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J Willz vs. Quickpunch
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ol skool rulez.. me first... |
ight man....spit ur shit..AND PEOPLE I DIDNT CHOOSE 2 ACCEPT THIS...HE SET IT UP...BUT I'LL TAKE IT A BATTLE IS A BATTLE...SO IM READY FOR WAR.....
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Hurry The Fuck Up...u Have Fucking 5mins To Drop Ur Shit Or Ur Dq....damn Man...dont Set Shit Up And Not Do It....quit Findin Ppls Shit To Spit.....just Spit...pce...u Have Exactly 5 Mins
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Be focused, a screw up leaves victory hopeless
Raidin my turf'll make yu nutz like citizens in Oakland Get ripped, ya namez sumthin i can cut thru Ya name'll be said like a trainer tellin yu wut to do So throw a Quick Punch.. stop tha beatin Damn a Mon-Fri. kill if my shitz makin you weakend Its serious to me :laugh: yeah rite, yu kiddin Like Uncle Ben's rice.. ya man cookin dude in an instant It aint physics.. how i distant the weakest Its ova, got tha crowd signalin multiple Hasta la Vista's... |
chill fa realz kid.. i had to eat... and dont feed off my plate
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haha ight..sorry i was already pissed so u added on to it..my bad..check itYour no match for me so i might as well burn you
Your punches so late their breaking curfew you've probably written raps about the looks of females but couldn't get ass if they discount the puss at retails you're a long way from home like Dorathy, click them heels if this battle win was a dish you would miss your meals u have no skills, im’a keep this real, so here’s the deal u rhymes wouldn't be tight if they were air-tight sealed Score 0-To-A-Million, I'm A Commodity-To-Children You Cant Hold My Weight Like Starter Body-Building man, your to fucking weak to be my arch enemy dont matter whos rhymes you bite, wont see the end-a-me J WILLZ i hope i dont have to see ur rhymes, i know they'll be pitiful ur chances of winning are slimmer than hell experiencing a biblical miracle Shit On this rugged terrain, You have to be hard or U fold man because this Fake MC’s coming up short like Gary Coleman i never spit first, cause that leads to battles being rhetorical its like ur lyrics are having sex wit history, there fuckin historical this kid wants to murder me sittin in his computer seat the only way you gonna erase me is by pressin control alt delete |
I gotta give this to quick punch cuz he came hard with the punches and his flow was also good...
J willz.. u need to elevate.. just work on ur structure and youll be set.. u can work on ur flow too Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
ight keep the honest votes coming...yall dont sleep on this...NOTE I DID NOT ASK TO BATTLE HIM...HE SET IT UP AND SO I HAD NO CHOICE BUT 2 SPIT...SORRY IF THIS IS AN EASY WIN...
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i'd vote but i know i'm black listed anyways jwillz took this .... quickpunches rhymes are way to played atleast j willz showed some creativity
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this piece is very actice...
can we get some feedback... |
Oh, and did yu say this was an easy win... :laugh: ... ya verse didnt back you up..
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can we get some votes please.....thanks man id appreciate it.....
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This is an easy win for quickpunch.it seems you are just too much better than him.Nothing much that I can say.JWiilz,battle somebody newto rap.Your verse had the flow,but it was simple and weak.
vote-Quickpunch |
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121809
^^ooh,and drop a honest vote in my battle |
ight thanks shady...uppin this thing and from here on aint battling any newbs thats fo sho.....so can yall hit this up
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