Razer Vs Fine Mind
 

10-20 Lines, No Dickriding, No Crew Votes. Thats It. Drop Within The Next Hour.

Fuck a fist fight, im Choosing-a-Rocket, Abusing-tha-Profit's,
Fine Mind your girl 'Ask'd You Out' coz you was 'Using-her-Closet',
Skan's 'sicker' than 'Chewing-on-Vommit', Fine Mind couldnt be a 'Class Fuck' 'Screwing-in-College',
Im Grabbin, a Dagger & Jabbin the Back of your Bladder,
Blabberin Blagger's are fool's & Wacker-as-Rapper's,
there Wack & There Actors,
but FUCK!! Fine Mind!!, he remind me of 'PISS' coz he 'AINT-SHIT',
booooy, i got more 'RAP' than a 'BLANKET', you Lame-Bitch!!
im Seekin-for-Wealth, Razer'll Weaken-your-Health, I aint Ganksta....
so why 'Talk about Guns'?? when i let my 'GAT' 'Speak-for-Itself'
im Trying-to-Murk Surviving-tha-Dirt,
But I cant battle this kid no more coz he's Trying-to-Flirt....
the MORGUE is soundin like Close-to-Home-Bitch,
we buss shots to make you do Dome-Areobics,
Fine Mind I Hate You!!!!, does that make me Homophobic?? lol
like IRA in Toilets im Known-to-Blow-Shit, Im The Dopest-flow-Kid.


Hahaha.

Drop You Asshole....................................

now razer im gonna put a heart stopper in your tracks, you can't beat me, i'll kik your ass wid my raps/
i'll slap you bitch causeing mass bruising seeing you die from internal bleeding/
you betta stop believeing you an't got one second in a contest, you get chucked out spat right out fast/
i an't trying to defeat you im trying to chopp you into little peices n eat you/
put your dead body in a trash can looking like a weed enbedded looking like a flower pot hah/
rapping an't your thing, no need to winge i just say this to make you twitch/
your a switch turned off, no lights nothing shining bright, you need a new fuse/
I think you still need to go to school, instead of not having qualifications unknoledgable/
i'm on a role, I just stole your spot light, your lerking in the dark in a shaddow/
I put you into perspective cause i know your not energetic, and have a real nice life but live life lomesome with no wife/
you were born at the break of dawn and when your mumma looked at ya she screamed OMG what is it!!!, looking like an old man in a miniture body/ :nono:
this guy is lifeless i couldn't stress lest why I must detest this, you bitch gonna lose, plus all your teeth/
Im the mistical most radical out law, you fall streight onto the floor, say well done and give you an apluad of beefing when tripping ova my shor lace/
i'll hang you on da wall like a picture frame, scribble yout face in crosses to make you look better/
my lyrics twist wat ya say, i throw punches swinging like an arang a tang/ distructing in the opposite direction from me/ you get lumbered and slaughtered/
I get my hand gun out shooting bullets in any direction in ramdom places, hoping 100 bullets land in your face!/
im a polluting gas, im radiational toxic, you get poisoned then burried as fossal/
i can't control my brainwaves there on the max and can't relax, cause my minds so complex/
I bet this fuca reads text from his mumma who's also his secret admirer/
This text works, it lerks stalks then haunts, im like a poltergist ready to give you a shocking fright, it will make you drop out ya skin on a sunday night/
this fools done, he's played the wrong game to think he has won cause bitch your long gone/
I don't care who wins this battle, i just wanted your teeth to rattle and flog ya like cattle!/ :shoot:

Ayt Nice Drop.

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DAMN DOGG fuck 10 20 lines 80 lol shit i cant read it ur structure is too bad

finemind RIPPEd him Had to say it srry

rAzer he got u bad dogg he RIPPEd
you

RAZER
Opener 6/10
Closer 5/10
Structure 4/10
rhymes7/10
FLow 7/10
28/50
Finemind
Opener 8/10
CLoser 7/10
Structure 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
FLow 6/10
33/50

yo yo razer got dis one look

razer you had better structure flows punches and and style you shit was to the point and was easy to read

find yo shit was all right but it realy didnt ryme and sound good you need to work on you style and punches and structure keep up wit it and check in in our battle....aight

what are you talking about man, he got blown to dust.

I think razor had this thing.Both of you had nice verses.But I was feeling Razor's more.He had better flow and punches.Fine Mind,you had some nice imajery,but the punches were lacking.

Nice battle
Vote-Razor

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121809
^^ return tha favor

fine mind won
he had better punches
better flow
and just plain better

return tha favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121108

ok after thouroughly reading this TWICE i presume finemind did indeed take it
5/10 punches both
5/10 format both
5/10 mutlis both
6/10 creativity fine
keep striving its what we here for ...............return the favor yall

Fine mind got this shit easily he had better punces by far structure was a bit off but he hit harder and kept it constant it was basicall just a better verse than razers

my vote fine mind