discharge vrs. Shady1132
 

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no crew
no d/r
bo hate
no bullshit
no unexplained
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good luck

yo look foward to seeing this battle

yo discharge drop an honest vote on this

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121759

i cant that guy is in my crew and if theres anycrew votes you automatically get banned new rule

Nigga,you call urself discharge..........like you take pills to "enlarge"/
It smaller than my pinky.............yet you think it too large/
You should just quit.....your raps more annying than a orchestra pit/
U couldn't catch with a mit,install-a-toilet kit,nor hawk-and-spit/
So what make you think u can rhyme,it just a waste-of-time/
So I'm a tell you ahead-of-time,that u should head to checkout-line/
And get back to ur pittiful life,of shaving your balls with a table knife/
Where you have an invisible wife,where it's not man-and wife/
But instead wife&cowife,and where you get picked on by ur peers/
So go watch cheers............ and jerk off to Britney Spears/
Then you shop at SEARS.....wit that retarted mom&dad that u got/
And watch TOM&Jerry..............but can't understand the plot/

come on nigga....................stop feeding off my fuckin verse

you 2-9 by know u should kno u cant beat me or even get your 3rd win//
ill play your ass like a violen,and break you like that wall in berlin//
and your girl even hate you cuz your dick is as small as a sefety-pin//
u wanna battle go ahead and choose,but the truth is you will lose//
you got "battle blues"cuz your battles are like your sex life,"a blown fuse"//
u battle me bitch i daze and confuse,and your weak ass rhymes fail to amuse//
your lyrics wouldnt be heavy if u gave them cement shoes,this battle was a"joy cruise"//
ill throw you some clues, this is the biggest ass beatin ever,put that one the world news//
i have really bad news,youve just been murdered by this lyrical"psyhco"//
good news,i saved lots money on my car insurrance by switchin to geicko//

uppin

Shady:

Flow - ok ur flow was really good...

Punches - you had a couple of punches and the ones u had didn't hit all that hard...

Personals - ok you had a few personals here and there but the ones that u did have hit pretty hard... this was ur best area in the battle... espicialls
Nigga,you call urself discharge..........like you take pills to "enlarge"/
It smaller than my pinky.............yet you think it too large/

Vocab - you've got a pretty good vocab... u used pretty good wording...

Originality - some of ur lines were original... played out pretty good... over all 7/10


Discharge:

Flow - u had really good flow... ur structure was good aswell which added 2 ur flow

Punches - you had a bunch of punchlines and they hit really hard... this is one of ur better areas... espicially
you got "battle blues"cuz your battles are like your sex life,"a blown fuse"//
your lyrics wouldnt be heavy if u gave them cement shoes,this battle was a"joy cruise"//

Personals - you had a good amount of personals... the ones that u had were extremly good... this would have 2 be ur best area in this battle... espicially
and your girl even hate you cuz your dick is as small as a sefety-pin//
u wanna battle go ahead and choose,but the truth is you will lose//

Vocab - you had increadiable vocab from ur half... great usuage of words...

Originality - most of ur lines were pretty original... played out well... over all 8.5/10

Winner: Discharge
because his personals and punchlines hit alot harder... and he used much more complex vocab....

Shady:
Nigga,you call urself discharge..........like you take pills to "enlarge"/
It smaller than my pinky.............yet you think it too large/
-nice start
Then you shop at SEARS.....wit that retarted mom&dad that u got/
And watch TOM&Jerry..............but can't understand the plot/
-plain gay... not a good closer at all
overall:6/10


you 2-9 by know u should kno u cant beat me or even get your 3rd win//
ill play your ass like a violen,and break you like that wall in berlin//
-nice start
u wanna battle go ahead and choose,but the truth is you will lose//
you got "battle blues"cuz your battles are like your sex life,"a blown fuse"//
u battle me bitch i daze and confuse,and your weak ass rhymes fail to amuse//
-tuff punches right there
i have really bad news,youve just been murdered by this lyrical"psyhco"//
good news,i saved lots money on my car insurrance by switchin to geicko//
-the first bar of closer was good... but then the 2nd is forced...
overall:8/10

my vote goes to discharge for the flow,punches, and multis... props to both

ok check it

shady you started off good and then kept fallin off the further and further your verse got work on staying consistent with your punchs and personals and keep your rhyme scheme goin and try to add atleast a lil bit wordplay

discharge kinda the opposite your punchs stayed consitent as you went never realy did fall of but you did have some filler lines overall a pretty good verse nice shit just work on better personals and harder punchs

Nigga,you call urself discharge..........like you take pills to "enlarge"/
It smaller than my pinky.............yet you think it too large/
naa...wack
You should just quit.....your raps more annying than a orchestra pit/
U couldn't catch with a mit,install-a-toilet kit,nor hawk-and-spit/
nope
So what make you think u can rhyme,it just a waste-of-time/
So I'm a tell you ahead-of-time,that u should head to checkout-line/
decent...
And get back to ur pittiful life,of shaving your balls with a table knife/
Where you have an invisible wife,where it's not man-and wife/
2nd line stated the same thing
But instead wife&cowife,and where you get picked on by ur peers/
So go watch cheers............ and jerk off to Britney Spears/
not workin
Then you shop at SEARS.....wit that retarted mom&dad that u got/
And watch TOM&Jerry..............but can't understand the plot/
just gay

Your verse was boring....u jus stated the gayest shit....elevate on punches....use personals.....go to tutorials cause thats the way u r gonna elevate....

you 2-9 by know u should kno u cant beat me or even get your 3rd win//
ill play your ass like a violen,and break you like that wall in berlin//
played
and your girl even hate you cuz your dick is as small as a sefety-pin//
u wanna battle go ahead and choose,but the truth is you will lose//
not hard hitting
you got "battle blues"cuz your battles are like your sex life,"a blown fuse"//
u battle me bitch i daze and confuse,and your weak ass rhymes fail to amuse//
gettin better
your lyrics wouldnt be heavy if u gave them cement shoes,this battle was a"joy cruise"//
ill throw you some clues, this is the biggest ass beatin ever,put that one the world news//
na
i have really bad news,youve just been murdered by this lyrical"psyhco"//
good news,i saved lots money on my car insurrance by switchin to geicko//
haha

Vote - discharge....he had a couple punches...sum multis....good flow....the closer was funny.....nice spit but keep elevatin cuz u got werk to do....

Shady was good then u lost track and Dis seemed to keep it all together well with flow and punches.

Shady=5/10
Dis=7/10