You_aint_ready\\VS//A$e
 

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rules:no hatin
no crew votes
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due in hour or sooner

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u can't stop me, i rap second rate/
fuck wit me, i'll make ya shirt look like a bottle of V8/
how can u stop dis kid, n his game of raps/
i'll make ya girl play wit my "basketballs" like its a game of taps/
my bullets fitted for ya head, dats why i got da caps/
leave yo ass right where u stand for a long ass nap/
yo, i get chu while u talkin' on ya cordless phone/
cut cha throat off, n leave u wit a cordless dome/
i'ma rise to da top like foam, but i don't disenegrate/
i penetrate/ and i kno u tryna hate/
But
dats too late/
muh'fucka, u really jus decided ya fate/
i rap to da max/
n when i put somthin n ya ear it ain't gon' be a q-tip lookin for wax/
sit back n relax/ for i burn ya ass up like i got anthrax/
i'm gon stay on da grind/
jus remember to keep dis nigga name n remind.

Dam this nigga cant be serious his wack flow is pre-written
You had time for perfection and his punches still aint hittin
Dont come at me wit that I dont battle wanna be Mc’s
Who beat they meat wheneva they can and work at Mickie D’s
but i give him credit he finally got a raise he’s up to $5.50
How u gone spit a pre-written verse and rhymes still be shitty
Juss stick to fast food son...cuz wit your rhymes you wont get paid
He think maybe if he raps he’ll have a chance of gettin laid
You betta watch ya prewritten shit before it gets u sprayed
Not a real rapper so he called MTV to get Made
“i wanna be famous,i wanna be a rapper” thats wut this bitch said
They told you no so be like ya moms and just stick to givin head
Aight but thats enough im not goin to use ya moms to shine
He’ll get mad fuck around “stop making fun of me” and pull a Columbine
But im tired of this bitch ass nigga wit his maybe beef
Your being tought a lesson...schools in session...so please take a seat

sorry if i went ova but i juss dont like niggas who pre-write they shit.....aight lets get some votes in here while i calm down

jamaica, you definatly won this from a long shot, you had the performace topping off ase, he rapping was like as ass. Ase needs to learn more about structure and flowing and try to do his best to achieve wins.

You_aint_ready nice battle. it was weak but your verse was better obviously. you had better punchez then your competitor. nice punches, i don't mean to cut your rhymes up but i like this multiple:Juss stick to fast food son...cuz wit your rhymes you wont get paid
He think maybe if he raps he’ll have a chance of gettin laid
You betta watch ya prewritten shit before it gets u sprayed
Not a real rapper so he called MTV to get Made

vote=You_aint_ready

Aight thats coo wit be boy...keep d votes comin in...holla

Straight outta Jamaica Queens

u can't stop me, i rap second rate/
fuck wit me, i'll make ya shirt look like a bottle of V8/
ummm no not really feelin......
how can u stop dis kid, n his game of raps/
i'll make ya girl play wit my "basketballs" like its a game of taps/
LOL.....ummkay...
my bullets fitted for ya head, dats why i got da caps/
leave yo ass right where u stand for a long ass nap/
aight pretty nice........
yo, i get chu while u talkin' on ya cordless phone/
cut cha throat off, n leave u wit a cordless dome/
Best so far in ya battle......
i'ma rise to da top like foam, but i don't disenegrate/
i penetrate/ and i kno u tryna hate/
But
dats too late/
muh'fucka, u really jus decided ya fate/
OK....LOL your crackin me up...
i rap to da max/
n when i put somthin n ya ear it ain't gon' be a q-tip lookin for wax/
sit back n relax/ for i burn ya ass up like i got anthrax/
LOL....Nice I liked the Q tip but the rest wack....
i'm gon stay on da grind/
jus remember to keep dis nigga name n remind.
OK closiner...Needs better work
4/10 Work on punches man....

Dam this nigga cant be serious his wack flow is pre-written
You had time for perfection and his punches still aint hittin
Umm ok n a way
Dont come at me wit that I dont battle wanna be Mc’s
Who beat they meat wheneva they can and work at Mickie D’s
LOL..funny
but i give him credit he finally got a raise he’s up to $5.50
How u gone spit a pre-written verse and rhymes still be shitty
Alright but not that tight
Juss stick to fast food son...cuz wit your rhymes you wont get paid
He think maybe if he raps he’ll have a chance of gettin laid
Not that tight again
You betta watch ya prewritten shit before it gets u sprayed
Not a real rapper so he called MTV to get Made
ohhh......Murked him
“i wanna be famous,i wanna be a rapper” thats wut this bitch said
They told you no so be like ya moms and just stick to givin head
LOl...
Aight but thats enough im not goin to use ya moms to shine
He’ll get mad fuck around “stop making fun of me” and pull a Columbine
ummm....Dont really kno about this
But im tired of this bitch ass nigga wit his maybe beef
Your being tought a lesson...schools in session...so please take a seat
Nice closiner.....Really good clisner....I liked that....
8/10
Both sortof work on flows...exspecially ace...He just got murked..
V/You aint ready....Return the favor against born2spitt will ya....thanks its in font lines

dis was a pretty good battle.less break it down:
a$e:pretty good,but i dont really find anything wrong with prewritting.you had some good flow,rhymes,it was tight.
best line:my bullets fitted for ya head, dats why i got da caps/
leave yo ass right where u stand for a long ass nap/
worst line:i'm gon stay on da grind/
jus remember to keep dis nigga name n remind.
overall:nice battle.good flow,6/10
you_aint_ready:nice battle,better dan da other,good flow,easy to read and know what rhymes with what
best line:Dam this nigga cant be serious his wack flow is pre-written
You had time for perfection and his punches still aint hittin
worst line:Aight but thats enough im not goin to use ya moms to shine
He’ll get mad fuck around “stop making fun of me” and pull a Columbine
overall:good battle 7/10
vote:you aint ready

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One Sided,You ain't ready had it.Flow/punches/creatibity/complexity.....he had it all.What else cann I say....this was one-sided.A$E,you had no chance.Uain't gotnutin is just too much better than you

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