Proliphik vs fine mind
 

10 lines only
no dick riding
1 post

It's the hosts privilege - you spit first.............

battle
 

my words are told to the unknown, they will derange to change you/
theses raps are laps that colapse you faster than my crew stomps/
i'll make u a fake, i'll give you the biggest head ache pooping out ya brain/
this is a peice of cake, i can easerly finish you off for me its like one big scof/
im gonna run you over the speed of lightning watch you fly like a shuttled spaced rocket/
i'll whip your ass lay you out can' you stop this mind from wipeing you out/
you get crushed and made into something that an't lush, rush ya to the hosital with heart failure/
you an't my league im lowering your fatigue, i feed on greed and your like a growing seed/
quite rap, i'll stamp on you like a angry tramp going balistic, i'll pelt you away like a rubber band elastic/
you can't stop me, im the top baby my flows to strong for you to hold back it stacks on you like a pil of open draws/

Mediocre emcees marvel at my magnificence
It's no co-incidence you're reduced to insignifcance
It's not that I despise you, this is business man, not personal
But stepping to Proliphik's like WitchDoctor's put a curse on you
You're running over who? Ain't got enough tread in your Firestones
It's getting kinda chilly, cos you JUST ain't spitting fire, homes,
You f*cked around and called me out, you upped and took the wrong lane
I spit hot flames, and I got game like I'm LeBron James
You got heart, kid, I'll give you that, but you'll never be in my class
What's the point in having heart when your skills have had a triple by-pass?

alright..this was a aight battle...
Fine:
hey dawg, ur spit was hella hard to read...some of the words didn't even rhyme

Pro: aight dawg...first two lines were nice voacb and u had a frew lil punches jst enough to beat him

vote: pro

my words are told to the unknown, they will derange to change you/
theses raps are laps that colapse you faster than my crew stomps/

^^ ugh...awful rhyming here


um..

Mediocre emcees marvel at my magnificence
It's no co-incidence you're reduced to insignifcance

good, if not a bland opener


aiyo...i was pullin for fine mind because he had nice vocab and set-up

but, his rhyming hurt him big time...

Dawg...stick to true end rhyme...throw some internals in there


Vote: Pro...better flow and rhyming

Punches were about equal in this...decent, but could have been better on both parts

All constructive critiques are well accepted

uppin for more votes, tho.....

yo Proliphik kilt. plain and simple. beter punches and over all flow was decent. the cpmpetitor verse was good to but you punchez were weak. i don't even know what your were talking bout. i droppe d and honest vote don't forget to return the favor.

vote=Proliphik

uppin for votes - keep 'em coming and we'll return da favour in ur battles....

One.

Proliphik - Alright spit man, had some good vocb in there and some good fro, followed up by some hard hittin punches.

Best Line - Mediocre emcees marvel at my magnificence
It's no co-incidence you're reduced to insignifcance (niice opener)

Worst Line - You f*cked around and called me out, you upped and took the wrong lane
I spit hot flames, and I got game like I'm LeBron James (played)

Find Mind - Alright spit man, had somew good multi's in there. You need to work on your flow a bit and use some harder punches.

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - my words are told to the unknown, they will derange to change you/
theses raps are laps that colapse you faster than my crew stomps/ (stomps and you?... hmm...)

OVERALL - I gotta give this battle to pro, he had better punches and his flowed better. Fine man you gotta get some punches in there and maybe use some personals.. and you gotta work on flowing your lines together better.

VOTE - Proliphik

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121868

i gotta go wit proliphik here.
that shit was nicely put together.
it flowed nice together.
tha punches was landin where they was suppost to.
It was just all in all better overall.
good shit.

vote-PROLIPHIK

im going with proliphik i see this.
Punches = Pro
flow = pro
Creativty = none
Multis = prof
Metas = non

Uppin' for sommore votes - I'ma return the favour & critique ur battles too, I'm sure Fine Mind will too.

Keep 'em coming...

yo prolifik vote in one of my batlles and ill vote in this one aight!

honest votes only please...............................