Lucky7 Vs ReLiC
 

ight 15 line max no D/r hate votes ...No bitin recyclin

Check in and u can spit first or me u choose.

checc checc...i dont give a fuck who spits first just start typin yours cuz imma start typin mine.

ight

This kid just got on the forum already tryin to Diss [Rappers]
You need luck to touch me like the Manhattan [Jaspers]

Your weak disses dont evan touch Poeple u should [Get-Some-Advice]
Ima Hit u with these Cold Flows and watch u [Sit-On-Ice]

Im hitten u with my Eyes closed and 1 hand behind my [Back]
Im Knocken u harder then Jevon Kerse on a QB [Sack]

You need a Sledge hammer to Break my Untouchable [Destruction]
Im here bitch u fell me i dont need a Formal [IntroDuction]

7?whats that for the number of bars it took me to [Smash-You]
It didnt take much thought for me to step up and [Bash-You]

Dont

aight....

Beat 7?.. Dreams Come True But Ya Wish Wont..Try Ta 'Handle' 7 And Get Ya Wrists Broke
...Red Like Reverse Crips Yo..An Its Sad Ya Verse Was Nothin But Played Lines An Piss Jokes
...It's True Too!...
...Look In Tha Mirror Ta See Whose Tha Worst Kidd..Get Placed In a Hearst Bitch
...And Even Worse Shit Is That I Spit 2 Bars An Had More Punches Than Ya Whole Verse Did
...Damn!...
...Ropes Meet Tha Noose Wit Ya Head Queer..Pussy!..We All Knew Ya Bled Fear
...Fuck Haters!..Im 'Shakin Hat Off' Like Doin That Harlem Move Wit Loose HeadGear!
...*Harlem Shake*...
...But Humor Aside..Compare Ta Me Ya Trash When Tha Rumors Subside..7's Fluent Wit Lines
...-N Ya Said It Yaself Kidd... You'd Even Say a Whack Verse Was Hott If You Knew It Was Mine
...Ha-Ha!...
...The Sad Part About This Battle Is You Rap Like A Newbie... Battlin' Lucky Will Have You End Like Black Guys In Movies.


...aight lets get some legit voters on this shit ASAP!

Ok i think thats prolly Copy and Paste b/c u went form ur Horrid Diss to this and it was all assumed lines anyway..

Uppin votes

that first verse...lol...gimme a break i was playin with that kid. what, you want me to spit another one?

This kid just got on the forum already tryin to Diss [Rappers]
You need luck to touch me like the Manhattan [Jaspers]
um... this a whack line. the jaspers didn't win it all
Your weak disses dont evan touch Poeple u should [Get-Some-Advice]
Ima Hit u with these Cold Flows and watch u [Sit-On-Ice]
um.. no
Im hitten u with my Eyes closed and 1 hand behind my [Back]
Im Knocken u harder then Jevon Kerse on a QB [Sack]
eh...
You need a Sledge hammer to Break my Untouchable [Destruction]
Im here bitch u fell me i dont need a Formal [IntroDuction]
hmm... no
7?whats that for the number of bars it took me to [Smash-You]
It didnt take much thought for me to step up and [Bash-You]
ok at least this was a personal. it was not great though


Beat 7?.. Dreams Come True But Ya Wish Wont..Try Ta 'Handle' 7 And Get Ya Wrists Broke
wtf is this structure? mad stretched
...Red Like Reverse Crips Yo..An Its Sad Ya Verse Was Nothin But Played Lines An Piss Jokes
his verse had no piss jokes..
...It's True Too!...
no its not
...Look In Tha Mirror Ta See Whose Tha Worst Kidd..Get Placed In a Hearst Bitch
...And Even Worse Shit Is That I Spit 2 Bars An Had More Punches Than Ya Whole Verse Did
hearse, not hearst. did and bitch don't rhyme.
...Damn!...
...Ropes Meet Tha Noose Wit Ya Head Queer..Pussy!..We All Knew Ya Bled Fear
...Fuck Haters!..Im 'Shakin Hat Off' Like Doin That Harlem Move Wit Loose HeadGear!
right... ok meta i guess.. but you gotta punch!
...*Harlem Shake*...
...But Humor Aside..Compare Ta Me Ya Trash When Tha Rumors Subside..7's Fluent Wit Lines
...-N Ya Said It Yaself Kidd... You'd Even Say a Whack Verse Was Hott If You Knew It Was Mine
huh?
...Ha-Ha!...
...The Sad Part About This Battle Is You Rap Like A Newbie... Battlin' Lucky Will Have You End Like Black Guys In Movies.
bleh


ok, two bad verses. i would recommend you guys stick to just straight punches. stop this "ill kill you" or "my punches" rule stuff... just do punches. use metas.. like "your mom sucks as much as a vacuum" (<-- just an example, please never use something that bad). elevate big time. oh and first guy wins because second guys verse annoyed me by using personals that weren't true. that's whack.

uppin still

ReLiC - Good spit man, had some good punches in there and was feeling your flow.

Best Line - You need a Sledge hammer to Break my Untouchable [Destruction]
Im here bitch u fell me i dont need a Formal [IntroDuction]

Worst Line - NONE

Lucky7 - Alright spit man, didnt like your flow to much but you had some good punches in there.

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - Beat 7?.. Dreams Come True But Ya Wish Wont..Try Ta 'Handle' 7 And Get Ya Wrists Broke
...Red Like Reverse Crips Yo..An Its Sad Ya Verse Was Nothin But Played Lines An Piss Jokes
...It's True Too!... (no its not)

OVERALL - I gotta give this battle to ReLiC because I liked his flow better, and he had better punches, Lucky man, your shit was boring to read and those stupid things you put after your lines were dumb, keep them outta your battles.. and flow your shit together better.

VOTE - ReLiC

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119532

ight 2-0 still uppin here

umm lucky seven that was ass cheeks you used a battle from somebody else an it made you look real real stupid casue you tried to feed and he didnt even have the shit in his verse you fed off of

nuff said

lol i told u :) thats 3-0 i guess we can keep goin

ill
 

dat was an ill rhyme relic especially the sack bit dat was gd

vote - relic

return da favor and vote 4 me afta i finished my battle

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121849

cheerz
holla at ya boy luminaz

someone end this real quik plz

Come on peeps 1 vote