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Yung Caesar v. Tha X Factor
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yo my punchlines will hit you and leave you fuckin teethless// this is my first battle and i alreddi got this nigga speechless// you might not be able to tell, but i aint rapped in a while// ill still give you an ass whoopin like they did EM in 8Mile// you aint beatin me this rap shit is a part of me// ill tear open your chest and choke you wit your own arteries// but that aint shit, i aint done yet, heres my best and// ill dig into your stomach and jump rope wit your intestines// these lines are unique their from me and only me// i aint rip this shit from noone no matter what you believe// my flow is sick and your just plain trash// ill burn your style down and piss on the ashes// so just face the fact that i ripped you bitch// and this shit was easy i did you away quick// so your the big teaser and im the crowd pleaser// hail caesar nah fuck yung caesar// thats it |
Fuck this nigga
Listen if you was XXX you couldn't be diesel//
Do yall like looseleaf and put 3 holes in each of your people// I'm the type to give you an all day smile// Cuz my clippers drafted me like I was darius miles// Next time I see you in the club with your chain you taking it off// But consider it an investment cuz you just saving your jaw// No way possible you could be a factor wasn't hot here nor shall you be after// Man you couldn't be sick even if you was wet and caught a draft// In the hood you known for licking with your long neck like a giraffe// You like Koonta cuz I'm beating you and telling your name is toby// With your white ass and 80 style rhymes they should call you the reincarnatioin of opey// I cut your face and say your blood like the orange juice dog cuz i leave you pulpy// Word of advice stop fronting you know you hail caesar// Or I have your ass on the meat rack hanging up in the freezer// I know what X is substituted for gotta be fear// Cuz he like a dog cuz its natural for them to take it in the rear// |
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x factor good verse good structer good flow but it was more like a freestyle you even kind of dissed your self and it wasnt that complex just work on that shit for a while then you get alot better and with more complexity... Yung Ceasar his verse was the same style but with more complexity..flow was kinda off in some places but work on that a lil bit and you could be a big head on this shit just stay somewhat active... vote Yung Ceasar |
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x facter won this easy, he had the punch lines and the right structure. You noth had good verses but x had more ryming and flowing involved. Yung ceaser was a close battle but got weakened after the heavy blows from x.
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Word Up To X Factor
Ya Rhymes Were Good But Voters Don't Appriciate It Like Mines Ya Wordz Were All Good, They All Match Up With Each Other X Factor Overall: 7/10 Yung Ceaser Overall:4/1o Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
x factor - for a first battle that was pretty tight. You where gettin' digs into yourself at the start which dropped ya' a couple of marks, but flow an' structure where good.
fav line - "ill tear open your chest and choke you wit your own arteries//" nice an' aggressive! caeser - also pretty tight, i wasn't feelin' some of yu're punches but it flowed well. "I cut your face and say your blood like the orange juice dog cuz i leave you pulpy//" what the f*ck was that all about? i have to give this one to x-factor he had some nicer punches and i think his flow was better, good battle... |
yo X nice verse for your first battle. you had nice mutiples. but caesar took the cake. he had a nice verse and multiples. alittle shaky at times but overall nice verse. And x try to stretch your lines out. ceasar you won clearly b/c of your punches. i would love to battle either of you when yall elavate.
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ceaser takes dis 1 wit better wordplay and betta punches same structure doe but ceaser u came strong on dis newb check it bestline-Next time I see you in the club with your chain you taking it off// But consider it an investment cuz you just saving your jaw// nice wit it punches-ceaser vocab-ceaser structure-both flow-ceaser winner-ceaser |
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