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.::N-Sight::. 05-05-04 07:53 AM

N-Sight vs. Killah Bwoy
 
16 line max

no biting/cheatin/feeding/crewvote/pm'ing to sway voters



Verses due: within 2-3 hours



check in bish

Killah Bwoy 05-05-04 07:56 AM

checkin DA FUCKKKKKKKKKK IN...good luck..u battlin DA BWOY

.::N-Sight::. 05-05-04 09:26 AM

*Just look at his signature
**The motto for his crew
***Another jab at his crew Sig
****Reference from the military flick "A few Good men", w/Tom Cruise


First off,

I cud give a fuck 'bout your rep. or the kids on ya dick..-
But how tha fuck you sparrin' when you left ya gloves in your SIG..-*
This IS a battle dawg, you are supposed to throw punches..-
But, when you 'blast' through opponents', do you at least wear rubbers..-**
Fuck this..fag I'm ragin' verbally tamin' while I'm aimin'..-
Sent your flow str8 to hell, but you fags came back Flamin;..-***
Nicca you wack, I'm closed fist dissin' you tryna slap..-
Don't be mad cuz your name is doper than anything you rap..-
Throw your verse up so your punches can land, you knew when..-
You took this I was ARMY, you 'cruisin' for 'A Few Good Men'?..-****
Mothafuck this stupid emcee, I'm causin' real concern..-
All's not lost, just break my flow down and you still can learn..-
Nicca..your shit's even too soft for the poetry section..-
Str8 PUSSY, I ain't seen this much Bush since dey stole the election..-
You ain't fuq'in wit me dawg, u champ..nah, the former..-
Mufucas can 'pick up' ya flow when I bag da shit on the corner..-

FUCK OUTTA HERE

Optiksz 05-05-04 09:42 AM

I like da FEW GOOD MEN LINE....Can i get Winners....U might slide by wit that flo but u should've came rougher like str8 at his neck bone

.::N-Sight::. 05-05-04 10:09 AM

^^^no freeposting


uppin for Killa..

holla atcha boyee

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Killah Bwoy 05-05-04 03:34 PM

my bad i was workin out...but im back now nigga

------intro----
Ludacris: if you aint feelin my lyrics then....FUCK YOU...FUCK YOU!!......FUCK YOU!!...FUCK YOU..>FUCK YOU..FUCK YOU!! (music stops)
Jea Killah Bwoy is back wat the fucks good...Da bwoy enterin da buildin..lets go


------------diss------------------
Merk this Bitch..Losses droppin' on this kid..faster then his ma-trix sig-/
Your rhymes couldn't"blow up" even if Your Lyrics were fuc-kin' rigged-/
Pulled out my nines..you ran like a bitch..how u gon say u in "da army"/
You Fuckin' wack..get merked quick..Your weak ass rhymes Don't harm me/
Like Michael Jackson..after this you gon need another surgery-/
Bitch You aint known...even def kids "heard" of me-/
why'd You call yourself "N-sight" when you cant "see" that im the best-/
rhymes is steel..fuck vests I wear My rhymes around my chest-/
Kid played hide-n-go-seek in an empty room and still cant find his flow-/
like pimps.."this bitch couldn't do good even if I payed the hoe"-/
You Fuckin' With me? i survived more hits then a crash test dummy-/
if this kids cash was his brain he would have no fuckin money-/
Can't escape me through water 'cause i spit "sea shells"/
Spit so much fire..people would think this kids burnin' in hell-/
You like hot things....Well You and my Glock Now have a date-/
Sight seems fine *POP* *POP* *POP* now check his heart rate-/

FlowIntelligent. 05-05-04 03:44 PM

breakdown:

n-sight:

