sun jian vs. S.carter
 

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crew votes
you go first
verse due in 30 min.

oh and 10 - 20 lines

Seem like today everybody wanna rap
Like this chinesse nigga wishing he was balck

I served crack in the streets you ain't put in no work
Get yo ass hurt lookin worse than Dirt Mcguirt

My rap skills is ill plus I spit it real
You a wanna be superstar like Cypress hill

My block got rocks that a sale more than you
You couldn't spin a record even if you was Dj Clue

Im the one like the Matrix S.Carter ain't one to play with
Stuck on the basics you cant beat me just face it

It's comin to an end Get a win you chances slim
Fuck with me you be on your back like Lil Kim

Im the Micheal Jordan of this rap shit you get slap bitch
Just quit I bet a undercover fag just like Micheal Vick

Rap is streets homie we don't except yo kind
You betta off tryin to sing sign a deal with ginuwine

you whack scarter.
stick with your clothin line five starter.
or go get your cousin aaron carter.
yo you crazy call 1-800 charter.
look at all the pain ive inflicted.
did 5 lines this nigga already addictied.
you dont want to mess with the tiger of jing dong.
yeah you a hustler runnin around sellin thongs.
for you this is gonna blow.
the closes youd had to sex is sniffin your moms panny hoes.
on this site you the micheal jackson
runnin around rapein newbies to meet your satifaction.
and again your rhymes are whack.
oh yeah nigga im black!

uppin for votes yall

S.Carter
I served crack in the streets you ain't put in no work
Get yo ass hurt lookin worse than Dirt Mcguirt
-nice bar

My block got rocks that a sale more than you
You couldn't spin a record even if you was Dj Clue
-nice

Im the one like the Matrix S.Carter ain't one to play with
Stuck on the basics you cant beat me just face it
-nice


Sun Jian
you dont want to mess with the tiger of jing dong.
yeah you a hustler runnin around sellin thongs.
-nice
and thats about all you had...

vote=S.Carter because he had better wordplay,punches, and a better flow all together..

s.carter came harder then sin......Sin yall both had structure....SIn..Was conplexy
S had everything thats better.....Punches came harder.....SIn you had some
weak punches....Keep elevatin.....S. had everything better includin vocab similies and metaphores....Both keep elevatin and work on punches.....Exspecially you tiget or sin what ever your name is......

sprry for 2nd post but can ya hit up my battle against born2spitt...http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121746

Seem like today everybody wanna rap
Like this chinesse nigga wishing he was balck
no.
I served crack in the streets you ain't put in no work
Get yo ass hurt lookin worse than Dirt Mcguirt
um.. no
My rap skills is ill plus I spit it real
You a wanna be superstar like Cypress hill
blah
My block got rocks that a sale more than you
You couldn't spin a record even if you was Dj Clue
blah
Im the one like the Matrix S.Carter ain't one to play with
Stuck on the basics you cant beat me just face it
blah
It's comin to an end Get a win you chances slim
Fuck with me you be on your back like Lil Kim
yeah...
Im the Micheal Jordan of this rap shit you get slap bitch
Just quit I bet a undercover fag just like Micheal Vick
Micheal Vick? wtf
Rap is streets homie we don't except yo kind
You betta off tryin to sing sign a deal with ginuwine
half decent


you whack scarter.
stick with your clothin line five starter.
um.. could have doen way better with the concept
or go get your cousin aaron carter.
yo you crazy call 1-800 charter.
wtf?
look at all the pain ive inflicted.
did 5 lines this nigga already addictied.
blah
you dont want to mess with the tiger of jing dong.
yeah you a hustler runnin around sellin thongs.
wtf
for you this is gonna blow.
the closes youd had to sex is sniffin your moms panny hoes.
no
on this site you the micheal jackson
runnin around rapein newbies to meet your satifaction.
no
and again your rhymes are whack.
oh yeah nigga im black!
no

this sucked hard, first guy sucked less. had rhymes that made sense. v/first guy

uppin for votes....................................

ok check it

s.carter got this shit pretty easy not a very good verse but keep dropin an elevatin work on your punchs creativite and wordplay to up ya skills and sun jian man you aitn got nothin in this battle either you aint got no punchs to bring again WORK ON YOUR PUNCHS REAL BAD just keep elvatin and you get better

pretty weak but ima go with sun jan they both came with lakcing pucnhes an dnot connecitno ni iw asnt feeling s carters structure either it dint flow well and i was getting the point of his verse sounded like his sister wrote it.

My Vote
 

Seem like today everybody wanna rap
Like this chinesse nigga wishing he was balck
NOT WORKING
I served crack in the streets you ain't put in no work
Get yo ass hurt lookin worse than Dirt Mcguirt
LIL MULTI IN THERE STILL WACK
My rap skills is ill plus I spit it real
You a wanna be superstar like Cypress hill
A LIL PUNCH
My block got rocks that a sale more than you
You couldn't spin a record even if you was Dj Clue
GAY
Im the one like the Matrix S.Carter ain't one to play with
Stuck on the basics you cant beat me just face it
LIL MULTI BORING PUNCH
It's comin to an end Get a win you chances slim
Fuck with me you be on your back like Lil Kim
ZZZ
Im the Micheal Jordan of this rap shit you get slap bitch
Just quit I bet a undercover fag just like Micheal Vick
NA
Rap is streets homie we don't except yo kind
You betta off tryin to sing sign a deal with ginuwine
NOPPE

you whack scarter.
stick with your clothin line five starter.
HORRIBLE AND STRETCHED
or go get your cousin aaron carter.
yo you crazy call 1-800 charter.
WTF?
look at all the pain ive inflicted.
did 5 lines this nigga already addictied.
NO PUNCH
you dont want to mess with the tiger of jing dong.
yeah you a hustler runnin around sellin thongs.
GAY
for you this is gonna blow.
the closes youd had to sex is sniffin your moms panny hoes.
STRETCHED LIKE RUBBER
on this site you the micheal jackson
runnin around rapein newbies to meet your satifaction.
PLAYED OUT
and again your rhymes are whack.
oh yeah nigga im black!
FINALLY ITS OVER

Okay vote for s.carter because he had better flow, punches(even tho they were wack).....

Vote - s.carter