MARVOLoUsJ1009 VS TonySelf(Gotta See It)
 

10-25
no crew
u spit first
30 min after checkin
no d/r

Yo tony me an you coolan shit but my nigga marv gon lay it down in this mothafucka

jea...checkin in aight let me add some more rules in dis bitch

first 3 votes t.k.o...and im not spittin till u check in dunn just incase u get offlines after i drop shit

checkin in i asked you to BATTLE man DONT THINK IM GOIN NO WHERE!

okay....lets get it goin

u'z a real bitch plus ya spit's wack 2,,niggaz i'll let dem clipps clap u-
i'll catch ya ass "in da club" and put "50" in ya back like "his tattoo"-
(think about dat)

nigga dat big chrome ruga is big,then dem bullets a start removin ya rib's-
u not gangsta so stop it be4 u end up just like dat dude in ya SIG-[look]

i could merk u fast or slow,my disrespectful bars a harrass ya flow-
nigga i dont smoke shit so you'll neva hear me sayin pass da dro-
but tony u abuse drugs u like dat "audio software" u a "acid-pro"-
ask ya hoe,i come sick u dumb prick i'll put ya ass in a bag da go-

when i spit dogg all u do is stop and just stare,fagget u luv cock in ya rear-
seriously stop rappin tony ya "time's up" like u "threw ya watch in da air"-

if u a cool dude tony u could die calm,cuzz i move with 9 arms-[guns]
only "punch-line" u know about was waitin 4 "drinks" at ya "junior high prome"-


GON....

Give you quik rap and bitch slap your mind design is pitch black
Holes thru your lines, like sweaters and knit caps

given so much head i call your fuckin ass- laptop
so much pussy in you couldn t wip the tar outta -asphalt

Im strait bannas to monkeys, everytime that i spit raps
No wonder they call ya shithead, its placed in your ass

Gimme a break, this kit kat just isn't a hershey
your style gettin throwNback, like old lakers jerseys

I look at empty milk cartons just to see your rymes missin
just like your lyrics skill and style over struggles for dissin

Your quik remedy for rymers aka writers block
is shedin clothin before closin lips rite down on my cock

Your thoughts of human downloading so you can have my spot
your not.... better yet your chances just went down a notch

Now you expired just so tired from my lyrical vile
lookin for those.. lyrics for hire.gonna be searchin awhile

forget it.. you been exposed so i suggest you retire
i send you West and spit your ass right thru the wire

Rap aint dicksuckin son if it was,you'de be inspired
Lyrics filled with so much heat, like athletes they perspire

Your ryme style resembles erosion all washed away
Eplosions in your mind overdosing on rymes i display

If your raps were helium son you still couldn t elevate
Your like a fat kid with broken leggs can't hold up your weight

aight umm can we get some votes ppl.................

iight, i'll guess i'll be da first to vote....

marvelous...ya flow was straight, da punches and all of dat, but you had little wordplay to me.

But on the other had wit tonyself, to me, his flow was getting kind of boring like in the middle, then he came back wit some wordplay dat jus got me..

Good battle but my vote goes to tonyself.

^^^????yo y is dat u only vote in my battles and u stay votin against me...uppin 4 real votes

uppin............................................. ..........

u'z a real bitch plus ya spit's wack 2,,niggaz i'll let dem clipps clap u-
i'll catch ya ass "in da club" and put "50" in ya back like "his tattoo"-
(think about dat)


^^ Aiyo...quit wit the "think about dat" --ish man...we smart..we get it! lol

when i spit dogg all u do is stop and just stare,fagget u luv cock in ya rear-
seriously stop rappin tony ya "time's up" like u "threw ya watch in da air"-

^^ kinda played punch...but well set up
if u a cool dude tony u could die calm,cuzz i move with 9 arms-[guns]
only "punch-line" u know about was waitin 4 "drinks" at ya "junior high prome"-


^^ good closer...hit hard


um...


Give you quik rap and bitch slap your mind design is pitch black
Holes thru your lines, like sweaters and knit caps
^^ excellent rhyme and set up...punch wasn't that hard tho...


Your quik remedy for rymers aka writers block
is shedin clothin before closin lips rite down on my cock

^^ good there man
Your ryme style resembles erosion all washed away
Eplosions in your mind overdosing on rymes i display

If your raps were helium son you still couldn t elevate
Your like a fat kid with broken leggs can't hold up your weight


^^ aiyo...lol...nice hard verse dawg...was feelin it and I love ur style...but, the helium line was kinda corny


FLow Tony
Rhymes Tony
Punches Tony

Vote: Tony...verse hit so hard, I was feelin bad...lol


good battle fellas

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Damn this was a one sided battle, Tony ya came hot and off the top,


Opener- nice metta's tony, but marv's was origional and clever so Marv
Mettas'-Tony, nice, mettas realy enhanced ya punches
Flow- Marv your seemed a bit choppy, which made it a toughter read, so Tony
Punches- No big surprise here, Tony thoses were some nice punches,

given so much head i call your fuckin ass- laptop
so much pussy in you couldn t wip the tar outta -asphalt

Im strait bannas to monkeys, everytime that i spit raps
No wonder they call ya shithead, its placed in your ass

Gimme a break, this kit kat just isn't a hershey
your style gettin throwNback, like old lakers jerseys

I look at empty milk cartons just to see your rymes missin
just like your lyrics skill and style over struggles for dissin

-these four were butta,

Closer- Tony

This is pretty much a one sided battle like I said nice verses but Marv I think tony cam eto hot for ya

Knocked OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!

Tony - Good spit man, you had some good flow.. and good punches.

Best Line - Rap aint dicksuckin son if it was,you'de be inspired
Lyrics filled with so much heat, like athletes they perspire

Worst Line - NONE

Marv - alright spit man.. some good flow going on and your punches hit hard.

Best Line - u'z a real bitch plus ya spit's wack 2,,niggaz i'll let dem clipps clap u-
i'll catch ya ass "in da club" and put "50" in ya back like "his tattoo"-

Worst Line - but tony u abuse drugs u like dat "audio software" u a "acid-pro"-
ask ya hoe,i come sick u dumb prick i'll put ya ass in a bag da go-

OVERALL - Good battle, but I gotta give this to Tony for better punches and a better flow, Marv your shit was good too, but your punches just wernt as hard as Tony's.

VOTE - Tony

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