~~~CHUCK' VS T12U3 K1LlA~~~
 

This Is The Rulez
No Crew Votes
No Dick Ridin Votes
No Hatin Votes
We Each Spitt Once
U Spitt First
10-20 Lines

a yo......
you rhyme like poppi' w/o the spinich
i read some of yo shit and i think its sick'nin
i dont even think this verse i should finish
cuz just lookin at yo name i cant help but start grinnin
so get out the way or get moved
out yo place, cuz im takin dat space- and aint shit you could do
you think you slick, im knowin by lookin at yo rules
i spit first-bitch you dont know me, and you tryin to get a clue
but im comin hard like a lawyer dats a jew/
leavin shit for you to try and prosecute/
GAME OVER... but you not lil flip im jus leavin you screwed
you're nuthin-so once i kill you, you wont make the news
ill stomp on yo verse like my words are tim boots
got Pac on ya shit thinkin your flow dat lethal
jus go in a corner sit in a position called fetal
YOU ARE GARBAGE, but dats sumthin i think you already knew
read the name off the i.m.- im NUMBA 1 so take 2

Ill Renegade~And~Rent~A~Blade..Basically Diminish~Your~Existence//
Kill You And Win This Gay Ass Battle Before I Finish~A~Sentence//
If tha game was ya "dick", you couldnt "GET UP"on this rap shit//
Youll "never SURPASS my BARS" like "chin-ups from a fat-chick"//
Attendance of sharks, I got this Kid Surrounded' like the Axis-to-the-Earth//
Chuck’ Beatin ME is 'Unheard OF' like the 'Planning-of-his-Birth'//
Ur not ill son, go get some lyrics out ur prewrittin stash//
U could have a career like eminem, but ur still trailer trash//
The flow-is-ill, glocks on the hip poppin-ur-brain//
Chuck 'Standing on and Xbox' tryin to be on top-of-his-game//
Punches infiltrate-ur-face, make u feel-me-nigga//
Kill u while ur 'Eatin-FROOT-LOOPS' so i can be a 'CEREAL KILLA' //
I see u from the "Windy City" but ur raps aint "Windy"//
Dogg ur rap couldnt even blow me, shit it can barely offend me//
Connectin ya wit my final strike to leave ya in broken segments//
If 1 line will fuck this bitch up then a verse will leave him pregnant//

Chuck:
YOU ARE GARBAGE, but dats sumthin i think you already knew
read the name off the i.m.- im NUMBA 1 so take 2
-best line that u had... and it still wasnt all that good
overall u slipped a whole lot.. ur flow was weak and not good punches


Killa:
Ill Renegade~And~Rent~A~Blade..Basically Diminish~Your~Existence//
Kill You And Win This Gay Ass Battle Before I Finish~A~Sentence//
-nice start
If tha game was ya "dick", you couldnt "GET UP"on this rap shit//
Youll "never SURPASS my BARS" like "chin-ups from a fat-chick"//
Attendance of sharks, I got this Kid Surrounded' like the Axis-to-the-Earth//
Chuck’ Beatin ME is 'Unheard OF' like the 'Planning-of-his-Birth'//
Ur not ill son, go get some lyrics out ur prewrittin stash//
U could have a career like eminem, but ur still trailer trash//
-overall good punches
I see u from the "Windy City" but ur raps aint "Windy"//
Dogg ur rap couldnt even blow me, shit it can barely offend me//
-nice punch about him

overall killa had a tight flow.. i felt the flow cmin in my mind and it was tight.. the punches also had me rollin..

vote=killa

uppin for some votes..............................

Not Another Sleeper Cmon Pplz.....................

Kinda one sided battle:
Chuck...your whole verse was weak as hell, there's nothing for me to quote cuz you had no punches in your verse, no personals, no wordplay, basic vocab, no creativity, you should practice for about a month then come back to this, hopefully then you can drop somethin' worth reading.
