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Black Thief 05-01-04 12:39 PM

Black Thief vs. Quickpunch
 
Aiiight
min 10 bars
no crew, d/r, recycled, or hate votes
no biting
all votes must be explained

quickpunch 05-01-04 12:40 PM

NOOO I SAID 10-20 LINES....SO U CAN GO UP 2 20 LINES...SO DONT USE IT AGAINTS ME IF I GO UP 2 20...this is my check in....AND UR SPITTIN 1ST

Black Thief 05-01-04 01:22 PM

Im stealin this win...its black thief...aka. black robber
Movin up to ATL to pummel Quickpunh into peach cobbler(Georgia Peach)
Niggas a middle weight but scared to go to elevated front lines
I only spit one time while QP cut, paste, and front-lines
Is he soft jabs or really quickpunch
Devourin ya lines like a sick lunch
whoever heard of a real rapper tha plays soccer?Im talkin to u
this nigga tha rappin version of Freddy Adu
Quick to punch ya lights out(quickpunch)leav ya body in seizure
Slaughterin you to tha point where it aint no job its leisure
leave this nigga toasted
bust nuts and heat on ya leave ya "almond-roasted"
Have you holdin ya stomach like you ate a sick lunch
Game over Im a heavy hitter...no comp....you a quickpunch

quickpunch 05-01-04 01:29 PM

LOL HAHA NICE SPIT....HERES MY SHIT.....ENJOY KIDS...NICE BATTLE

Take a pill before you're worse, what you say is stupid
Only way you'd be my match is if you paid cupid
Coming into this cocky?... I'll KO you but dont push me
Otherwise I'll merk ur ass, But I dont usually eat pussy
Your life is like existence of Bob, There is literally no hope
Hang with QP in a battle? OK, I'll even show you the rope
Damn kiddo, How you even think you can beat me
Push ur buttons for better verses, starting with the delete key
Clash of the titans, Lets make this legendary and come nice
And since both sides must be ill, I'll just post my verse twice
games dismantling, im decaying you like unemployment
pretend you wrote this and read for ur own enjoyment
Ur the definition of dope? well websters isn't working yet
A searching vet pays tribute to skills.. so BLACK THIEF is in debt
even from a birds eye view, its clear that ur a whack herb from the start
i'll crush your organs out your mouth, so you can say what’s on ur heart
Somebody Get Through To The Guy Im On Another Dimension
I Got There By Talent, You Spat ur Heart And Barely Got Attention
cut text - and edit it myself, so at least his rating's something
i described his skills best in my sig, simply by stating nothing

PoLiFicK 05-01-04 01:39 PM

i liked both verses both came hard

black nice punches and nice word usage nice personals

bestline-Im stealin this win...its black thief...aka. black robber
Movin up to ATL to pummel Quickpunh into peach cobbler(Georgia Peach)

worsteline-Niggas a middle weight but scared to go to elevated front lines
I only spit one time while QP cut, paste, and front-lines

neva use da same word twice

overall your verse gets a 7/10

quick nice punches nice structure nice personals nice vocab and nice flow

bestline-Take a pill before you're worse, what you say is stupid
Only way you'd be my match is if you paid cupid

nice start

worsteline-none nice drop

overall yo verse gets a 9/10

winner-quick punch

quickpunch 05-01-04 01:41 PM

thanks for the honest vote.....keep it comin...i must say this battle will be close...his shit was hott also...NICE SPIT BLACK....pce

DeLeon 05-01-04 01:43 PM

yo I cant vote on this but yall can drop a vote on this right here

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119092

L.I. 05-01-04 02:02 PM

My Vote
 
Im stealin this win...its black thief...aka. black robber
Movin up to ATL to pummel Quickpunh into peach cobbler(Georgia Peach)
Nice...
Niggas a middle weight but scared to go to elevated front lines
I only spit one time while QP cut, paste, and front-lines
lol nice punch...
Is he soft jabs or really quickpunch
Devourin ya lines like a sick lunch
Nothin really there...
whoever heard of a real rapper tha plays soccer?Im talkin to u
this nigga tha rappin version of Freddy Adu
Nahh...
Quick to punch ya lights out(quickpunch)leav ya body in seizure
Slaughterin you to tha point where it aint no job its leisure
sick...
leave this nigga toasted
bust nuts and heat on ya leave ya "almond-roasted"
stretched...
Have you holdin ya stomach like you ate a sick lunch
Game over Im a heavy hitter...no comp....you a quickpunch
this was ur third bar basically...

