Optiksz Vs. Da Infamous
 

I CHALLENGE YOU JUST FA THAT, SON

I'MA KILLA YOU WITH MY KILLA FLOWZ

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:shoot: :laugh: :shoot: :shoot:

You Spittin First On This One, Kid

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!

aight no rpoblem i'll spit first Peep.......


*My Flo Crush ya Lyrics and u get ATE like a DYKE//
U could JACKOFF JORDAN and still not HANDLE a MIC//*think on it*
Now u mad at me...wit flattery//
I guess my INK does belong in the PEN for this ASSUALT and BATTERY//
Look Brotha I don't know you but with the DICKRYDES i'm STRAIGHT u can HAVE IT//
I don't Know if ya INFAMOUS but ya Lyrical PRODIGY is not causin HAVOC//
I'm an ANTENNA watch me Screen STATIC//
This Guy GAY he touch more PIPES than COMPULSIVE ADDICTS//
I came wit the Blood Bath Greetin//
everybody Body say GRACE I'm about to Start EATIN//
This Nigga drop NIGHTMARES about Chokin on CASHEWS...yeah he always DREAMS NUTS//*think*
Put all ya THROWBACKS on ya CEILIN cause for u to win u gonna have to TEAM-UP! :laugh2:

Killa Queenz I Represent
And Today's Ya Birthday, Here's Ya Present:
My Killa Flows Got A Ya To Da Floor
I Fucked Ya Sister Fa Nothin And Now She's A Whore
And You Wuz Born By Accident
Ya Mom's A Bitch, Ya Father Wuz Just Mackin Em
And Ya Wordz Don't Amaze Me
Fuck Pub Town, I Spray Their Like Crazy
I Don't Waste My Time Makin Big Lines
My Right Hand Types And Da Other Holdin My "book Of Rhymes"
I Rob Pens From Staples
And A Pad For Where Da Ink Gotta Spill
And Ya Whole Crew I Kill
My Wordz Iz My Gunz, See How Many Hot Shit I Got Still
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fuck Haterz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shit was Aight but this a Battle no Punches hahaha come On Duke...far as Flo is was aight God..more Intelligence Needed.....

*My Flo Crush ya Lyrics and u get ATE like a DYKE//
U could JACKOFF JORDAN and still not HANDLE a MIC//*think on it*
Now u mad at me...wit flattery//
I guess my INK does belong in the PEN for this ASSUALT and BATTERY//

^^^^...dawg, you don't have to put shit like "think on it"...let us figure it out...aiight...and if someone can't figure it out...too damn abd...pretty decent opener


I'm an ANTENNA watch me Screen STATIC//
This Guy GAY he touch more PIPES than COMPULSIVE ADDICTS//

^^^ decent...kinda played


This Nigga drop NIGHTMARES about Chokin on CASHEWS...yeah he always DREAMS NUTS//*think*
Put all ya THROWBACKS on ya CEILIN cause for u to win u gonna have to TEAM-UP!



^^^^ eh closer...kinda played

Dawg...you have good wordplay...it's just that your punches are kinda corny and played

Killa Queenz I Represent
And Today's Ya Birthday, Here's Ya Present:
My Killa Flows Got A Ya To Da Floor
I Fucked Ya Sister Fa Nothin And Now She's A Whore

^^ style way too simple...and this is a battle, not a freestyle

And A Pad For Where Da Ink Gotta Spill
And Ya Whole Crew I Kill
My Wordz Iz My Gunz, See How Many Hot Shit I Got Still

^^^ um...no...this doesn't touch him at all

Vote: Opt...more everything

Period.

Optiksz you killed it.y our verse was way better then infamous. infamous you just infamous and need to step your skillz up. cuz you verse was wack and you had no real hard hittin punchez. Optiksz you punches and multiples were great and your structure was good.

vote=Optiksz

Face It Got More Rhymes Then Anyone
You Couldn't Think Of These Words. Man
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are you serious DA IMfamous Lets battle yo right when u get on im setting it up

oh u are on ok yo im gonna battle now

OPTIKS: not bad of a verse,good flow,punches were decent,structure was pretty good,um nothing else to say.
best line:This Nigga drop NIGHTMARES about Chokin on CASHEWS...yeah he always DREAMS NUTS//*think*
Put all ya THROWBACKS on ya CEILIN cause for u to win u gonna have to TEAM-UP
this is a pretty good line,good thing you put thing after it or i wouldntave got it.
worst line:I came wit the Blood Bath Greetin//
everybody Body say GRACE I'm about to Start EATIN//
this line is very bad.that was the worst lin there.

overal:6/10.work on some of your lines

DA INFAMOUS:a very horrible verse.OK structure,you coulvde added punch,um disses werent that great.
best line:none
worst line:everything.
overall:3/10.work hard

VOTE:OPTIKS

RETURN DA FAV AGAINST DELEON

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122892 return the favour

Opener- Optistik, the mic line was huge
Flow- Optistik, cause infamous was to wordy and that made it hard to read through
Punches- Optisitk, just had more of em
Personals- Optistik "I don't Know if ya INFAMOUS but ya Lyrical PRODIGY is not causin HAVOC//
I'm an ANTENNA watch me Screen STATIC"
Complexity- Both fairly simple no matter they were both alright
Mettas- None really to speak of.
Closer- Kinda flat but Optistik only cause Infamous was weak as hell
Overall- Opt
Vote- OPt

V/Optikz

His verse was all in all much better than DA infamous he had a good structure nice personals and decent punches.

DA Infamous also had a decent verse as well but Optikz came out punches swinging and to me took it quite comfortably

V/Optikz