CoIIab vs uzimaximus
 

unlim bars
blind
no hate, no crew, no d/r
.........................check.. due by 8 pm (pacific)

This is a battle not a fight/
you say you can freestyle, man you cant even write/
i dont care how long u been flowin, or about the time/
you say you are a begginer, thats no excuse/
who the f*ck cant rhyme/
you always actin ghetto, but you kinda have the right/
you are half black, but dont forget , your also half white/
in your freestyle tunnel there is no light/
my lyrics are comin without any flaws/
you better hold your teeth in your mouth cause my flows are so good they drop jawz/
i leave people in awwww/
im spiten so fast ill give myself whiplash/
but i never fucked up to where i couldent whoop your a$$/
all your flows are lame/
every single one sounds the same/
my flows wil put you to shame/
i guess rap aint your game/
im so good ill make your eyes spin/
you r about to get knocked the bitch out like mike tyson/
ill knock your teeth out with one hit thats hard/
the tooth fairy will say "f*ck it here's a mastercard"/
you think you so bad and hard/
but really ive seen worse words in valintine cards/
all your rhymes are whack/
all your flows aound like elimentary school kids come backs/
and you are always callin me a wanna be n*****/
when you r the one thats the 100% wigger/
i droped out of school to get my all time low score/
now the only akademiks i have are a couple of valore/
your like stairs you get steped on/
you dont give a fuck what your lifes gonna depend on/
for all you no you could become a bum on the street with no foot to eat, or any shoes on your feet/
im like a chiar i rock/
ill kill you in a drive by like 2pac/
your like and old wet tree you wil eventaily rot/
ill put you on the spot/
im reppin 2004, scotland is where i shot/
if you think this flow is whack then you didnt read it correctly/

damn^^^ way to drop 45 lines/// haha , " i didnt mean that unlimited"

is it really neccisary to key on this "maximus"?
lets put morals in back of us. my consience wants me to smack this puss.
pussy cats drop bombs more appealing to examine then his verse.
cant say its the worst. ima burst witta knuckle, droppin his soul in a hurse.
put his freedom in a curse, i captured his life wen i keyed to this phony.
nissan maxima seems slow in high definition, playin x-box on my sony.
competition never put it on me. i find myself lonley in SF and RB.
these days ppl is fearing my call out, and this boy volunteers so freely.
this kids droppin 45 lines, expectin a positive outcome.
not OG enough for a mic, back stage and behind curtains is wer you shouts from.
cus if thers one thing worse than yor verse, its yor face.
this niggas been jumped so many times, ughs left smiling with one brace.
damn, this is my worst drop since i used to spit like you.
i dont needa spit, i could mic you dressed as a white jew.
despite who comes at me, im always the preditor.
that was a great snack- but im still craving more.

you better hold your teeth in your mouth cause my flows are so good they drop jawz/
i leave people in awwww/

yo thats way to stretch man u need to even it out somewhat ya know format is everything woulda been decent if you previewed and made some simple adjustments


collab ....i thought you took it to em more personal and punch better flowed a lil nicer tho still a bit choppy just work on em and keep strivin its why we here good luck to both of ya in future
Big ups to honest votes........http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122363