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T12U3 K1LlA 05-02-04 07:22 PM

~~*T12U3 K1LlA VS Inspectah Rhymes*~~
 
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We Each Spitt Once
U Spitt First
10-20 Lines

Inspectah Rhymes 05-02-04 07:54 PM

Dirty Souths Finest, bow down to INS ya heiness, when I shine I am the brightest MC I leave ya lifeless, your spineless, a coward, you a little shack I am a tower, come at me you get devoured, chopped up like cocaine powder, try to match my power, im comin from the east...a beast with a ferocious mind im sharp like wolves teeth, at my peak im a god, at the top of the game, you a lame at your best you couldn't see 3 grand no less, not impressed your talents and name fuck you I bring the pain, my methods are reflected from zeus then manifested with a pen I leave your brain molested, check the votes im selected, elected to the illest, feel this im the realest you a fantasy not reality you ever beatin me is falacy can't beleive you even challenged me on stage you left a casualty, tragically, I rip your esphogaus right out your throat then choke you with your tonsils leave your voice at high notes, sounded like an alien come at me im carryin mic granades with pins battlein any militant advesary bury them on stage, smoke you on a track like your name was purple haze, leave your thoughts in a daze, your words in a maze, can't find their way out cause you know you played out with no comeback to spray out, so just try an escape route, forfeit and hand my pay out, bow down to a greater emcee, who visually already sees the outcome, you fall short like midgits in line for roller coaster rides when the bouts out, put your fuckin lights out, tko you been defeat, go back and learn how to flow your rhymes need to be critiqued, throw your body in shit creek and watch you flow to your death, you came iight but kid theres no way you fuckin with the best, this not a test it is life and in this game I play it trife, I take your wife and your mic and kick you off your own stage when I receit, have you booed right out the arena, you know the procedure, you the student im the teacher like rakim said follow the leader....

T12U3 K1LlA 05-02-04 07:56 PM

Damn Dogg Didnt U Read The Rulez 20 Lines Look At That Shit But Its Kool

T12U3 K1LlA 05-02-04 08:24 PM

Ill give u a lil taste of my rap cuz I know u thirsty//
Blast-ROCKETS-on-ya-CHEST like a Steve Francis Jersey//
Inspectah ya flow takes elevation quicker than Dough-Spittin-Leaven//
I’ll make Inspectah Spirit Drop like Angels getting Kicked-outta-Heaven//
I’m just spittin HEAT and this kid thinks he's in hell//
Serve u an L,Makin Inspectah Shake like ALI-huggin-a-Richter Scale//
Ya Punches Just 'Don't Work' ~ Its Evident That Rappin Isn't Your Job//
You Just A Fag ~ Whos Hit More Balls Than McGuire And Barry Bonds!//
How many penises did he lick, lets see 1,2,3 fuck it was several//
Get up off ya knees boy, i cant battle u if ya aint eye level//
Run up against T12U3, no hesitation nigga you get sprayed,//
Only 'Johnson' you are close to is 'Magic', cuz you both got aids//
Got cats to drive me all over the city like i was gettin toured,//
The only 'wealth' you got is next to your monopoly board//

MoTiF 05-02-04 08:32 PM

It should be a DQ but heres what i thought besides it.

Multis-Tk
Metas-Tk
Flow-Tk
Punches-Tk
Structure-Tk
Overall-Tk
i think insp. had more of a rap then anything.
Uppin honost votes in sig.

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T12U3 K1LlA 05-02-04 08:36 PM

plzz explain really well cuz dont want no d/q votes thx

sun jian 05-02-04 08:37 PM

yo i going to vote for killa because his shit rhymed and made sense and stayed under the limit plus he had structure the king likes that.

