Afterword vs. KiNg SoLo
 

Rules:

10-15 Lines Max.
No D/r
No Hate
No Crew

U Spit First Playa!!

VOTE ON THIS BATTLE AND ILL HITCHUR BATTLE UP CUZ CATZ AINT VOTIN ON MY SHIT AND IVE VOTED ON THEIRS , IF YOU WANT A VOTE HOOK MA BATTLE UP HERES THE LINK
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122221

fuckin dont take all day about it
just spit already!!!

fuck this clown
i'm outtie
this bitch dont wanna spit
i'll drop sumthin later
maybe ure bitch ass will have thought up sumthin by then

dont forget vote on dope delivery vs tonyself while waiting favor be returned ..........honest votes

damn homie, chill out
u actin like u in a rush to get ya ass-whooped
checkin-in

--Yeah
----Yo
------Check

welcome to yur last fuckin days under the name KING SOLO
cuz you’ve been blastin thru these gays at an amazing pace, KING HOMO( check sig)
so please redeem ya flow, cuz ya LULLABIES have bee NULLIFIED
I got flows so tight, im leavin fraudulent kings MUMMYFIED ALIVE
Get cooked country-fried, cuz I aint leavin, without bringin REPERCUSSIONS
The fact that you trash yur wack drafts, doesn’t equal LYRICAL-DESTRUCTION
Lyrical malfunction should be the THEME, and yur the worst artist on da TEAM
So stop actin like rappin is yur THING, in a group but claim that yur the solo KING?
Yeh im a hustla so I, sold-them-things just to gain some INDEPENDENCE
You could sell yur soul to the devil himself, and u still wouldn’t WIN-THIS
we could end-this with our fist, but you would hide like a SHELLFISH
then end up another white king thats dead, just like ya boy ELVIS

peace

i'm back and ready to spit
check this royal shit

‘Afterword’…u just a fuckin herb, spittin beats like u an MC, ‘that’s absurd’
I sink more beats than ‘free-throws’…u cud just call me MC Larry Bird
This cud be the ‘Simpsons’ u getting clowned more than ‘Krusty’…trust me!!
Can’t hit shit with ‘skills-so-rusty’ can’t buy a vote with OLD ‘bills-so-dusty’
Ure rhymes criminally-wack, and when the votin’s done ure ass will be 5-0’ed
Give u an immediate-death-sentence, I’ll sit back and watch their nines explode
Cud be an action-figure u more fake-n-plastic than ure avatar ‘Michael Jackson’
You best step ‘back-son’ cuz I’m now ready to make my royal ‘attack-run’
U can mummify me cuz ain’t u seen the film bitch……’The Mummy Returns’
I’ll come back spittin flames so hot they leave u covered in third degree burns
Ure spits the wackest in history, consistently failin to bring a ‘diss-to-me’
U lost so many times ure ass don’t know how to spell the word VICTORY!
U shud consider bein a comedian cuz ure spits always fillin me with laughter
I’m done lyrically clownin u, now its time for the beatin I saved for after…WORD!

get it......after...WORD --- afterword.......lmfao!!!
and if u dont get the 5'O'ed line then ure just fuckin stupid!!

and boy dont u know gay jokes are played like fuck
and these two lines
Yeh im a hustla so I, sold-them-things just to gain some INDEPENDENCE
You could sell yur soul to the devil himself, and u still wouldn’t WIN-THIS
they didnt even fuckin rhyme

get sum fuckin skill bitch
no wonder ure ass has lost so many times

oh yeah......UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

aight ppl...
Solo:
Spit: 7/10
punch:7/10
multi:4/10
Overall: 18/30
aight..ur punches were alil simple...but still killed after word...you jst need ta uppin the vocab alot...aigt

Afterword:
Spit:6.50/10
punch:6.50/10
multi:4/10
overall: 17/30
aight...ur punches were basicly nothing compared to solo's..n u gotta put more thought in to it

vote kindsolo

Afterword vs. KiNg SoLo [VOTES PLZ!!]
 

get uppin on this battle plz!!
i'll return the favour with honest votes!!

:
Spit: 7/10
punch:7/10
multi:5/10
personals: 6/10
Overall: 24/30
aight..ur punches were alil simple...but still killed after word...you jst need ta uppin the vocab alot...aigt

Alrite this was a good battle, nice drops from both
Afterword:
Spit:6/10
punch:6/10
multi:4/10
personals: 4/10
overall: 20/30
Vote: King solo

aiight good battle....both people had hott verses afterwordz had some sick punches and a personal and so did king solo...alot of wordplay and multies between the two

breakdown:

afterword:
flow:7/10
wordplay:7/10
multies:6/10
punches:6/10
personals:4/10
structure:8/10
overall: 38/60

king solo:
flow:8/10
wordplay:7/10
multies:5/10
punches:8/10
personals:5/10
structure:6/10
overall:39/60

vote: king solo

i think both verse were good but afterwords u need to come up with more original and hard hitting punches i think if u had one more hard punch u would have tooken my vote...as for king solo...your verse was the same i think u edged afterwords out because you had 1 or 2 harder hittin punches good stuff from both ~!1!~

uppin on this shit ppl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!