mic_wrecker vs. spiky2k8
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

checkin in ready to destroy dis nigga let's do it check in spike

i'm check in now i all ready know i'm fin to lose so fuck it
i'm go'n to battle u any way aight
u spit yo verse first
aight

i'm spitn my ryhmes try'n to not waste no time
with little pet't shit caus u fin to get yo ass kicked/
come on u could of rap da first time but this time
i'm i'm finm to fuck up yo mined/
this aint dream my shit gone make want to scream
caus i aint blow out no steam/
i'm da king of this rap game i'm not ashamed if i
win or lose caus u losen yo cool/
yo rap ainr as serious as mine caus your sound more
like sister sister try tobe some fuckn hookers/
come on man u know u fin to win so i'm gonna ask
for a wishh from Genie La Jin/
u probably sayn my raps are and there really rhyming/
yo rap see like butter knife but i cant even rap on
this fuckn site/
i'm only 13years old on this mic still riding with training
wheels on my bike/
so i'm fin to leave this site to write rap caus i'm still
tryn to pick out the naps/

peace
vote 4 me not against

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y waste time spittin against this romper room emcee/
wen his rhymes are like the kids mr jackson prefers.....ELEMENTREE!!!/

u should have heeded yo momma warnin im nothin to play wit//
u culd elevate yo shitty rhymes an still be in the basement//

so just face it you basic//
yo rhymes are like a folded hand in poker nigga....and im 4 aces//

you wouldnt have a winning hand if u was ambidextorous//
my corrosive flow eat throrgh ya face, with the mic i preech my message//

yo flow just trash no way it is a diamond in the rough//
you could *SPIT* 99 bars and that dumb shit still not could b enough//

use yo middle school english to upgrade yo rap gramnmer//
caz readin yo rhymes, u sound like an emcee wit a stammer//

yo battle verse just wasted time off my life//
if u was tryin to cut me w/ ya punches u used the blunt end of the knife//

imma give u an option the next ime u face wrecker//
give up throw in the towel i'd hate 2 put another loss in ya record :thumbup:

uppin 4 votes yall.................................

you wouldnt have a winning hand if u was ambidextorous//
my corrosive flow eat throrgh ya face, with the mic i preech my message//

at first i thought this line killed it bu then i though again and realised that ambidrextrous people dont have a winning hand as they are both equal so that was a weak punch

michael jackons punches are way played



y waste time spittin against this romper room emcee/
wen his rhymes are like the kids mr jackson prefers.....ELEMENTREE!!!/

u should have heeded yo momma warnin im nothin to play wit//
u culd elevate yo shitty rhymes an still be in the basement//

ok punches much better than anythin from spike

spike ya shit was ELEMENTREE!!! lol naa but u need to improve vocab
and get some better meta and rhymes in there
ya structure was iight tho

v/ wrecker

yupp im uppin

spike you verse was weak. and that ambidextrous line was actually kind of funny, and i read it a different way, and mic wrecker wins anyway because spike needs to hella elevate, and he'd still be in the basement. true shit.

i mean spikey: "i'm still 13...." <-- that line was whack... wtf are you knocking yourself for?

appreciated

yo mic killed this battle off

mic had a far better flow to his spit and his was tructured better. i've told u spiky to fix ure structure and work on ure flow and u still aint doin it.
mic came hard with them punches and straight beat ure ass cuz none of ure shit was hittin. that ambidextrous shit was wack cuz u didnt know what it actually meant. and u just showed no creativtiy, whereas mic showed some in his spit taking this battle easily.
V/ - mic wrecker

ambidextorous means use of both hands i no wat it mean, an the nigga wuldnt have a winning hand if he used both of them caz he shitty.....maybe YALL dont no wat ambidexterous mean....the only thing i dont no how to do w/ ambidextiorous is spell it...lol

well i knew that i was gone close anyway man so fuck it i dont care
just another lose man for spiky2k8

the breakdown

first spiky

i'm spitn my ryhmes try'n to not waste no time
with little pet't shit caus u fin to get yo ass kicked/
come on u could of rap da first time but this time
i'm i'm finm to fuck up yo mined/4
this aint dream my shit gone make want to scream
caus i aint blow out no steam/3
i'm da king of this rap game i'm not ashamed if i
win or lose caus u losen yo cool/
yo rap ainr as serious as mine caus your sound more
like sister sister try tobe some fuckn hookers/
come on man u know u fin to win so i'm gonna ask
for a wishh from Genie La Jin/
u probably sayn my raps are and there really rhyming/
yo rap see like butter knife but i cant even rap on
this fuckn site/
i'm only 13years old on this mic still riding with training
wheels on my bike/
so i'm fin to leave this site to write rap caus i'm still
tryn to pick out the naps/

seriously you need to learn something original...please go to teaching forum... keep it elevatin ya heard...
5/10

now for wrecker

y waste time spittin against this romper room emcee/
wen his rhymes are like the kids mr jackson prefers.....ELEMENTREE!!!/
8 haah
u should have heeded yo momma warnin im nothin to play wit//
u culd elevate yo shitty rhymes an still be in the basement//
6 played
so just face it you basic//
yo rhymes are like a folded hand in poker nigga....and im 4 aces//
5 played and bad flow
you wouldnt have a winning hand if u was ambidextorous//
my corrosive flow eat throrgh ya face, with the mic i preech my message//
7 decent
yo flow just trash no way it is a diamond in the rough//
you could *SPIT* 99 bars and that dumb shit still not could b enough//
7
use yo middle school english to upgrade yo rap gramnmer//
caz readin yo rhymes, u sound like an emcee wit a stammer//
7
yo battle verse just wasted time off my life//
if u was tryin to cut me w/ ya punches u used the blunt end of the knife//
7
imma give u an option the next ime u face wrecker//

good battle

vote mic wrecker

breakdown for spiky2k8:

flow:no off spots it worked pretty well not too complex either though 6/10

volcab:basic not much to say you didn't really seem to put much effort here 5/10

punches:not much some open disses nothing really personal and your best lines were at the end and they made fun of you more then anything saying your still using training wheels?? ha ha ha good job at putting yourself down try next week to direct that shit at your oppenent 4/10

overall:15/30 i've seen worse atleast

breakdown for mic_wrecker:

flow:off on some of them lines that were alittle long but overall good jbo 6/10

volcab:better then spiky but still room to improve 6/10

punches:you had some direct punches which spiky didn't so hands down against him you win. but for furture refrence most of your lines were played and you should try to get some original ones best line,"yo rhymes are like a folded hand in poker nigga....and im 4 aces//" 6/10

overall:18/30 alright verse good to see you showing up this time

vote--mic wrecker