ReLiC Vs. Revell
 

ight 15 line max 30 mins each after check...no feeding no recyclin no biting no d/r's

check in

checkin in................

Ok 30 minutes to post startin now it doesnt matter whos is posted first ill do mine in like 10-15.

Ok 30 minutes to post startin now it doesnt matter whos is posted first ill do mine in like 10-15.

ight here

You are now going to be Introduced to a Lethal [Blast]
Your thought process is Slow need me to stop cause im so [Fast]

Twista got a record but im like NASA's next [Rocket]
I blast Poeple off the Mic i back my shit up so i Can [Talk-It]

Your a Middle man for a Small timer then why come at me [Revell]
You should have known ud get Burnt b/c ur not close to my [Level]
But after i git u with a Lyrical Inferno ull call me the iLLest [Devil]

Ur punches hit like Water they dont evan make [Statistics]
While you shoot a Flow like water gins im shootin like [Ballististics]

Maybe you should think twice before you accept [Call-Outs]
i just dropped u like Nuc in one of my Lyrical [Fall-Outs]

there it is...

You now have 13 minutes to post ur Verse before its a DQ.

fuk this guy called relic cause his raps are old,
he be coughin n choakin like he be taking a load,

so why dont you take notes while i rhyme,
and see if for once you can make a proper line,

this relic, not sellin or gettin it,
you mamas angelic, when she poppin some cheeries on it,

you think i gonna choose, to lose to you?!?
boy you got another think commin when i get the big double u,

Basically, you aint lyrically, able to shoot at me,
cause im the real hit man with the advanced ability

Ok not to shabby uppin votes now peeps.Ill return with Honost votes rev prolly will too.

Put the battle in ur sig Rev so we can get votes here.

Uppin :)

uppin will return honest votes....................

uppin

You are now going to be Introduced to a Lethal [Blast]
Your thought process is Slow need me to stop cause im so [Fast]
no. just no.
Twista got a record but im like NASA's next [Rocket]
I blast Poeple off the Mic i back my shit up so i Can [Talk-It]
no.
Your a Middle man for a Small timer then why come at me [Revell]
You should have known ud get Burnt b/c ur not close to my [Level]
no.
But after i git u with a Lyrical Inferno ull call me the iLLest [Devil]
why is this here?
Ur punches hit like Water they dont evan make [Statistics]
While you shoot a Flow like water gins im shootin like [Ballististics]
could have done a lot better, first line sucked
Maybe you should think twice before you accept [Call-Outs]
i just dropped u like Nuc in one of my Lyrical [Fall-Outs]
at least you tried a meta here. but it was still no good.


fuk this guy called relic cause his raps are old,
he be coughin n choakin like he be taking a load,
ok personal, could have done better with the concept. the second line sucked
so why dont you take notes while i rhyme,
and see if for once you can make a proper line,
ok.. this is just weak.
this relic, not sellin or gettin it,
you mamas angelic, when she poppin some cheeries on it,
terrible.
you think i gonna choose, to lose to you?!?
boy you got another think commin when i get the big double u,
this is retarded
Basically, you aint lyrically, able to shoot at me,
cause im the real hit man with the advanced ability
two thumbs down.

well, both verses totaly and utterly lacked any good punches, but the second at least had a personal, so give the battle to revel.

uppin even newbies gotta get votes how else we gonna get better???

My Vote
 

bar by bar breakdown

You are now going to be Introduced to a Lethal [Blast]
Your thought process is Slow need me to stop cause im so [Fast]
not that great...
Twista got a record but im like NASA's next [Rocket]
I blast Poeple off the Mic i back my shit up so i Can [Talk-It]
no punch...
Your a Middle man for a Small timer then why come at me [Revell]
You should have known ud get Burnt b/c ur not close to my [Level]
But after i git u with a Lyrical Inferno ull call me the iLLest [Devil]
nothin...
Ur punches hit like Water they dont evan make [Statistics]
While you shoot a Flow like water gins im shootin like [Ballististics]
i aint feelin ur punches...
Maybe you should think twice before you accept [Call-Outs]
i just dropped u like Nuc in one of my Lyrical [Fall-Outs]
its aight...

fuk this guy called relic cause his raps are old,
he be coughin n choakin like he be taking a load,
culda gon places wit the 1st line...
so why dont you take notes while i rhyme,
and see if for once you can make a proper line,
ok punch...
this relic, not sellin or gettin it,
you mamas angelic, when she poppin some cheeries on it,
naaaa...
you think i gonna choose, to lose to you?!?
boy you got another think commin when i get the big double u,
no punch...
Basically, you aint lyrically, able to shoot at me,
cause im the real hit man with the advanced ability
no punch...

weak battle...very weak...but vote goes to revell b/c he had punches....

Vote - Revell

breakdown:

relic:

You are now going to be Introduced to a Lethal [Blast]
Your thought process is Slow need me to stop cause im so [Fast]
^^ok opener could have been better 6/10
Twista got a record but im like NASA's next [Rocket]
I blast Poeple off the Mic i back my shit up so i Can [Talk-It]
^^more filler than punch 4/10
Your a Middle man for a Small timer then why come at me [Revell]
You should have known ud get Burnt b/c ur not close to my [Level]
But after i git u with a Lyrical Inferno ull call me the iLLest [Devil]
^^ good punch no need for the 3rd line tho 7/10
Ur punches hit like Water they dont evan make [Statistics]
While you shoot a Flow like water gins im shootin like [Ballististics]
^^good punch original 6/10
Maybe you should think twice before you accept [Call-Outs]
i just dropped u like Nuc in one of my Lyrical [Fall-Outs]
^^ ok finisher nothing to great 6/10

overall: 29/50

revell:

fuk this guy called relic cause his raps are old,
he be coughin n choakin like he be taking a load,
^^ played punch just worded different 4/10
so why dont you take notes while i rhyme,
and see if for once you can make a proper line,
^^ok punch nothing too great 5/10
this relic, not sellin or gettin it,
you mamas angelic, when she poppin some cheeries on it,
^^filler ass punch nothing at all...nice try for wordplay 5/10
you think i gonna choose, to lose to you?!?
boy you got another think commin when i get the big double u,
^^ok punch "doube U" line is played tho 6/10
Basically, you aint lyrically, able to shoot at me,
cause im the real hit man with the advanced ability
^^ good finisher best bar in this verse 8/10

overall: 28/50

good verses from both...relic u need to elevate a lil and revell u need to elevate a lil bit more use more original punches vote: relic

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