Killa Khem vs. lilchiofthachi
 

12 lines...match my shit...

keyin this...

watch me murder this bitch, Killa herbing him quick
destroying the fag with punches, i average thirty a fist
open your eyes man, how long will it take for you to see
that even when you enter your prime, you'll lose to me
i'm baking this clown, then shitting on him, my crapping is shown
throwing nothing but jawbreakers that'll crack through his bones
this is no where near my best, but fuck it, i'm restless
i promise this fool will be out before i can deliver my next hit
your verse is waiting to heat up, mine is baking with haste
my words are clinched fists that'll break through your face
my flow is just so strong, this fool is forced to drown
the only place you'll be getting wins is the lost and found

if you don't win this...you must really suck...

u steppin up to tha prince of tha chi,keep spittin imma shoot u till u die/u think im playin imma pull out may gat,like OJ im bout 2 murder this cat/u one of them dick ridas,say u good but u a liya/u gon tha second nigga imma have to murder,u must be new cause i aint neva heard of ya/im bout ta beat ur ass and take u bitch,then ill rape her and put her in a ditch/i really dont like 2 cuss but u bring it out,keep fuckin wit me imma show u wat Chi about/ive seen pencils bigga then ya dick,go on tha corna cause 2 me u aint nuttin but a trick/u jus been burnt,now u can tell ur friends wat u learnt/imma finish u like this killa khem,u look like 1 of them dudes from Camp Jim

alright people, lets try and gets some votes on this...

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alright people, lets try and get some votes on this...

khemistry - aight u had a sick flow....but the punches....only a couple were okay.....u jus said wut u are able to do....gotta elevate there by using personals and meta's....wordplay was decent....elevate....
lil chi - alright first off fix ya structure....that shit is hard to read....flow sucks....use a better rhyme scheme....get wordplay....u had no alright punches....everything was weak....go to tutorials and learn a few things....

vote - khem

khem nice verse. lilchi you give chi a bad name. i guess its b/c you're new. anyway khem nice punches and multiples. lilchi you cam eto strong and youe message was shitty. keep writin son b/c you need the practice. you need to think about what your writtin. khem nice verses and multiples. keep it going. return the fava

vote=khem

Aight Check It..

Khemistry: 6/10
I Liked Your Verse, Punches Weren't All There, but Your Opener Was Decent, Liked Da Metaphor. I Think I've Seen You On Old.Rb....But Not Sure. Keep Your Shit Hot Kid...Work On Personals And Shit..

LiLChio...ugh...fuck the rest...lol: 2/10
Your Structure Was Wack, Punches Weren't Even Felt. Just Elevate On Punches, Metas, Multis, Personals, Structure, and Wordplay. Elevate Man.

Easy Win For : Khemistry

~R~

khemistry had the flow on lock and I just wasnt feelin lilchio. This one goes to khem

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Lilchio read a battle!!! there called bars, gets some. No one can feel ya shit whenyoucramitalltogetherseewhatImean

Khmen good structure, nice flow, nice punches the whole way through, I liked your opener. Lilchio your shit was alright but you realy need to elivate ya style particully ya flow and get more creative with ya punches.