T12....good verse
Ill Renegade~And~Rent~A~Blade..Basically Diminish~Your~Existence//
Kill You And Win This Gay Ass Battle Before I Finish~A~Sentence//

Nice Opener, jump started your verse

If tha game was ya "dick", you couldnt "GET UP"on this rap shit//
Youll "never SURPASS my BARS" like "chin-ups from a fat-chick"//

Nice follow, these two killed everything he had

the rest was ok, you kinda tapered off but good drop
Flow: T1
Structure: T1
Punches: T1
Personals: T1
Creativity: T1
Opener: T1
Closer: T1
Vote: T1

Uppin For Some Votes..............................

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Ppl Vote An Honest Vote Cuz I Dont Want No D/q And Plz Explain Really Well U Vote Here And I Will Return And Honest Favor!

breakdown

FLOW
t1 took this cuz he had better rhythm to his spit makin it easier to understand and get into it.
STRUCTURE
t1 took it again cuz his was nicely structured and chuck u had a gud one to but not as gud as t1's
PUNCHES
punches were gud but t1 came a hella lot stronger than chuck, u cud use some elevatin chuck cuz t1 slaughtered u. gud use of wordplay and personals and a bit of creativity shown in ure spit!!

Vote - T1

Yo Dogg Thx For The Honest Vote Ppl Vote In Here And Explain Really Well And I Well Return And Honest Vote In Ur Battle!!

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121899
^^vote

flow-KILLA
punches-KILLA
creativity-KILLA
complexity-KILLA

vote-KILLa(easily)

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Omg Not Again Cmon Ppl Give Some Good Reason Cuz Im Getting Tired Of My Votes Being D/q

T1: u owned this battle

Vocab and structure:
great vocab packed ur lines wit good wording...

Punchlines:ok u had alot of punchlines....... all of which were at a high level... these ones killed CHUCK
Kill u while ur 'Eatin-FROOT-LOOPS' so i can be a 'CEREAL KILLA' //
I see u from the "Windy City" but ur raps aint "Windy"//

Personals:
Ur not ill son, go get some lyrics out ur prewrittin stash//
U could have a career like eminem, but ur still trailer trash//
those were the best ones u had... i would say good personals from ur side...

Begging and Ending:
your beggining was good and u held it up throughout the battle and ended strong...


Chuck:

Pretty weak battle....... everything u spit was weak and basic vacab, personals, punchlines, originality all were basic and weak... u should practice more...

can't really qoute that much stuff but w.e.

Punchlines and Personals: barely any and the few u had were sorta pathetic...
GAME OVER... but you not lil flip im jus leavin you screwed
you're nuthin-so once i kill you, you wont make the news
those were actually ok lines...

Vocab and structure:
ok ur vocab pretty basic... and ur structure was good... try using more complex words and using bigger ones...

Flow:
ur ryhmes flowed ok... once again u should work on this... but yea ur flow wasn't that bad........ over all 6/10

Winner: T1
because he used alot more complex vocab and he would have 1 the battle wit these 4 lines
Ur not ill son, go get some lyrics out ur prewrittin stash//
U could have a career like eminem, but ur still trailer trash//
Kill u while ur 'Eatin-FROOT-LOOPS' so i can be a 'CEREAL KILLA' //
I see u from the "Windy City" but ur raps aint "Windy"//
also, Chuck didn't stand much of a chance everything he spit was much 2 basic...

Ill Renegade~And~Rent~A~Blade..Basically Diminish~Your~Existence//
Kill You And Win This Gay Ass Battle Before I Finish~A~Sentence//
If tha game was ya "dick", you couldnt "GET UP"on this rap shit//
Youll "never SURPASS my BARS" like "chin-ups from a fat-chick"//
Attendance of sharks, I got this Kid Surrounded' like the Axis-to-the-Earth//
Chuck’ Beatin ME is 'Unheard OF' like the 'Planning-of-his-Birth'//
Ur not ill son, go get some lyrics out ur prewrittin stash//

these 3 lines were better than chuck whole verse. killa ya flow was awesome. nice battle. amazin punches, u came way hard than u need to keep it up

got Pac on ya shit thinkin your flow dat lethal
jus go in a corner sit in a position called fetal
YOU ARE GARBAGE, but dats sumthin i think you already knew
read the name off the i.m.- im NUMBA 1 so take 2

ok lines. very basic tho.
try to improve flow and get some better vocab

v/killa