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choppa--city Vs C_R_E_A_M
U kn0w da rules...
10 lines n0 crew v0tes n0 d/r v0tes v0tes explained must have m0re then 100 p0st |
100 post damnn nigga...................................
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u steppin into da wrong place,yo lyrics about 2 be demolishing.........
ill wrap a easy victory,while u juss disappear like david robinson......... yo damn spits off balanced and cook eyed jus like yo sig gunz.......... u want some more i already beat yo ass 5 votes 2 juss 1.......... u aient goin wanna uppin juss hope readers a pass by this......... spit flames and make u CREAMATE back to the black hole(FROM) nigga u gone wit the wind cuz u juss instantly got blew........ u jus another fake creation jus like yo Rapperz DaMu....... u can be saidens son and u still we neva be hott......... u a clown killa bowy should put u as LD mascot........ |
15 minutes b4 DQ 3:30 is da deadline i said dat in bitch slapped
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my bad dun ima bout ta dr0p now..and u didnt make rules s0n i did
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Lmao y0 h0w u figure ya rhymes can harm-me___
when i can smash ya wh0le team s0l0 i d0nt need da fuckin arm-y__ warri0r?? pls i'll aim and give u head-sh0ts___ and besides ya l0cati0n,when im wit ya girl dats da 0nly time the bed-r0ck__ ya fl0ws camouflaged kuz u hiden ya gh0st-rider___ and u 0nly 0n a team kuz u a g00d nutt-rider___ u aint cl0se ta better then me,pls st0p-it___ kuz im kn0w imma get this win wit predicti0ns like a pr0-phet___ u s0 gassed i bet ya gay l0ver spits hel-ium___[think] and mailN ya rhymes 0n k0daks da 0nly way his b0ys feelin-em___[think] |
This was not what I expected it to be.
but here it is CC: structure-8/10 punchlines-7/10 wordplay-7/10 creativity-7/10 total-29 (Very Very Average) Cream: structure-8/10 punchlines-8/10 wordplay-7/10 creativity- 7/10 total-30 This was not what I expected it to be. I thought Choppa would have been on wit the punchlines but instead he lacked them. v-Cream Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
My Vote
Okay this looks like a great match up so ima do a bar by bar breakdown...
u steppin into da wrong place,yo lyrics about 2 be demolishing......... ill wrap a easy victory,while u juss disappear like david robinson......... decent opener...ok meta...7/10 yo damn spits off balanced and cook eyed jus like yo sig gunz.......... u want some more i already beat yo ass 5 votes 2 juss 1.......... Personal....good...8/10 u aient goin wanna uppin juss hope readers a pass by this......... spit flames and make u CREAMATE back to the black hole(FROM) didnt rhyme...but like the lil meta...6/10 nigga u gone wit the wind cuz u juss instantly got blew........ u jus another fake creation jus like yo Rapperz DaMu....... hahaha...9/10 u can be saidens son and u still we neva be hott......... u a clown killa bowy should put u as LD mascot........ nice closer...8/10 Verse Score : 38/50 Okay this was a pretty decent verse...wasnt great but wasnt horrible....u had sum personals....good punches....but 3rd bar didnt rhyme....that fucked up the flow.....its straight tho.... Lmao y0 h0w u figure ya rhymes can harm-me___ when i can smash ya wh0le team s0l0 i d0nt need da fuckin arm-y__ Not a big punch....not that great of an opener...5/10 warri0r?? pls i'll aim and give u head-sh0ts___ and besides ya l0cati0n,when im wit ya girl dats da 0nly time the bed-r0ck__ nice nice...8/10 ya fl0ws camouflaged kuz u hiden ya gh0st-rider___ and u 0nly 0n a team kuz u a g00d nutt-rider___ aint feelin it...4/10 u aint cl0se ta better then me,pls st0p-it___ kuz im kn0w imma get this win wit predicti0ns like a pr0-phet___ No punch....4/10 u s0 gassed i bet ya gay l0ver spits hel-ium___[think] and mailN ya rhymes 0n k0daks da 0nly way his b0ys feelin-em___[think] A lil betta...6/10 Verse Score : 27/50 Aight first off dont stretch ya lines....it fucked up ya flow....u only had one good bar....ur other bars didnt even have punches....i expected for you to do better....but u didnt come hard wit punches and thats why choppa got this... Vote - choppa Return the favor... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121854 |
Choppa rap was good and better then Cream..Choppa had a
better sense in structure his rhymes good but his flow was go'n back n4ward from good and bad/ Cream he had a flow but no punches or structure need to do alot better u couldn't if yo endind wasn't so slow |
Ight.. choppa had that great strucutre...his rhymes werent as bad and his wordplay was tight... he had this shit won with his hard punches...
Cream had an aight structure.. but thats not to consider, his rhymes were average and his punches werent as great.. vote=choppa |
choppa had betta punches n flow i think u shouldof made it a little bit longer but overall both were good choppa was betta
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flow-chappa
punches-choppa creativity-CREAM complexity-choppa Vote-CHOPPA http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121899 ^^^^ return the favor Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
uppin them votezzz....................................
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okay then,Choppa had the better flow/structure because CREAM had strected lines.I hat to see long lines,and then short.I wasn't feeling the opener &closer in both threads.Neither of you had wordplays or imagery.U guys aren't newbs,you should have it.And off course,punches,which choppa had. u aient goin wanna uppin juss hope readers a pass by this......... spit flames and make u CREAMATE back to the black hole(FROM) ^^^ Cream had nutin up to this. |
srry bout dat
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