hydroponic_buzz vs. abli
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

Yo

Forget the checkin, I aint no chickin,
This dude needs an ass, to stick his dick in,
Its Hydrophonic Buzz, cus when he spits its like water,
My words come at him and its almost like man-slaughter,
Battles gotta be up by thursday but why wait,
This dude prolly wont even show, and say he forgot the date,
It's a shame aint it, when their this dull,
Cant paint a pretty picture and the paint pallet is full,
So many "P's" where my mother fuckin "Q's"
I aint no time to be polite and say "thank-you,"
I know I've won, cus this dude cant rap for balls,
He stands and practises whilst selling short-cake from the stalls,
Look here, he's scottish, wears a skirt to his knee's,
Tell's us its tradition, yo dude, whatever, please!

checkin in...

at least when i swing a punch, it's straight to the point/
you swing both ways dawg, that can only disappoint/
if you're a little slow, i'm sayin' this g's gay an' straight/
fuckin' a hoe, then meetin' a mate to go on a date/
i have to get it out in the open, i'm bisexual too/
that don't mean i like guys, i just buy-anythin'-sexual dude/
you should've got some practice, before comin' to me/
i guarantee i be an emcee on a killin' spree, so ya' betta' flee/
what the fuck kinda' name is albi supposed to be beeatch/
is it alibi with one i cos i'll leave you one eyed to match/
anyway i've logged in, checked in, dropped ma rhyme, now i'm out/
i grin, leavin' goosebumps in yo' skin, now it' time, to knock ya out/

breakdown for abli:

flow:solid flow some alright internal rhyming through the whole thing good job 7/10

volcab:kinda basic for the most part nothing too amazing almost like you concentrated too much on your flow 5/10

punches:not much your closer was probably the best and it was the same closer the guy that battled buzz used last week so it hardly works this week. try harder shit was mainly played. 5/10

overall:17/30

breakdown for hydroponic:

flow:no off spots still kinda basic though,good job 6/10

volcab:basic nothing special here try harder next week 5/10

punches:you addressed him pretty well mainly played topics and you did close rappin bout your self not good 5/10

overall:16/30

vote--close battle here both of you lacked original punches and should work on that, my vote goes to abli his flow was better

uppin...

This was weak battle.

Albi-

Flow was consistent, it was basic...it was horrible for me to read the verses. Punches didnt really amaze me no creativity at all. Elevate

Hydro-

Flow was basic, Punches was played as fuc....Man u should stop text on the reals. After i read albi shit i taught it couldnt get worse. But it did. Elevate

V/ Albi

alright the breakdown...

first up abli
Yo

Forget the checkin, I aint no chickin,
This dude needs an ass, to stick his dick in,6 decent...
Its Hydrophonic Buzz, cus when he spits its like water,
My words come at him and its almost like man-slaughter,6 dece...not really creative
Battles gotta be up by thursday but why wait,
This dude prolly wont even show, and say he forgot the date,7.5 hahah..pretty good
It's a shame aint it, when their this dull,
Cant paint a pretty picture and the paint pallet is full,7 good...original
So many "P's" where my mother fuckin "Q's"
I aint no time to be polite and say "thank-you,"7.5 good stuff...l likin the flow
I know I've won, cus this dude cant rap for balls,
He stands and practises whilst selling short-cake from the stalls,6 what...decent but not good
Look here, he's scottish, wears a skirt to his knee's,
Tell's us its tradition, yo dude, whatever, please!7 played...but whatever still funny


now for buzz

at least when i swing a punch, it's straight to the point/
you swing both ways dawg, that can only disappoint/6.5 haha...that's pretty good...well worded
if you're a little slow, i'm sayin' this g's gay an' straight/
fuckin' a hoe, then meetin' a mate to go on a date/6 not really a point to these lines...people got it ya dig
i have to get it out in the open, i'm bisexual too/
that don't mean i like guys, i just buy-anythin'-sexual dude/6.5 original and took a chance...but not a punch
you should've got some practice, before comin' to me/
i guarantee i be an emcee on a killin' spree, so ya' betta' flee/
what the fuck kinda' name is albi supposed to be beeatch/5 no no no...boo
is it alibi with one i cos i'll leave you one eyed to match/6 hmmm...i want to laugh someone make me laugh
anyway i've logged in, checked in, dropped ma rhyme, now i'm out/
i grin, leavin' goosebumps in yo' skin, now it' time, to knock ya out/5 stupid...but whatever...all in all not a great verse.. but decent...

vote -abli

he just had a little bit more original stuff...but both did well

Very weak battle....I don't even know why I finished it....

Albi came with very weak punches and flow was shaky in a few spots but not that bad for a newb.....Hydro was wack as shit. No visible punches what so ever. Flow was OK at best......

Vote - Albi for atleast throwin punches.....

abli wins 4-0