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A$e 05-03-04 08:01 PM

puertoricanelly vs. A$e
 
here's da rules:
no d/r votes
no crew votes
straight 16 bars
no hatin votes
u spit first homie

puertoricanelly 05-03-04 08:02 PM

heres my check in.

puertoricanelly 05-03-04 08:37 PM

Ill cutcha throat just to watch you [BleeD]
U newbies always wanna [LeaD]
but ill reak havok just so you wont [SucCeED]

SOn ill treat you like a storm, you soon to [BlOw OvEr]
u like my lawn, u jus anotha weed to [Mow Over]

u cant stop hurt when you battling the [DeViL],
u couldnt even stand on me if i were in water and you were above sea [LeVeL]

IM in Da army where we carry every lyrical [weapon]
we drop half of yall hater wit land mines, so watch where u [steppin]

im standin in da army's sniper aimin atchur [HeAd]
A$e, you saw a drop of red, and your scared ass drop to the floor dead/

and what kind of name is A$e, the only thing good is the sign in the middle which should be my Middle Finger flippin [YOU OFF]
in real life you a bitch, so dont come on the Enet thinkin you hard when on the real [you soft]

puertoricanelly 05-03-04 08:39 PM

im done cuz where your spit at?? and i only took 30 min so i guess thats how long you have

A$e 05-03-04 08:45 PM

here i go!!!!!!
 
puertoricanelly, u sittin here talkin' about u sold dis n shot dat/
when u ain't street smart n get laid da fuck flat/

n u frontin' on me like my rhymes ain't phat/
i'ma pull da slide back n i ain't talkin bout playground jack/

and u so gassed up, dat chu damned near bout bloated/
n ya'll can tell dis nigga sweet cuz he's candy coated/

look nigga, i thought i told ya/not to sleep on me so now i gotta give u dat folgers/flow

how u want it? caffinated/ or, decaffinated/ don't get cha self decappitated/
my flow is naturally hot, ya shit is overrated/

u wanna blow up n dis game but u gon' get inflated/
u had some color when u started nigga, now u faded/

n deez people love A$e, i ain't got no haters/
n i wanted to end ya rap career today but shit i'll do it later/

n dog u can't chase dis cat, matter of fact you a pup/
u don't have a engine so who really gassin u up?
:laugh2:

vinman 05-03-04 10:43 PM

i liked this battle nice flow and everything hers the break down


this battle goes to petro cuse of his punches only both of you were tied in flow sturture and everyhting else but petro punches were way beta by a long shot this one goes to himv/ petro

BigTony.Self 05-03-04 10:47 PM

i gotta say this was a fun battle for me but never the less im goin with puerto.
his rymes were from his own mind i just kept thinkin during A'S flow "where have i heard this before" alltho a close battle i think p took it keep rising yall........

LaTiNKiTTeN 05-03-04 11:31 PM

well..i think both were weak...nelly...that coloured font is very annoyin.........ya need to stop doin that..........ase....ur verse was horrible it was actually annoyin...while neither were good..nelly's was better...cuz it didnt make me wanna kill myself......
but take that colored font out

MARVOLoUsJ1009 05-03-04 11:39 PM

aight umm cool verses from both of ya'll

opener-nelly..i just felt his shit more
structure-a tie both of u had some fukked up lines..nelly leave da colors alone dunn lol
punchlines-umm damm another tie
creativity-nelly
flow-ase
wordplay-ase da coffee shit
personals-nelly
enjoyed-ummm it was real close but i gotta go with nelly..both of ya'll need da step ya shit up tho

my vote-nelly

return da favor ya'll da link is in my sig...GON

puertoricanelly 05-03-04 11:47 PM

Uppin Votes yall!

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-04-04 12:16 AM

Yo I Think Puertoricanelly Won Dis Shit// Its Simple He Had Good Punches//
Nice Flowz//
And Nice Struture//

And Yo Lk I C U On Every Battle Thread// U Good// But Yo Mouth Its Makin U No Respect At All// Iam 4 Real U Keep Sayin Dat He Is Weak// She Weak// I Mean Have Some Respect Yo// Holla Back// No Beef Just Tellin Ya


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