his shit together with sum funny ass rhymes so i cud really get into his spit.
structure
really both y'all had aight structure but CJ gets it cuz he kept all his shit together the same length bar like a line or two
punches
jay u came stronger than i've seen u do but still CJ took it with hard punches that had killa connection.
creativity
CJ got this cuz he used gud wordplay and threw in sum nice personals with a few multis in there to. jay u had sum nice lines but u did use a couple of made up personals which never work
Opener & Closer
no offense jay but ure opener was a little weak and the closer wud have been aight wit a bit more thought and if the MK shit hadnt been done b4. CJ gud opener, that clearin the throat was funny and u ended sick.

OVERALL
My vote goes to CJ cuz he flat out dominated this battle and it really did show u who was the newbie and who was the veteran rapper.

Return the favour playas
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i knew i was beat from the start man u been at this shit for a while ive only been here for a week or so. cheers anyway

cj got thsi with way better punchs some of the mshits was hot and you had good flow bars were nice some over worded alil bit but wordplay was therea lil bit just elevate on your vocab and whatever else i missed lol

jay dogg not a verygood drop from you after readi nyo other shits this was kinda weak no punchs really connected an you used a mortal combat punch lmao wtf man you aitn bring much to this battle brah just keep elvatin an stay around your skill level