Okay u had a good verse...sustainment wasnt there though...u started off really well than fell of...but u had a good verse wit sum solid punches...one stretched line that fucked up your flow...so id give ur verse a 6 out of 10...

Take a pill before you're worse, what you say is stupid
Only way you'd be my match is if you paid cupid
hahaha....
Coming into this cocky?... I'll KO you but dont push me
Otherwise I'll merk ur ass, But I dont usually eat pussy
pretty nice punch...
Your life is like existence of Bob, There is literally no hope
Hang with QP in a battle? OK, I'll even show you the rope
not feelin it...
Damn kiddo, How you even think you can beat me
Push ur buttons for better verses, starting with the delete key
good punch...
Clash of the titans, Lets make this legendary and come nice
And since both sides must be ill, I'll just post my verse twice
not feelin this one either...
games dismantling, im decaying you like unemployment
pretend you wrote this and read for ur own enjoyment
its ok...no good hard hittin punch tho...
Ur the definition of dope? well websters isn't working yet
A searching vet pays tribute to skills.. so BLACK THIEF is in debt
nice...
even from a birds eye view, its clear that ur a whack herb from the start
i'll crush your organs out your mouth, so you can say what’s on ur heart
not that great...
Somebody Get Through To The Guy Im On Another Dimension
I Got There By Talent, You Spat ur Heart And Barely Got Attention
hahaha...
cut text - and edit it myself, so at least his rating's something
i described his skills best in my sig, simply by stating nothing
HOT...
Aight your verse had more hard hitting punches....better flow....u took this wit ur closer though....that thing was hot....nice spits by both but quickpunch had better punches and thats a main focus in a battle.....peace...

Vote - quickpunch

HeXen 05-01-04 02:04 PM

ok dis was a close abttle...both were week...quickpunch ..punches were ok some werwe abit played...vocab was ko but cld be better...persoanls...not realy dat were affective...wordplay..ok...overall..5/10...work on some multis...
Black Thief...ot so good bro..punchs were wack and most played...vocab waas ok but not realy wortha secound thought...personal...erm..none there...wordplay prob ur bet aspect....overall3/10..keep it up...
v/punch

quickpunch 05-01-04 02:05 PM

thanks yall...keep the votes comin...dont sleep on this...honest well explained votes only...pce

2Face 05-01-04 02:16 PM

honestly i cant say who won
your raps your raw as hell
man flow and etc....
raw as hell
but i would QP bet punchlines at each 2 verses

quickpunch 05-01-04 02:26 PM

yo spiky that vote wont count dumbass..EXPLAIN UR VOTES..DONT JUST SAY SHIT LIKE THAT...DAMN I HATE NEWBS CANT DO SHIT RIGHT....ANYWAYS UPPIN....SO YALL HIT THIS UP...WILL RETURN THE FAVOR WITH AN HONEST VOTE IN UR BATTLES..PCE

quickpunch 05-01-04 02:42 PM

yo still lookin to K.O THIS NIGGA...ALTHOUGH I THOUGHT THIS WOULD BE A CLOSE BATTLE...KEEP THE HONEST VOTES COMIN...UPPIN YALL

K-Trin 05-01-04 04:00 PM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121594
^^vote in my battle

Blac theif-opener was not that good.weak structure and flow.punches were really bad.

Quick-good flow/structure.But ur punches was kinda bad in my opinion.It just lacked sumtin.But it's till better than black's

Overall-Quick had this easily


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