S.Carter VS Fine Mind
 

10-20brs
no dick ride votes
no feeding
u spit first
good luck

yo im gonna fight ya, swipe you up like a credit card/
I got a mean mind ready to open up like open treasure found/
I'll grab you and stab you behind you, grind you up like a mince meater/
save you for left overs to eat you/ I'll find you to bury you inside a sand pit/
you can't hold back, i'll mount on you like a stack of draws falling flat/
you get scraped by my rap, till i hear claps and start usin more skilful rap/
im the devel, im evil got your soul in the palm of my hand crushing splinters/
your bruising for a cruising, even though your losing hehe/
i'm gonna smoke you ass and flick a fag end right in ur face watch it burn in disgrace/
anyway you play no game, i feel sorry for you never gonna reach fame plz stay that way/

You suck but you a get better sorry
 

With a mic in my hand i'll turn a hundred into a Grand
Yo carear gone sink like quicksand you a boy pickin a fight with a man

This ain't a battle its more like a one way fight
I aint gone call him a fag he the opposite of a dike

He stricitly dickly kid you cant get with me
Keep talkin feel you body with holes like fifthy

Im on the grind That nine a give you a crazy mind in not time
Give you a crime you be spittin rhymes bunkmates with shine

How come everyday I met a bitch that think he the shit
I bet yo whole hood full of pussy like a porno flick

Suck a dick anything to get you to be quiet
He was the one hidin behind the bush in the watts riot

Im a gangsta you aint no where near my level
Better settle cause S dot spit heat like the devil

You one of them cats that a never be able to rap
Next time rhyme even kindergartners can do that

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I only read two lines and I think they both were shit

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k, they both were weak verses, but S.Carter had better punches, and it had a better flow, so my vote go to S.Carter

The hottest three bars of the battle, and they all belonged to S. Carter... he had a better flow, he rhymed, his structure was good and short he had some multis- Easy Vote for me....S.Carter Please return the fav
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You`re officaly wack for biting Jay-z`a alias kid you suck.

even though you fuckin bit jay's name, you still won only cause that other kid sucks. The biter actually had punches unlike someone even though he bit that line about your ghetto being full of pussy. Plus he actualy rhymed. this battle was really a pile of shit.

wow

um what a wack disply period man

s.cater- gangsta rap doesnt win battles man and i was not feeling this at all man you strucher sux period you need to picka diff style man ok and you are wack for bitting off j-z's name ok

lyrical- at least you had personals man get on this dude man he ios a fake gangsta there was nothing you couldnt have said man ok you won but bearly

v/ lyrical

return the favor link is in the sog hit them up

S. CArter ya had good structure, mediocre flow tho. Get some personnals, and ya had ok punches. They landed tho.

Lyrical-ya had no rhyme scheme, or if you did i couldn't find it. No punches with wack flow and structure. THis was a landslide.

Vote-S.Carter

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