dirtboy69 vs. kryogenix(topical match)
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
16 bar min.
32 bar max.

topic:You have a condition so rare, it's named after you. This could be negative or positive.

your battling me cause i just found out adebisi was native stupid me

oh and i'm checkin in would be funny if i ended up no showing in my own league right

gave a extenstion for one day i'll have my verse this afternoon

my life is in danger developed a virus that i only suffer by //
my life so young to be trampled out i ponder often why//
running threw the lists of problems i'm yet to start to face//
first you'll run a text battle league then lose all sense of taste//
the league will be over ran with kids who can't show on time//
messaging you beggin for more time like it takes a week to rhyme//
you give in hell it's you there battling maybe they'll post just one line//
then you key up a quick verse almost handing them the victory//
but after this point the diesease will turn and get much worse//
the guy your battlin won't show you'll go off the edge starting to curse//
swearing using everyword you can think and making some up//
then you'll calm like the eye of the storm more problems crop up//
you'll once again realize this is why you have a check in date and rules//
rule one no shows get the boot outta the league just for being fools//
then a new rule don't pm me beggin to open the thread every again!!//
then the bad of the virus starts up and begins all it's raging again//
i die calmly after showing another no show the door and gettin a win//


mah just posted a verse you couldn't show on time doubt you'll show now either

thank you Dirtboy
I really hate losing because of a no-show!

roflmao @ your verse
you DO know that in topical battles, you're supposed to write about the topical and not really diss your opponent right?

it's about the topic, the topic was rap about a desease you have no one else does and i wrote about that.

omfg..^Cam was right..you ARE an idiot..what was your disease?..being a dirtyboy?

Countless test on me, constantly under knifes and lights
Doctors from all over the world wonder how I live my life
I'm tired of all these questions and scientists observing me
And its hurting that I just cant be another guy on the streets
You see, the day that I was born, I didn't even start to cry
And, after the doctor touched me..that doctor died but why?
These tests have thoroughly explained it..I'm contagious
And whenever someone touches me, my body leaks out vapors-
-That's posionus....the only ones immune is my mother and my father
But they're scared to get near me, so why do I even bother?
They say the Kaons in my body, produce too much electricity
And it's Rapidly,getting worse, so it's gradually killing me
And the worse thing about it, I got these disease from the Y-Chromosome
So this is none of my fault, my dad did this on his own!
Mixed with my mom's blood..created the posion in ounces
"K"aons, "R"apidly, "Y"-chromosome "O"unces,put it together.............
................................................. .............KRYO is what it pronounces.....
Double edged sword, my name will live on forever in history
But when someone hears they have it..it's a death delivery!!


Kryo-Rest In Peace!

my desease was being stupid enough to run a text league and let kids who can't show up on time post after the deadline cause they and cry and complain about it. i've been in topical and story leagues before i know what that kind of battle is i was just fucking around why take this too serious i'm not making money from it.

anyway enough free posting lets get some votes!!

^^..so thats your disease

topic:You have a condition so rare, it's named after you.

So, how was it named after you?

the topic says it's named after you why waste lines in the verse saying it's named after you people already know that either way the verse is up and the threads didn't go up late by the way read the rules right inside this thread for example "battles go up monday" enough shit talking though lets just get some voting

kryogenix... that baby and docters died line was a classic...by any standerds.

And dirtyboy, why are you dissin him when its a topical?




hah....

Vote - Kryo for actually doing a half-assed topical piece

roflmao
thats the same thing I said