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SPuL™ 05-05-04 05:58 AM

SPuL (12-2) v.s CreaTiviTie (24-3)
 
aiight, here are the rules:
10-20 lines
No Crew, d/r, or hate votes
No feeding;
I spit first
Spit 30 min after check in

Aiight, I woke up at 5 today to do some homework, and I drank a lot of coke, lol, so I'm up. So I'll start keyin' up right now. Give me 20-30 mins.

SPuL™ 05-05-04 06:27 AM

ok, here goes nothin':

So disconcerted wit yo name, you went and modified it once
Prepare to suffer a loss, then go transfigure yo name to “dunce”
U even changed what was under you profile, lol, now I should laugh
Losers like you are so irritatin’, like a student when he lets out gas
Jus like Michael Angelo… you wanted to construct a Clas-sic
U even change yo crews, now I’ll frame you up jus like a class-pic
Spellin’ for you is tough… you need a betta eye presciption
Mispellin’ yo own rap name, you wished you was “Master of diction”
Every line in my verse is blazin’. I’ll have you runnin’ out the door
Reckon when you get yo ass back in, yo right will say “four”
KO’ing fools like you, for me… is considered so much fun
Every line in my verse is Murderous… my Methodz will have you done
Do you ever stay on topic? Your verses remind me of ADD
Yo, three plus one be four, but ADDition this not be (his losses)
Only battlin’ newbies to get all yo wins, is considered really wack
Ur afraid of a challenge, like Shaggy. You wanna Scobby Snack?
Raw is Sacramento, and you think you “Tuffa than African feet”
After I jus poked it, it broke. I guess you're pretty weak
Suck at spellin’ so much, why does your high school let you pass?
See the first letter in each word… cuz “SPuL jus merked your ass”

aiight, ur turn. 30 mins after check in. PEACE

SPuL™ 05-05-04 04:48 PM

uppin' for CreaTiviTie

Status 05-06-04 11:16 AM

aight hello..kinda busy didnt really get on yesterday.......but let me do this school thing then i will get back to this.pce...and it wont be prewritten dont trip....

Status 05-06-04 12:10 PM

Im bout to murder this Hindu…lol. check his picks


See when I bring the beef spul runs back to his religion//
Have him praying to Allah, but I mite not forgive ~ him//
I spit ill shit out of dis world, when im in Extra Terrestrial form//
Kid ur weak I could have murdered u wit a sympathetical~poem//
fucked around on dis computer, like im verbally havin cyber~sex//
while you’re here to kill newbs egos, im here to inspire~vets//
spul thinks hes HELLA DOPE becuz he strectches his lines//
but while Im levitating my skills, your record just declines//
my lyrical sword and shield will soon revile my true skills//
im forced to kill when my force field brings ur rhymes to a yield//
kid im a Master of Ceremony and u think you a Mic Checca//
u merked me? ur liar, so get on ur knees and pray to meeca//
you truly reppin your crew, brining lyrics to destruction//
MM jus blow up in ur crews face, causing havoc & corruption //

Status 05-06-04 03:17 PM

can we get some votes.....c'mon now why are you guys gonna battle here and vote in regular frontlines...

SPuL™ 05-06-04 06:06 PM

nice spit, uppin' for votes.

SPuL™ 05-06-04 06:38 PM

aiight,uppin' for votes. Also, CreaTiviTie, I'm christian jus to let you kno. :thumbup:

quickpunch 05-06-04 06:56 PM

hmm

spul-what happened? wasnt really feeling ur battle 2day....ur flow and structure was good..ur vocab is a lil too kiddy try 2 stretch it up....ur punches did hit however werent all that but u get my vote cause u were original and creative....

Creative-u barely lost this one...if u had spit more lines i would have given it to u...ur flow and structure was good i was hoping at the end ud finish strong...but the mecca line didnt work for me...so thats why i gave my vote 2 spul

VOTE ON THIS...

QUICKPUNCH VS BORN2SPITT

PoLiFicK 05-06-04 09:29 PM

okk nice drops by both of u fellaz wit some descent punches and a round of good battling

spul

bestline-Suck at spellin’ so much, why does your high school let you pass?
See the first letter in each word… cuz “SPuL jus merked your ass”

nice closer wheeww

worsteline none

ooverall yo verse gets a 9.6/10

creativity

bestline-See when I bring the beef spul runs back to his religion//
Have him praying to Allah, but I mite not forgive ~ him//

descent

worsteline-fucked around on dis computer, like im verbally havin cyber~sex//
while you’re here to kill newbs egos, im here to inspire~vets//

sex jokes played

overall yo verse geta 9/10

winner goes 2 spul no doubt about it

Sean.C 05-07-04 01:17 AM

hmmm good battle
spul
Opening:5/10
Closing:5/10
Punches:7/10
Flow:8/10
Metas:7/10
Multis:4/10
36/60 you had good flow and and structure liked how ya put "PUL'' ya know that dope
but i think ya didnt come wit that much of a starter or a finisher ya had some good punches good all around.....

Creat.
Opening:7/10
Closing:6/10
Punches:6/10
Flow:7/10
Metas:6/10
Multis:5/10
37/60 you had a good opener and closer good punches and struct but like quick i say you need a few more bars then you would have kilt him square ive seen better from both ya good battle id like to see more battles like this

SPuL™ 05-07-04 06:06 AM

aiight, 2-0 me. I don't kno, but Koopa couldn't vote. Maybe he doesnt' have 5 wins, or h didn't poll. But uppin' for votes.

Sean.C 05-07-04 10:30 AM

ya i dont got 5 wins yet but it was a good battle so i wanted to put my oppinion down

CounTREE Jay 05-07-04 11:29 AM

Flow:Close, gotta go wit Creative though, his shit just flowed better
Punches: Creative, all the hundu shit was funnie as hell, but Spul Master of Diction was a nice bar
Vocab: Spul, but it was close
Multis: Creative
Personals: A lil' more to Spul
Opener: Definately Create
Closer: Neither was really that good, but Creative's was betta

Fav Bars

Spul:

Spellin’ for you is tough… you need a betta eye presciption
Mispellin’ yo own rap name, you wished you was “Master of diction”

Creative:

fucked around on dis computer, like im verbally havin cyber~sex//
while you’re here to kill newbs egos, im here to inspire~vets//

It was madd close, but I expected a lil' more outta Spul, Seemed like he had madd just down parts in his verse, that he was just fillin'

Creative had less, but his shit maintained throughout.

Vote/ Creative

Status 05-07-04 12:03 PM

upin for votes...and mecca is where the people pray.....like thats where they have to pray.........and mic checca..aight peeps think thata MC stands for mic checcka..you get it


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