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Vicodin 05-02-04 08:57 PM

Triple_N (VS) Vicodin
 
10 lines / 5 bars max.. 3-0 = KO or 5 votes to win.. Spit when you ready..

Triple_N 05-02-04 08:59 PM

Checkin' in 30 mins man, I'm droppin now, good luck

Vicodin 05-02-04 09:05 PM

Checkin in.. I'll be droppin soon too.. Doesn't matter who spits first but I'll have mine before a half hour (9:33 my time).. Goodluck to you too..

::1::

Triple_N 05-02-04 09:20 PM

I'm properly diagnosing your lyrical content like i was "Dr. Phil"
Cuz even if ya rhymes was on "kemo" they still wouldn't be "ill"(kemo is cancer treatment)
U disillusioned if u think u gon win, u'd still lose if u prewrote for a year
I'll rip u an ya "next of kin", you need to "50 cent" your career
My lyrical talents keep growin', spreadin' out like it was mayo
Your lyrical skills been sittin still longer than "Tony Yayo"
Mothafucka do u know who u fuckin' wit, I'll eat ya like "hannibal"
I take that back, u might like it, being that u a rappin' "Tevin Campbell"
This mothafucka fucked up his profile, cuz where it say "from" he forgot the "com"
Cuz he decided to visit "T"riple "dot" "com", an got "bitchslapped" like m&m's "mom"

There ya have it, dropped hot shit in less than 30, holla!!!!!!!

Vicodin 05-02-04 09:34 PM

I'm like 'Hitler' bout to 'take-the-Jews', your the enemy sorry to break-the-news..
So bitch get ready to 'feel my sting' like I was 'Quaker 2'..
(Quaker 2 is a drink wit the slogan "Feel the sting")

I spit fire heated flows with 'full accuracy' achievin 'goals'..
It's funny how your 'rhymes' make me believe-in-'ghosts'..
(As in you a "ghost"writter)

Your careers gonna plunder down, n you'll sit back n wonder how..
Even after I 'bury' you, you still won't be 'underground'..

I filter-n-blaze-kingdoms, 'so recent-even-friction-fears-me'..
Are you familiar-with-'plain-English'? Cuz I'm 'beatin-you-wit-a-dictionary'..

I see your 'takin it slow' but I fear-no-'crawlers'..
Your like a 'reciept' cept the 'total' comes to ZERO DOLLARS!

T12U3 K1LlA 05-02-04 09:46 PM

OK THIS WAS AN O.K. BATTLE BUT THIS IS HOW IT WENT DOWN
TRIPLE_N WAS KILLING THIS WAS HIS BEST LINE
My lyrical talents keep growin', spreadin' out like it was mayo
Your lyrical skills been sittin still longer than "Tony Yayo"
-CAN I GET A *MAD PUNCH IN THE NUTS*

THIS LINE HERE WAS TIGHT 2
This mothafucka fucked up his profile, cuz where it say "from" he forgot the "com"
Cuz he decided to visit "T"riple "dot" "com", an got "bitchslapped" like m&m's "mom"
-OK PUNCH TO CLOSE

Vicodin U DID GOOD BUT NOT AS GOOD AS TRIPLE UR BEST LINE....
I'm like 'Hitler' bout to 'take-the-Jews', your the enemy sorry to break-the-news..

FLOW=TRIPLE
PUNCHES=TRIPLE
OPEN=Vicodin
CLOSE=TRIPLE
VOTE=TRIPLE

I THOUGHT HIS FLOW AND HIS PUNCHES WHERE BETTER SO THATS Y HE GETS MY VOTE

Triple_N 05-03-04 06:44 PM

Uppin for some well explained votes, holla!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

shadow 05-03-04 07:05 PM

ok breakdown for triple n
opener 9/10(that shit was hott)
I'm properly diagnosing your lyrical content like i was "Dr. Phil"
Cuz even if ya rhymes was on "kemo" they still wouldn't be "ill"
middle section
you kept it goin hott shit
This mothafucka fucked up his profile, cuz where it say "from" he forgot the "com"
Cuz he decided to visit "T"riple "dot" "com", an got "bitchslapped" like m&m's "mom"
good shit there
overall 9/10

ok vicodin
opener was a lil sketchy ill give you a 7/10
bad structure
middle was ok but once again your structure messed it up
closer
I see your 'takin it slow' but I fear-no-'crawlers'..
Your like a 'reciept' cept the 'total' comes to ZERO DOLLARS!
sorry dude that was kinda wack
and didnt even rhyme overall
7/10
mv/triple n

K-Trin 05-03-04 07:09 PM

Triple N,I think you underestimated ur oppenent.Cause Vicodin may be new,he came hard.Both of you had nice flow and complexity.Nicodin had the better creativiy.Punches would also go to Nicodin.That closer was hooot.

vOTE-NICODEN

BoRn2SpiTT 05-03-04 08:32 PM

YO.. this battle was hot
Triple N:
I'm properly diagnosing your lyrical content like i was "Dr. Phil"
Cuz even if ya rhymes was on "kemo" they still wouldn't be "ill"(
-cold start...
overall u did good wit a good flow and a fair structure... u had strong punches..props..

Vicodon u was fair.. ur flow was ight and u had fair structure..ur punches was weak

vote=triple N

King Solo 05-04-04 01:17 PM

triple n be killin this clown

upped him on every subject
triple u had better flow and it seemed to me as tho vicodin was attemptin to mimic ure style but it didnt pay off. ure structure was better makin ure spit easier to get into whilst vicodin had lines different lengths all throughout.
triple came with harder punches straight KO'in this kid and he had a far better rhyme scheme goin on. there was nice wordplay and creativity from triple and vicodin put in some ok shit but not gud enuff to challenge triple.
vicodin, work on ure style and structure cuz that will help u get a better flow and start beefin up those punchlines so u hit harder and u'll go far.
u got a lot of potential!!

Vote - Triple_N

Triple_N 05-04-04 04:27 PM

Uppin for some well explained votes on this shit!!

lyrical distruction 05-04-04 04:33 PM

I think triple N won this so im voteing for him cuz he had the best flow rymes and punches. He kinda out runed him even though it was a close battle. I can say vicodin was good for a buginner and should continue and get better.


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