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lyrical distruction 05-03-04 05:05 AM

fine mind bs ozzy
 
1 battle
no dick riding
10 lines only

lyrical distruction 05-03-04 05:18 AM

ozzy your gonna be pulverized in one round, your so dozy your mind is 10 sslow/ecs
you shouldn't do on rap, you should start a rock band/
i'll shrink your head till the skulls sunk till it looks like a cave/
i'll chopp in a flash, infect and inflict pain makeing you alegetic with a nasty rash/
i'll slash your car tyers hope they go flieing into your hole faimly colideing/
i'll stop your mouth from speaking, all you will be able to see is your mouth leaking/ blood thats clotting up every time you speak/
im like an air bag brieving your stenghs and thoughts caught up in my twisted mind/
this battle was fun, plz learn not to battle me ever agan/
I just want to reasure you you've been lured as bate and now it's too late/

Ozzy 05-03-04 05:53 AM

Fine mind, that verse was whackness defined
Tried finding in vain two lines that fuckin' rhymed
If I was lookin' for crack possibly I'd cut cha some slack
must be high as fuck to be writin' something like that
you can't hurt me 'cause I'm on painkillers see
gimme your best shot your kicks gon' hurt your feet
Fuck you bitch you think you're good you can't compete
I do this part time the rest I'm working the streets
This is your job, hobby, weekends your life
Two words, two wrists, one knife let it slide

BigTony.Self 05-03-04 06:09 AM

ok.....im sittin here readin this and wonderin what the hell was fine mind thinking im absolutely amazed that he would ever even think to put out that whack of a verse man ...holy chit............Ozzy i have to say multis were ok punches ok but honestly i wouldn t have tried that hard either after seeing that lmfao,

lyrical distruction 05-03-04 06:11 AM

only cause i voted you out on a battle that you got demolished in, you faggot.

BigTony.Self 05-03-04 06:16 AM

to each there own but watch anyone with an ounce of ryme skill in em gonna vote forozzy i bet its a 5-0 easyyy

LyricalMethod 05-03-04 08:27 AM

this battle wasn't the greatest but i've seen worse. fine mind gort this battle b/c he had better punches and his verse made more sense.

vote=fine mind

Ozzy 05-05-04 03:41 AM

Anyone gonna vote on this? Fuck?
..............?

EyeDEA 05-05-04 03:58 AM

Ok look Fine mine WTF Put some flow in your shit and Punches you need Punches thats what bashes the Mc ur battling
Overall 4/10
Ozzy koo Spit nice ryme scheme and good flow easy to read and good multi's got my vote uncontested keep the elevation though iiight peace!!!!!!!!!!!
Overall 7/10

Vote = Ozzy

.::N-Sight::. 05-05-04 07:20 AM

aiyo...wtf... Fine mind..that was a fuq'in wack verse yo

don't ever start 3-4 lines off with I'll...I'll...I'll...you sound like an amateur at best

punches were weak and flat-out corny


Vote: Ozzy for ombivous reasons


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Da Vinci 05-11-04 07:20 PM

RETURN THE FAVOUR OR I'LL NEVER VOTE ON ANOTHER ONE OF YOUR BATTLES!!! LOL!!! KID'N http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...874#post1279874

Ozzy your style was pretty good that other cat normally comes harder than that, good puncehs consistent flow, nice battle
Flow: 6/10
Punches: 7/10
Personals: 6/10
Metas: 5/10
Multies: 5/10
Wordplay: 5/10
Overall: 34/60

fine mind you normally come harder than that I've read some of your other stuff, just lack of good punches your flow was nice, and it was a close battle but I'll break it down like this.

Flow: 5/10
Punches: 6/10
Personals: 5/10
Metas: 5/10
Multies: 4/10
Wordplay: 3/10
Overall: 31/60


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