accomplishment vs. 2bad
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

yo i got this kid...Check... I got white girls for sale...

yeah, wollup, check check! let's go

U strike me as a middle class//surburban kinda dude
talkin tough tryin 2 pass off//an urban attitude
nuthin tastes betta than beef bein chewed
but when i talk about beef//yo i aint talkin bout food

I'll make you eat your words//there weak and over-rated
then tape up ya mouth//to stop them bein regurgitated
your rhymes make me lathargic/.like a form of anaesthetic
your shit dont even rhyme half the time//they're pathetic

I dont wanna fight fair//so prepare for low blows
you've ACCOMPLISHED nuthin//u win ure battles by no shows
im cummin out blazin at this nerd from the "nasty north"
and raisin debate 2 why hes holdin me in joint fourth

I'll sweep u off ure feet but i aint talkin romance
your head will hit the pillow harder than Diana's did in France
ure goin up in smoke like my cannibis plants
u had ure chance//step the fuck bak//and let me advance

Fuckin Punk... Your dead... Bloody fuckin Dead....

Pussy...

Show'd up for fun..this kids verse i had to see..
...look atcha record...
its "2bad" you had to battle me.../
KIlled in my first verse line...i just started...
dirtyboi you put this kid to me...are you retarted.../
readin his verse makes you laugh for a while...
...kids all the way in england...
but he's still crampin my style.../
Aint accomplished alot...cuz i dont' mean to boasts...
...look what you accomplished...
33 POSTS!
Fake englad kid...step up ya pretender...
Amazing cuz most eruropeans know two words...
I SURRENDER!
newb kid yo... i don't really mean to embarrassya...
but how can you be branch status...if you dont live in america.../
Beetles what you ridin how can you stunt b...
how you hard...when a women rules your fuckin country...
Kill you...cuz i hate hearin your words...
...thou bring it back to thy country...
with my shakespearin verbs...

how can u spend a whole verse cussin off england
then close it with a line like "my shakespearin verbs"
:huh: :huh: :huh:

Uppin............. Vote Honestly And Shit Will B Returned

cuz england sucks. And dumbass dats a personal i said i was gonna bring it back to yo country... are you remedial and thats cuz i'm dope and your not

Show'd up for fun..this kids verse i had to see..
...look atcha record...
its "2bad" you had to battle me.../
7
KIlled in my first verse line...i just started...
dirtyboi you put this kid to me...are you retarted.../
7
readin his verse makes you laugh for a while...
...kids all the way in england...
but he's still crampin my style.../
8
Aint accomplished alot...cuz i dont' mean to boasts...
...look what you accomplished...
33 POSTS!
8
Fake englad kid...step up ya pretender...
Amazing cuz most eruropeans know two words...
I SURRENDER!
8
newb kid yo... i don't really mean to embarrassya...
but how can you be branch status...if you dont live in america.../
6
Beetles what you ridin how can you stunt b...
how you hard...when a women rules your fuckin country...
7
Kill you...cuz i hate hearin your words...
...thou bring it back to thy country...
with my shakespearin verbs...
8

damn that is the best structure i had seen on this site. keep it up accomp
amazin verse - only problem is that u came way harder than u need to bcos
he verse wasnt anything special

gd job tho 9/10

U strike me as a middle class//surburban kinda dude
talkin tough tryin 2 pass off//an urban attitude
5
nuthin tastes betta than beef bein chewed
but when i talk about beef//yo i aint talkin bout food
6
I'll make you eat your words//there weak and over-rated
then tape up ya mouth//to stop them bein regurgitated
8 nice
your rhymes make me lathargic/.like a form of anaesthetic
your shit dont even rhyme half the time//they're pathetic
6
I dont wanna fight fair//so prepare for low blows
you've ACCOMPLISHED nuthin//u win ure battles by no shows
7 ok
im cummin out blazin at this nerd from the "nasty north"
and raisin debate 2 why hes holdin me in joint fourth
5
I'll sweep u off ure feet but i aint talkin romance
your head will hit the pillow harder than Diana's did in France
ooohhhhh thats harsh 6
ure goin up in smoke like my cannibis plants
u had ure chance//step the fuck bak//and let me advance
6

nice drop, pretty average that diana line was out of order tho

v/ accomp

hit up the championship match yo

accomp took this. he had much better struture than 2bad, and much better personals and punches.

v/accomp

breakdown for 2bad:

flow:good job here i liked the flow it worked all the way threw the verse 8/10

volcab:pretty good here big improvments over any other verses i've read of yours good job 7/10

punches:this is where your verse seemed to lack you threw a couple of alright lines best,"you've ACCOMPLISHED nuthin//u win ure battles by no shows" nice name flip but aside from that there wasn't too many good lines you need to improve here 5/10

overall:20/30 great verse still need to work on some more concrete direct punches

breakdown for accomplishment:

flow:pretty average i've seen way better from you have you given up since your title match loss? 7/10

volcab:basic array not hating it's just i've read better from you i'm kinda dissapointed 6/10

punches:best part of your verse i'm glad you didn't lax on this too considering the rest of your verse best line,"...kids all the way in england...but he's still crampin my style.../" my only beef with your lines was the feeding off his verse with that accomplished much line that is a rule this is your warning next time i might dq you. anyway good job 7/10


overall:20/30

vote--the breakdown puts this even my vote is for accomplishment though better punches edge him out here

Yo Whats Up// Ok Lets Go

2bad

Punches 9/10
Flowz 10/10
Personals 9/10
Struture 8/10
=36

Accomp

Punches 8/10
Flowz 10/10
Personals 9/10
Struture 8/10
=35

Close Close// Battle Next Time Yo// Iam Just Sayin If Somebody Win In Dis Battle// Do It Count// Or Yo Rec Just Stay

Vote - accomp for a better verse and a non-retarded structure

4-1 accomplishment wins