I cud give a fuck 'bout your rep. or the kids on ya dick..-
But how tha fuck you sparrin' when you left ya gloves in your SIG..-*
^^your illest bar good opener 10/10
This IS a battle dawg, you are supposed to throw punches..-
But, when you 'blast' through opponents', do you at least wear rubbers..-**
^^another good personal 8/10
Fuck this..fag I'm ragin' verbally tamin' while I'm aimin'..-
Sent your flow str8 to hell, but you fags came back Flamin;..-***
^^and another hott personal lol 7/10
Nicca you wack, I'm closed fist dissin' you tryna slap..-
Don't be mad cuz your name is doper than anything you rap..-
^^personals are off the chain good wordplay and multies 7/10
Throw your verse up so your punches can land, you knew when..-
You took this I was ARMY, you 'cruisin' for 'A Few Good Men'?..-****
^^another good punch 7/10
Mothafuck this stupid emcee, I'm causin' real concern..-
All's not lost, just break my flow down and you still can learn..-
^^ok punch 6/10
Nicca..your shit's even too soft for the poetry section..-
Str8 PUSSY, I ain't seen this much Bush since dey stole the election..-
^^another ok punch 6/10
You ain't fuq'in wit me dawg, u champ..nah, the former..-
Mufucas can 'pick up' ya flow when I bag da shit on the corner..-
^^bad closer but good wordplay 6/10

overall: 57/80

killah bwoy:

Merk this Bitch..Losses droppin' on this kid..faster then his ma-trix sig-/
Your rhymes couldn't"blow up" even if Your Lyrics were fuc-kin' rigged-/
^^hott opener good wordplay 8/10
Pulled out my nines..you ran like a bitch..how u gon say u in "da army"/
You Fuckin' wack..get merked quick..Your weak ass rhymes Don't harm me/
^^good first line second line a lil played 7/10
Like Michael Jackson..after this you gon need another surgery-/
Bitch You aint known...even def kids "heard" of me-/
^^hott bar 8/10
why'd You call yourself "N-sight" when you cant "see" that im the best-/
rhymes is steel..fuck vests I wear My rhymes around my chest-/
^^hottest bar good shyt 9/10
Kid played hide-n-go-seek in an empty room and still cant find his flow-/
like pimps.."this bitch couldn't do good even if I payed the hoe"-/
^^lol another hott punch 8/10
You Fuckin' With me? i survived more hits then a crash test dummy-/
if this kids cash was his brain he would have no fuckin money-/
^^1st line hott 2nd line played 5/10
Can't escape me through water 'cause i spit "sea shells"/
Spit so much fire..people would think this kids burnin' in hell-/
^^another played line but still hott 7/10
You like hot things....Well You and my Glock Now have a date-/
Sight seems fine *POP* *POP* *POP* now check his heart rate-/
^^ill closer 8/10

overall:60/80

vote: killah bwoy...had a hotter verse and better punches

~Lady Fiya~ 05-05-04 03:49 PM

n-sight ya drop some good punches but it seems like ya talkin' instead of flowin'...

best lines were...
You like hot things....Well You and my Glock Now have a date-/
Sight seems fine *POP* *POP* *POP* now check his heart rate-/
by Killah Bwoy...
y'all had a close battle considering word usage but overall Killah Bwoy dropped it on ya... nice battle y'all keep it up.
my vote: Killah Bwoy

Killah Bwoy 05-05-04 03:50 PM

nice honest vote dawg ^..........ill return the favour if u got a link

Killah Bwoy 05-05-04 03:51 PM

thanx boo nice vote...if u got a link ill return the favour wit honest feedback

M&rk 05-05-04 03:55 PM

wasn't really diggin either verses, i dont think i like the basic structure or sumin, but nah i didnt like it. but killa bwoy's finisher was pretty street and the only part i liked in the battle so immma give it to him
vote-killah bwoy

..ILL.. 05-05-04 04:03 PM

killa bwoy.....You had good structure and overall harder hits
very understandable.....Nice complexity....Nice and easy
and very understandable....Keep up wit the similies...
some came very weak some came hard...but keep elevatin
aight

N-sight/You had some tight lines too..A few though
everything is the same with killa.....Every simgle thing
but he had harder punches.....Aight
v/Killa

lyrical distruction 05-05-04 04:07 PM

n sight got ripped!!!!. Sorry m8 u lose this once, it all comes down to performace, where you certainly lack. Your structure was terravle, weak punches and no takes of creativeness, bad ryming and flow sorry...


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