MoTiF 05-02-04 08:38 PM

Thats explained as it gets bro im not gonna evaluate every line i go by overall

sun jian 05-02-04 08:44 PM

let me explain.

rhymes
Dirty Souths Finest, bow down to INS ya heiness, when I shine I am the brightest MC I leave ya lifeless, your spineless, a coward, you a little shack I am a tower, come at me you get devoured, chopped up like cocaine powder, try to match my power, im comin from the east...a beast with a ferocious mind im sharp like wolves teeth, at my peak im a god, at the top of the game, you a lame at your best you couldn't see 3 grand no less, not impressed your talents and name fuck you I bring the pain, my methods are reflected from zeus then manifested with a pen I leave your brain molested, check the votes im selected, elected to the illest, feel this im the realest you a fantasy not reality you ever beatin me is falacy can't beleive you even challenged me on stage you left a casualty, tragically, I rip your esphogaus right out your throat then choke you with your tonsils leave your voice at high notes, sounded like an alien come at me im carryin mic granades with pins battlein any militant advesary bury them on stage, smoke you on a track like your name was purple haze, leave your thoughts in a daze, your words in a maze, can't find their way out cause you know you played out with no comeback to spray out, so just try an escape route, forfeit and hand my pay out, bow down to a greater emcee, who visually already sees the outcome, you fall short like midgits in line for roller coaster rides when the bouts out, put your fuckin lights out, tko you been defeat, go back and learn how to flow your rhymes need to be critiqued, throw your body in shit creek and watch you flow to your death, you came iight but kid theres no way you fuckin with the best, this not a test it is life and in this game I play it trife, I take your wife and your mic and kick you off your own stage when I receit, have you booed right out the arena, you know the procedure, you the student im the teacher like rakim said follow the leader....
yo shit is whack your rhymes are too long and you went pass the time limit.plus i didnt even know when you started and hen you finished a rhyme.

killa

Ill give u a lil taste of my rap cuz I know u thirsty//
Blast-ROCKETS-on-ya-CHEST like a Steve Francis Jersey//
Inspectah ya flow takes elevation quicker than Dough-Spittin-Leaven//
I’ll make Inspectah Spirit Drop like Angels getting Kicked-outta-Heaven//
I’m just spittin HEAT and this kid thinks he's in hell//
Serve u an L,Makin Inspectah Shake like ALI-huggin-a-Richter Scale//
Ya Punches Just 'Don't Work' ~ Its Evident That Rappin Isn't Your Job//
You Just A Fag ~ Whos Hit More Balls Than McGuire And Barry Bonds!//
How many penises did he lick, lets see 1,2,3 fuck it was several//
Get up off ya knees boy, i cant battle u if ya aint eye level//
Run up against T12U3, no hesitation nigga you get sprayed,//
Only 'Johnson' you are close to is 'Magic', cuz you both got aids//
Got cats to drive me all over the city like i was gettin toured,//
The only 'wealth' you got is next to your monopoly board//
that shit was hott and everything plus you stayed in the limit.
inspected rhymes needs to elevate badly.

How many penises did he lick, lets see 1,2,3 fuck it was several//
Get up off ya knees boy, i cant battle u if ya aint eye level//

this line had me buggin.

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20 GraND 05-02-04 08:49 PM

i cant vote cuz im in his crew,
This is what i think,
Tk- It was ok, first line was sick as hell, but it seemed to get worse as time goes on...
Inspec- it had no structure and was hard to read... Too long...

I cant vote, thats just what i think, holla

Inspectah Rhymes 05-02-04 09:05 PM

Dirty Souths Finest, bow down to INS ya heiness, when I shine I am the brightest MC I leave ya lifeless//
your spineless, a coward, you a little shack I am a tower, come at me you get devoured, chopped up like cocaine powder//
try to match my power, im comin from the east...a beast with a ferocious mind im sharp like wolves teeth//
at my peak im a god, at the top of the game, you a lame at your best you couldn't see 3 grand no less//
im not impressed with your talents and name fuck you I bring the pain, my methods are reflected from zeus then manifested with a pen... I leave your brain molested, check the votes im selected, elected to the illest//
feel this im the realest you a fantasy not reality you ever beatin me is falacy can't beleive you even challenged me on stage you left a casualty//
tragically, I rip your esphogaus right out your throat then choke you with your tonsils leave your voice at high notes//
soundin like an alien come at me im carryin mic granades with pins battlein any militant advesary bury them on stage//
smoke you on a track like your name was purple haze, leave your thoughts in a daze, your words in a maze they can't find their way out cause you know you played out with no comeback to spray out, so just try an escape route, forfeit and hand my pay out//
bow down to a greater emcee, who visually already sees the outcome, you fall short like midgits in line for roller coaster rides when the bouts out, put your fuckin lights out, tko you been defeat//
go back and learn how to flow your rhymes need to be critiqued, throw your body in shit creek and watch you flow to your death,you came iight but kid theres no way you fuckin with the best// this not a test it is life and in this game I play it trife, I take your wife and your mic and kick you off your own stage when I receit//
have you booed right out the arena, you know the procedure, you the student im the teacher like rakim said follow the leader....

