Native vs. young duke
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

You have no chance

k i got rid of the adebisi battle since you said that was you

Thank you.

I reiterate.... this kid has no chance

checkin in

LMAO....
Aight... here we go
8 lines... you arent worth more....



Read ya battle last week, and Duke ya know what I seen?
That you rhyme 2 words in 3 lines... and think its a rhyme scheme
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Soon you'll be resting.. peacefully... but for now, keep stressin
Til you drop and get laughed at...
...Like Chapelle's Lil Jon impression
You cant see me in text kid... but whats even worse
He wont know what hit him...
...when his cyber sitter blocks half my verse
It must hurt... when my chin check'll misplace ya face
And we know you'll come in last...
...since you were wack in the first place

And if you dont understand the structure..... die!

I'm not worth more than 8 lines?, man what the fuck is you usin,
The only thing you're right about, is that I've got no chance of losin,
Nothin can stop my path of becoming the champ that I'm soon to be,
So I dont give a fuck who you are, or who the fuck you use to be,
So I'll battle Native, adebisi, or any other name you got, you'll still come up short,
We all know what happened to last native in the movie Gangs of New York,
You the type to try and jack nigga ova the Internet, and think you getting his riches,
Now Normally I don’t call my wins, but I also don’t lose to bitches,
So bye bye motherfuker, and I hope you have a nice day,
You can peep your rapperz’ name for the last message I have to say…
~Yung Duke~

Closer than expected.. Duke came personal with one or two decent punches.. but it was all rather basic.. Native was alot more creative an witty.. punches are more original an subtle.. Duke`s first line was a direct feed which goes against him.. plus in the middle your line`s were stretched an knocked off the flow.. but prop`s for actually gettin` personal an dissin` Native.. as opposed to most idiot`s who jus` rant an rave.. Native.. concise, witty an fresh.. structure an rhyme scheme was on point so it flowed easily.. opener an closer were dope.. an you didn`t fall off throughout.. good job.

v/ Native.

^^^

I agree..... this one was closer than I expected. Native came out with a great display of punches and flow was definately there. Yung Duke also came with a shit load of good punches but the thing that killed him was the stretched lines. It made it hard to establish any kind of flow.....

Vote - Native

young duke fed. v/native

breakdown for native:

flow:i liked this part of your verse it worked well in my eyes some alright internal rhyming and so forth 8/10

volcab:pretty basic array here not too much to say 6/10

punches:you address yung duke almost every line but none of it was really too special alot of played ideas 6/10

overall:22/30 good verse

breakdown for yung duke:

flow:worked but nothing too complex 6/10

volcab:basic array i've seen better from you 6/10

punches:alittle mroe direct then native but still nothing too great i'm not gonna quote anything 5/10

overall:17/30

vote--native took this

roflmao @ closer than I expected
v/Native for the son and merk

3-0 native wins