jae cyph vs. yungsir
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

i pop cannons at ya face cuz i got hammas on mi waste/ mi hollows would give nichols cage more den two face/ in mi set we slash c's/ don't fuck wit me cuz i'll stump mi timb print in ya lungs if u like smokein tress/ya chick stay on her kness/ nef name jae cyph/ dat shit is wack/ i'll pop and turn ya blue hat 2 a red cap/i new i smelled pussy as soon as i got a wiff of dis cat/pussy i kno u herd me/ i'll make mi guns speak 4 me/ cuz mi hollows throw backs and i ain't talkin bout jerseys/i'll piss were u stand/i got more clipes den da man(cops)/ BLATTTT cops still can't tell who's who/i'll have dem searchin 4 ya body like blues clues/its a rap :nono:

The fuck are you talking about you dumb fuck i`m showing ..


Fuckin` newbies here are homo.

deleted that guy's verse if you want someone to post for you you gotta run it through me first

The Fuck - Hold On Alright
I`m Wondering If That Was A Battle Verse
. . Or A Guide On How Not To Write..
That Drop Was Like . .
Nothin` I've Ever Seen - Fuck . .
No Bluf, I Think Young`s Hot - Meaning Hilary Duff ..
Victory Tough?
Nah` But Yung's Acting Rough . .
And Shit `I Didn't Know Crips Had The Internet And Stuff ..
Wow This Kid Really Sucks At Rap . .
Nickolodian Called` . .
They Said They Want Their Fucking Style Back !
The Hell With This Wise Snot . .
We All Know Jae's Nice .. But Is Y Hot?

. . .Y - Not.

Jay wins. No explanation necessary. I think the other guy had bars in there, but I can't even be fucked to tell, because that verse was so bad.

Word Up , Yo Dirt I`ll Get To My Votes After Work .. pz

roflmao!!
damn
I vote for Jae
although he's fuckin with my net hoe(NottyBabes)
she told me you showed her yo lil ass dick bitch
Im gonna e-slap when I catch you

anywho!

v/Jae Jae!

jae won in every element, punches flow, no real detail for this vote cos it was to un evenly matched, jae got an easy win ere but came wiv a nice verse!

peace

v/jae

Word Up Thanks For The Votes.

I agree with everyone thus far.....no need for any explaination..

Vote - Jae Cyph

jae won this one. Better everything, terrible structure yung.

v/jae

seemed like you two aren't trying, i expected more from both of you.

breakdown for yungsir:

flow:choppy for the most of it you really gotta work on this 4/10

volcab:basic array lots of room for improvment keep working on it 5/10

punches:nothing too direct mainly lines bout yourself being better and some played references to calling him a pussy you need some work here 5/10

overall:14/30 i see that maybe you could be something with some work but not this week

breakdown for jae cyph:

flow:basic nothing too special 5/10

volcab:basic here too you didn't seem to try 5/10

punches:a couple of alright lines not too many though best,"I`m Wondering If That Was A Battle Verse. . Or A Guide On How Not To Write.." i thought that was funny 6/10

overall: 16/30

vote--jae cyph hope to see better from both of you next week

5-0 jae cyph wins