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king solo vs. deadly vision
deadlines:
battles go up monday check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 bar min. 16 bar max. |
checkin in to this shit!!!
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Blah!!! ya'll kno the drill. checkity check
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here's my shit
Nice record……I guess pre-writin paid off cuz its got ure ass high rankin And nice avatar……I just got one question, what the fuck is ure mom spankin Rhymes explosive……have ure head explodin next time u get a Deadly Vision Alakazam!......I’m a magician and POOF! I just took away all ure ammunition U never hit……can’t knock shit up cuz like ure nine ure always firing blanks This ure end……pack ure shit up and leave cuz I make a habit of retiring wanks Flow is wack……don’t u know that shit don’t work, u better try another way I be 007……if u drop out this shit right now I might let u Die Another Day Ass is bored……I don’t need to try, I’m just doin this shit cuz it’s killin time Bars are stretched…… I know I’ll win cuz all ure ass will be doin is fillin lines Real killa……u shud understand this cuz I’m a use my methodz to murder u Never get fame……you been here nearly a year and still nobody has heard of u Shit predicted……man I got a Deadly Vision that’s how all this shit was planned Sayin goodbye……I beat u so bad the admin won’t need a reason to have u banned!! |
This will be an easy win...hahaha
http://www.faceparty.com/member_zoo...&img_id=6347124 (His Gay Pic) Quote:
^^Fruitcake You inept-to-cope,Set-to-choke on wat could have been your only hope... Face tHa Factz, Gettin ME on LD Roster is the only way u'll make a vote.. MM got Seamen that'll rape ya throat,just straight Neverous, im serious!.. Nicky Fletcher..haha You've got less chance of 'giving birth'-to-rap then a 13 year old virgins period.. King??, "You Aint Drugged Yet", ILL Stack This Kids "Organs On Shelves" Leaving His Stomach "Up-Set"... You Like A Swade Puppy 10-3..Still a noob "In-side" So How He Rocking A "Core-Vet"... Quote:
^^Herb I'll Cut your "dick" in "half" cause you "Bi-Sexual"... You Could "Ram" "Heads" With "Einstein" you still aint "Intelectual"... Stop lying about your reverse Sexuality, I kno u checking out yo leader Killa bwoy!! but you "Contact-Dick-Son" (Contradiction).. British bastard from UK!! Enough Tutoring you couldnt practice my Skill "So Dont Master us... You out of "ammo" and you talk about "Blast-en-us"(blasphemus)"... Lyrical Destruktion?? Bitch My keystyles just be wild, Go copy and Paste ya Rhymes... Due date? Throw ya Watch Away Cause you’re a Fuckin “Waste-of-Time”... Its like a Fuckin Waste of lines, you sound like a preachers high Whines.... Im The Type to shoot Myself in The Dome… Just to give you a “piece-of-my-mind.... The end. Good Bye Biaaatch. |
Votes.
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Wow... Deadly how are you 13-1? Those bars are stretched as fuck, and you have very few well developed punches in all of that... you had that contradiction line that didn't rhyme with anything...
I've seen that watch line before, word for word, multiple times... everything in this battle when King's way I think... " Nice record……I guess pre-writin paid off cuz its got ure ass high rankin And nice avatar……I just got one question, what the fuck is ure mom spankin" ^^ very nice v/ King Solo |
Votes pplz!!!!
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Hello. Relax it was quick keyd i seen him drop. I taught let me drop. Anywayz. Vote. Cuz Battles should be judged on Punches and personals. Structure...hahaha....
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Yes, but if I typed out a whole paragraph just to get one punch out, that's whack. Bad structure kills your punch, period. Especially because you had a comma every three words, which meant you couldn't develop a punch except by putting quotes in your verse.
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Yeah, I gotta agree with Shadow on this one....
This was the first time I saw either of these guys battle so it was intresting. King solo came pretty hard but for some reason it didn't seem like a rap to me. When I read it, it felt like he was just talkin to him. But the punches were definately there and the flow was ok.......Deadly....I expected more from you and was disappointed. I know that was a quick keystyle but that is what you put up as your verse. I gotta go with king on this one.... Vote - King Solo |
Understandable. King I underestimated ya kid. lol nice battle.
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yea yea nice battle, keep them votes comin!!!!
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Blah!!
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breakdown for king solo:
flow:kinda choppy in some of the bars, they were long lines and not much for internal rhyming to help them 6/10 volcab:good use better then average i guess 6/10 punches:mainly played topics nothing too special my fav,"And nice avatar……I just got one question, what the fuck is ure mom spankin" probably the most played outta the entire verse but it had me laughing 6/10 overall:18/30 well rounded verse pretty good job breakdown for deadly vision: flow:kinda choppy liked you were punching in everybar 6/10 volcab:good job way above your oppenent here 8/10 punches:nice lines here a couple seemed alittle played i've read shit like them before but you did good at putting your own angle on them and you got real personal too my fav,"Nicky Fletcher..haha You've got less chance of 'giving birth'-to-rap then a 13 year old virgins period.." good job 8/10 overall:22/30 good job you surprised me with this verse vote--deadly vision |
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