LiL ChucKy vs MaRVOLOUSJ1009
 

10-20 lines
regular rule
you spit first
drop within an hour

JEa!!!

y spit at you dunny when i could hit u & ya squad up with uzzi's-
truly!...i seen ya raps i already proved ya bars couldn't move me-
ya name "lil chucky" rite then i guess ya pops was dat "doll in da movie"-
(lol..get it)

but lets talk about ya moms she a easy hoe,im da reason her knee's be low-
i "cum in her eye" so she "watch all my children" & i dont mean dat "tv show"-
ppl chucky's gay believe me tho,he go da men da get a wee wee blow-
now of days i cant take a take a piss cuzz every where i pee he go-

he luv my style he be like damm u marv, did u use da "fix bikes" by da way u "handle bars"-
fukk it if u want beef we could take it 2 da "streets" like "brand new cars"-

im in a newbie battle cuzz all da vets 2 wack,dont talk chuck i suggest u rap-
cuzz when u hear "clipse spittin" dunn they not gon be on a "neptune track"-

y would u agree on dis dunny but im glad dat you hype-
but "chucky" u sad and u gon Lose every battle In Life-

chucky dis lame is trash,ima grab da thang and blast just stain his mask-
dunny get ya brain a cast,im from nyc where dem 2 planes had crashed-
on every rapper poll on rapbattles u could bet ya name is last-
talk tuff ima clap at ya "legs" & even "labron james" aint gon be able da save ya "cavs"-


GON...

aight dunn u got like a half hour da drop..........

damm dis muthafukka got offline...no more newbie battles me

"Ayo sorry so late"

Ayo, I'm sittin back n relaxin not worryin bout slackin./
Marv, you shouldnt battle, cuz i'll straight wack ya./
I don't play games, i type flames, that take aim at ur skillz./
Sorry dawg' tha momma jokes don't faze me/
My momma's dead, and i'm bout to lay you on ur death bed./
Battlin might just be my game, my one loss against spitt, i'll take tha blame./
Yea i'm a newbie, but my lyrics are hard you might just sue me./
I aint got cable or dsl, regular 56k baby keep it on tha down-low./
lay-low marv cuz this shit's about to explode, believe me theres no code./
About to keep things quiet n hear tha votes, cuz to u i'm tha pope./

UPPIN FOR VOTES
"Ayo sorry so late"

Ayo, I'm sittin back n relaxin not worryin bout slackin./
Marv, you shouldnt battle, cuz i'll straight wack ya./
I don't play games, i type flames, that take aim at ur skillz./
Sorry dawg' tha momma jokes don't faze me/
My momma's dead, and i'm bout to lay you on ur death bed./
Battlin might just be my game, my one loss against spitt, i'll take tha blame./
Yea i'm a newbie, but my lyrics are hard you might just sue me./
I aint got cable or dsl, regular 56k baby keep it on tha down-low./
lay-low marv cuz this shit's about to explode, believe me theres no code./
About to keep things quiet n hear tha votes, cuz to u i'm tha pope./
Yesterday 11:49 PM

lmaooo wow duny u like a day late since they dont wanna dq u...can we get some votes ppl

UPPPPPPINNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!! 4 VOTES..................drop links do whuteva just ppl lets get dis shit closed 2 day

this battle sucked ass.. what the hell does dunny mean.. yes marv your verse was weak too. but you had a few good punchez at the end. your verse looked alitle writtin though. hey chucky keep writtin yo you're gonna elavate soon. but marv you get this battle simply b/c you had better punchez, nothin mo nothing less. and you didn't win off talent........

vote=MARVOLoUsJ1009

^^^^^^lmaooo yo whut da fukk is wrong with lyrical dude..talkin madd recless...UPPIN 4 MORE VOTES

y spit at you dunny when i could hit u & ya squad up with uzzi's-
truly!...i seen ya raps i already proved ya bars couldn't move me-
ya name "lil chucky" rite then i guess ya pops was dat "doll in da movie"-


^^ dawg...plz. don't laugh at your own lines...it's really asanine

um...good opener
he luv my style he be like damm u marv, did u use da "fix bikes" by da way u "handle bars"-
fukk it if u want beef we could take it 2 da "streets" like "brand new cars"-

^^ good wordplay...forced punch...

chucky dis lame is trash,ima grab da thang and blast just stain his mask-
dunny get ya brain a cast,im from nyc where dem 2 planes had crashed-
on every rapper poll on rapbattles u could bet ya name is last-
talk tuff ima clap at ya "legs" & even "labron james" aint gon be able da save ya "cavs"-

^^^ pretty decent closer...and btw, the verse I did was weak cuz look who I went against...u ain't got to come all up in da threat sippin haterade


pretty good verse...it flowed well...but, the punches weren't all that hard hitting...it seemed like yoiu were just trying to dazzle your opponent than knock him out...he's still standing, trust me.


ne way...

Ayo, I'm sittin back n relaxin not worryin bout slackin./
Marv, you shouldnt battle, cuz i'll straight wack ya./

^^ that was not good...and listen, you're not going to lose this battle becuse your bars are shorter...or even because he used more multis (which is his CHOICE, not god-given right)...you're going to lose this because you feel for his trap...he razzled yiou


you simply didn't come hard enough to beat him


Vote: Marv

aight i just voted on like 5 battle can u niggaz pleez return dem favor's pleez its no reason y battle's should be up 4 more than a day...niggaz gota stop bein lazy if u view dis battles just drop a vote

aight
not really close
better punchez, multiez, similiez, and wordplay by marv

Chucky your verse didnt seem to rhyme in placez.
no multiez mettaz, or nothin
Vote marv (ok opener and a good clozer)

Chucky- u didnt rhyme all da time and i didnt like ur flow. You need some better punches and metas... Also try to get a tight ass opener and closer ok.

Marv - u had a good opener and closer which is important. I didnt like ur structure or flow that much, but u got a dif style.. which i do kinda like i guess lol. Anyway u had better punches which is needed in a good battle.

Vote : Marv

could i get some votes on my battlz plz.. holla