Abortion (Feedback wanted)
 

New to this forum, feedback is apprieciated

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Feeling unwanted
Feeling like a chore
Feeling not needed
Not wanted no more
Feeling unloved
Like I'm a weight
One time mistake
A one night date
An accident, maybe
To never get old
Don't want a baby
To love and to hold
One night of 'love'
Making me as result
Why kill me today
It wasn't my fault
Feeling like I'm hated
Like I am to blame
Can't rid of me easily
Like this a game
To kill me before birth
I'm the unwanted other
Not giving me the chance
To even call you mother

its go and you know i feel the same at times but its never a mistake for two people to make a baby and i believe that the ones who grow up wit problems become some wat betta peopl but anyway its good and keep on writing.

deep deep deep shit i liked it good job