Blunt_Man420 vs. Terror
 

What's up man, I'm gonna spit this shit. Here it goes...

I was cruisin down the street, mackin the bitches//
goin about forty, and I hit the switches//
this punk nigga Terror comes up to me//
talkin some shit like he's an emcee//
so i decide I'm gonna spit some shit//
this motha fuckas probably gonna submit//
to my rhymes, because he aint got nothin//
i'll tell you somethin his lady spreads the lovin//
i gotta get lit before the day begins//
if i get the munchies, i'll eat some wheat thins//
because i love weed, and i have some planted//
it makes everything around me seem enchanted//
so come back later when you have some better beats//
go home motha fucka, you can't handle the streets//


Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Shit Man Yo Turn NOW NIGGA!

come on Terror i wanna Vote on THIS BATTLE lol tell when he spits

sry i wsnt on

This kid cant be serious Tryin to Spit at Me//
Well hes met his match ima a Lyrical Disaster See//
Ur weak Ur rhymes are fake but he Thinks hes iLL Though//
This kid just got strapped up but for his B/F with a Dildo//
These punches connect turnin u greener then a Celtics Jerzey//
I havnt lost a Battle yet im spitten Flames Have you not Heard Me//
It doesnt take much me to Send this Mic up in Flames//
Im really Rappin ur still playin like these are Games//
Next Time dont Think you Can handle a real Emcee//
U just got locked up in ur Coffin and i got the Key//

sry uppin votes

this is a VerY WEAK BATTLE right here ill vote later

umm guys like i said VERY WEAK umm

I forgot whos in dis battle hold up lemmie check........................

Blunt_Man420

good shit elvate u can be much better

Opener 7.5/10
Closer 6.5/10
Structure 4/10
FLow 6/10
RHymes 4/10
28/50

Terror
Opener 8/10
Closer 6/10
Structure 6/10
Flow 7/10
Rhymes8/10
35/50

Good battle homies yall nEEd too elavate lol iight stay e-z 1

Terror - Good flow man, had some had punches in there.

Best Line - Ur weak Ur rhymes are fake but he Thinks hes iLL Though//
This kid just got strapped up but for his B/F with a Dildo//

Worst Line - NONE

Blunt_Man - ALrigt spit man, but you lacked punches... you had a good flow.

Best Line - to my rhymes, because he aint got nothin//
i'll tell you somethin his lady spreads the lovin// (your only punch)

Worst Line - Eveything else

OVERALL - I gotta give this battle to Terror, he had the better flow goin on and some harder hitten punches. The other guy didnt really have any punches man, you gotta attack yor battler not talk about your weed.

VOTE - Terror

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121868
Terror you voted on that one already so hit up my battle with S. Carter.. peace

terror-not too bad,but you had some good flow.
best line:Ur weak Ur rhymes are fake but he Thinks hes iLL Though//
This kid just got strapped up but for his B/F with a Dildo
worst line:none really.
bluntman:really good i liked yours better than terrors,goof flow,punches
best line:because i love weed, and i have some planted//
it makes everything around me seem enchanted//
worst line:i gotta get lit before the day begins//
if i get the munchies, i'll eat some wheat thins//
overall:i gotta give dis battle to bluntman even though terror was pretty ill.but in my mind bluntman had better punches and flow

haha ight uppin still

Votes plz

OK blunt, ya had too much gassing and rambled on about totally irrelevant shit. Plantin weed aint dissin, so hurry up and diss him! keep disses fast, instead of talkin about wheat and weed. Punches didnt exist at all, the only thing to credit you on was flow. Im not exactly a hot emcee myself, but this was pretty weak man. not to mention all the girlfriend fucking is more unoriginal than bboys that can only do the worm (bboys=breakdancers). Bring in some personals, and punch him til he's shittin blood.
2.5/10

Terror: Ya had more complex multi-syllabalic rhymes, not to mention ya brought punches. You used a few similes, not bad, but try to bring more personals and wittier wordplay. while ya werent exactly hot shit, you decimated your opponent, for the simple fact that you had stabs, he didnt. try to shy away from sexual disses, they are played out worse than old atari consoles. Ya didnt really need to pull out all of the stops to beat blunt though, so this spit was more than adequate.
4/10

And ma vote goes to... Terror

who wanats 2 battle me quick???

blunt - ur ish wack weak....no flow....all short lines.....no punches...u jus talked.....horrible....go to tutorials and learn everything in there....

terror - u easily got thtis because of punches...u had a better flow and structure....jus werk on usin personals and meta's.....wordplay was decent.....

vote - terror

terror had this all day long his flow was better better personals better punches all around better

blunt i tried to figure it out maybe due to format is why i couldn t see it but it just wasn t there watch for strechted lines and read some battles for tips on format
keep strivin yall and please check out some of my battles .....big ups to honest votes