T12U3 K1LlA 05-02-04 09:20 PM

yo uppin for some damn votes plzz explain really well cuz dont want no d/q votes thx!!!

Triple_N 05-02-04 09:46 PM

Good battle y'all breakdown: Inspectar
Dirty Souths Finest, bow down to INS ya heiness, when I shine I am the brightest MC I leave ya lifeless//

Weak punch

your spineless, a coward, you a little shack I am a tower, come at me you get devoured, chopped up like cocaine powder//

doesn't rhyme

try to match my power, im comin from the east...a beast with a ferocious mind im sharp like wolves teeth//

Weak punch

at my peak im a god, at the top of the game, you a lame at your best you couldn't see 3 grand no less//

Nice rhyme, bad punch

im not impressed with your talents and name fuck you I bring the pain, my methods are reflected from zeus then manifested with a pen... I leave your brain molested, check the votes im selected, elected to the illest//

Wat too stretched

feel this im the realest you a fantasy not reality you ever beatin me is falacy can't beleive you even challenged me on stage you left a casualty//
tragically, I rip your esphogaus right out your throat then choke you with your tonsils leave your voice at high notes//
soundin like an alien come at me im carryin mic granades with pins battlein any militant advesary bury them on stage//
smoke you on a track like your name was purple haze, leave your thoughts in a daze, your words in a maze they can't find their way out cause you know you played out with no comeback to spray out, so just try an escape route, forfeit and hand my pay out//
bow down to a greater emcee, who visually already sees the outcome, you fall short like midgits in line for roller coaster rides when the bouts out, put your fuckin lights out, tko you been defeat//
go back and learn how to flow your rhymes need to be critiqued, throw your body in shit creek and watch you flow to your death,you came iight but kid theres no way you fuckin with the best// this not a test it is life and in this game I play it trife, I take your wife and your mic and kick you off your own stage when I receit//
have you booed right out the arena, you know the procedure, you the student im the teacher like rakim said follow the leader....

The reat don't need breakdown weak drop

Breakdown: Killa

Ill give u a lil taste of my rap cuz I know u thirsty//
Blast-ROCKETS-on-ya-CHEST like a Steve Francis Jersey//

Good opener

Inspectah ya flow takes elevation quicker than Dough-Spittin-Leaven//
I’ll make Inspectah Spirit Drop like Angels getting Kicked-outta-Heaven//

Kinda weak

I’m just spittin HEAT and this kid thinks he's in hell//
Serve u an L,Makin Inspectah Shake like ALI-huggin-a-Richter Scale//

good punch

Ya Punches Just 'Don't Work' ~ Its Evident That Rappin Isn't Your Job//
You Just A Fag ~ Whos Hit More Balls Than McGuire And Barry Bonds!//

Ok punch

How many penises did he lick, lets see 1,2,3 fuck it was several//
Get up off ya knees boy, i cant battle u if ya aint eye level//

Great Punch!!!

Run up against T12U3, no hesitation nigga you get sprayed,//
Only 'Johnson' you are close to is 'Magic', cuz you both got aids//

ok wordplay

Got cats to drive me all over the city like i was gettin toured,//
The only 'wealth' you got is next to your monopoly board//

Wasn't feelin' closer

Overall: Ti killa came way better, but good batte both of you
Vote: Ti killa
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T12U3 K1LlA 05-02-04 10:17 PM

Yo Thx For The Vote Ppl When U Vote Explain Very Well Thx....

2Face 05-02-04 10:24 PM

Killa had the most best rap his had a better flow
structure and rhymes he came hard and strong
he wasted on time on it my vote
is Killa

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