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shadow 05-03-04 07:37 PM

discharge vrs ..ILL..
 
ok loser leaves the crew like you said
u challenged so you spit first
dotn back down
10 lines max
no pre written garbage and there is crew votes!!!!!!!!

shadow 05-03-04 07:44 PM

oh yean and if you dont spit by 9 this battles gonna be closed so hurry up

..ILL.. 05-03-04 07:55 PM

no becuz I have 5 battle open so wait for one of them to close....then ill drop change that rule

..ILL.. 05-03-04 08:52 PM

check it....if da army want to vote against me thats not right becuz no crew votes should be aloud....I dont think they are so read the rules....choppa said no crew votes in this battle so
check it....
Discharge you wack as hell you wack as rhymin isnt gone get ya far
My rhymes leave ya behind the window like yo wack ass mike myers avatar
His record he 9-0 becuz hes battlin newbs but ya cant beat me (G)
Someon stop this bitch discharge b4 I charge this battery....(get it)
You made you dont get no pussy so ya sux dick for a doller...
This bitches rhymes is so bitched they make you turn blue the same color as night crawler...
He pop wit fuckin water guns he dont fuckin pop with nines....
He battles newbs that dont know how to set it up in front lines.....
So go ahead and get ya crew votes becuz true votes is what ya lack....
Becuz now im like the terminator so if ya beat me ill be back....


go ahead and get ya piles in da crew to vote fo ya...becuz you know thats what ya goin to do.....

shadow 05-03-04 09:02 PM

no crew votes man nice drop aight im checkin in holla

..ILL.. 05-03-04 09:08 PM

thanks good luck also.....Hope ya get ta stay in da crew aight.....

shadow 05-03-04 09:25 PM

for u this battle will be uphill, you could have hivs and still not be' ill"//
beatin me is your dream, that you cannot fufill,becuz you lack "skill"//
ull be my next kill,u must like losin i guess it gives you a thrill//
ok ill tell the truth, let the beans spill,leave rapbattles stay home and chill//
you lost this you should detect, realize the fact that uve been wrecked//
your punches were not only weak but incorrect,you clearly cant make them connect//
from a bitch like u what can we expect, u wont get one vote its called "wack mc neglect"//
heres the truth with-all-respect, if you think your rhymes are sweet get yourself checked//
now right here its time for the truth admit,you cant and never will be able to spit//
your rhymes are just plain shit, so next time think before you right garbage and pres"submit"//

..ILL.. 05-03-04 09:27 PM

lol....I think I got ya on this one.....Nice closiner.....

shadow 05-03-04 09:31 PM

well man your wasnt bad lets see what the voters think lol uppin^

T12U3 K1LlA 05-03-04 09:34 PM

..ill.. Plz Thing Again Nigga In My Opinon U Actually Did Good For *once* But I Still Think Discharge Won But I Cant Vote So O Well

Triple_N 05-03-04 09:35 PM

Not a good battle....Both y'all had weak punches an need to elevate
ILL....you had weak punches, no personals, no multies, no wordplay, basic vocab, bad opener, horrible closer, no creativity, decent flow, good structure

Dis....you had weak punches too, but some were hit ok, good use of multies was your strong point, basic vocab, no personals, no wordplay, weak opener, ok closer, a little creativity, decent flow, structure was messed up though
Breakdown:
Flow: Ill
Structure: Ill
Punches: Dis
Personals: Tie
Opener: Dis
Closer: Dis
Wordplay: Tie
Creativity: Dis
Multies: Dis
Vote: Dis

unique_rhymes 05-03-04 09:36 PM

aight this is what im feelin, i think discharge has this one although i thought that both of your guys's shit was weak i was did like discharges closer,


My vote goes to Discharge

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

BoRn2SpiTT 05-03-04 09:37 PM

Ill:
Discharge you wack as hell you wack as rhymin isnt gone get ya far
My rhymes leave ya behind the window like yo wack ass mike myers avatar
-nice opener.. 7/10
His record he 9-0 becuz hes battlin newbs but ya cant beat me (G)
Someon stop this bitch discharge b4 I charge this battery....(get it)
-forced... work on that
You made you dont get no pussy so ya sux dick for a doller...
This bitches rhymes is so bitched they make you turn blue the same color as night crawler...
-another forced one with lack of wordplay and "spelling"
overall:7/10

Discharge:
for u this battle will be uphill, you could have hivs and still not be' ill"//
beatin me is your dream, that you cannot fufill,becuz you lack "skill"//
-ill personal opening
your punches were not only weak but incorrect,you clearly cant make them connect//
from a bitch like u what can we expect, u wont get one vote its called "wack mc neglect"//
-nice punch with them multies
now right here its time for the truth admit,you cant and never will be able to spit//
your rhymes are just plain shit, so next time think before you right garbage and pres"submit"//
-ill closer..
overall:8.5/10

Ill u did good at beginnin and then u went downhill wit ur flow and punches..

Discharge u started off good wit ur flow and nice structure and u ended it like that.. much props

vote=discharge

BoRn2SpiTT 05-03-04 09:38 PM

HAHAHAH Ill ur wack kid... blacklist me?? nigga ur the wackest bitch ive ever seen or heard of.. get the fuck off this forum and go rap elementary kids nigga.. oh ya.. make sure u dont run and "snitch" for unexplained votes this battle bitch.. punkass

shadow 05-03-04 09:49 PM

hey you little bitch y did you blacklist him huh??
u fuckin faggot take him off now thats cheap ass hell man u wack


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