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Jay_Dogg 05-05-04 01:37 PM

Jay_Dogg vs Da Infamous
 
10 - 15 lines
no dickridin
no crew votes
no hate votes
no freepostin

you spit first n ill spit straight after dawg lets go

Jay_Dogg 05-05-04 01:48 PM

Check in same time tomoro then we spit straight after checkin in blind spit style

Da Infamous 05-05-04 01:48 PM

Jay-dogg Ain't Shit
If I Lose?, Ya Know Da Yard I Come Out Reincarnated
I Could Corner Him In Da Streetz
Beat Em Up A Little Cauze You Know He Ain't Shit To Me
When You Fuck With Me Prepare For Retaliation
And I Be Doin It All Da Time Without Any Hesitation
Your Rhymes Be Bitin
Where I'm From You Gotta Be Disciplined
You Flyweight And I'm Heavy
This Is U.s. Not Scotland And I'ma Take Ya Lady

Jay_Dogg 05-06-04 08:57 AM

so we got Da Infamous standin wearin his dress/
after i pound his face, gonna be a terrable mess/
and whats up with that rap u spittin son/
ive seen better shit done by a hit n run/
i thought i had a challange on my hands/
but this bitch is as good as 1 of those boy bands/
better watch before he brakes into song n dance/
just like one of those gay ass frogs from france/
i bet you are a heavy weight, bet yo' ass weighs over 600lb's/
ass so big we could swear its perfectly round/
you gonna be the next bitch buried in the doggpound/
ill bury you so deep you'll never be found/
as soon as this is done youll be 6ft underground/

Jay_Dogg 05-06-04 10:29 AM

uppin for votes

Da Vinci 05-06-04 01:56 PM

Infamous

Jay-dogg Ain't Shit
If I Lose?, Ya Know Da Yard I Come Out Reincarnated
-weak opener

I Could Corner Him In Da Streetz
Beat Em Up A Little Cauze You Know He Ain't Shit To Me
-No punch here

When You Fuck With Me Prepare For Retaliation
And I Be Doin It All Da Time Without Any Hesitation
Your Rhymes Be Bitin
-This was alright, a better punch

Where I'm From You Gotta Be Disciplined
You Flyweight And I'm Heavy
This Is U.s. Not Scotland And I'ma Take Ya Lady
-Keep elivatin, work on ya punches,


Dogg,

so we got Da Infamous standin wearin his dress/
after i pound his face, gonna be a terrable mess/
A better opener,
and whats up with that rap u spittin son/
ive seen better shit done by a hit n run/
nice quick punch,

i thought i had a challange on my hands/
but this bitch is as good as 1 of those boy bands/
better watch before he brakes into song n dance/
just like one of those gay ass frogs from france/
-this was a good couple punches, you had it sealed here,

i bet you are a heavy weight, bet yo' ass weighs over 600lb's/
ass so big we could swear its perfectly round/
you gonna be the next bitch buried in the doggpound/
ill bury you so deep you'll never be found/
as soon as this is done youll be 6ft underground/
-This closer was kinda weak, maybe ya thought you had him beat so ya finished quick, either way nice drop,

Vote-Dogg

Jay_Dogg 05-07-04 07:28 AM

aight lets get some more votes on this

King Solo 05-07-04 08:47 AM

Jay-dogg Ain't Shit
If I Lose?, Ya Know Da Yard I Come Out Reincarnated
2...wtf??? where's the rhyme???
I Could Corner Him In Da Streetz
Beat Em Up A Little Cauze You Know He Ain't Shit To Me
2...again, where's the rhyme???
When You Fuck With Me Prepare For Retaliation
And I Be Doin It All Da Time Without Any Hesitation
4...basic wack shit!! Imrpove kid!!
Your Rhymes Be Bitin
Where I'm From You Gotta Be Disciplined
2...i shud really be givin u jack for these no rhyme bullshit lines!!
You Flyweight And I'm Heavy
This Is U.s. Not Scotland And I'ma Take Ya Lady
4...another wack line!! Make ure words rhyme dog, then after u master that we'll get down to serious elevatin!!


so we got Da Infamous standin wearin his dress/
after i pound his face, gonna be a terrable mess/
5...pretty basic, not really a punch!!
and whats up with that rap u spittin son/
ive seen better shit done by a hit n run/
4...bleh! u not doin that well either dog.
i thought i had a challange on my hands/
but this bitch is as good as 1 of those boy bands/
5...basic again, not gud really!!
better watch before he brakes into song n dance/
just like one of those gay ass frogs from france/
8...just for dissin france...lmfao...i hate those french lazy bastards!!
i bet you are a heavy weight, bet yo' ass weighs over 600lb's/
ass so big we could swear its perfectly round/
6...aight punch, no real power.
you gonna be the next bitch buried in the doggpound/
ill bury you so deep you'll never be found/
as soon as this is done youll be 6ft underground/
6...basic again! u need to elevate ure shit man!! beef up da personals, get sum multis, use creativity...that sort of shit ya know!!

POINTS BREAKDOWN
infamous - 14/50 (28%)
jay_dogg - 43/60 (71%)

V/- Jay_Dogg (OBVIOUSLY)

Jay_Dogg 05-08-04 08:48 AM

uppin....

Diagnose 05-08-04 10:13 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by KiNg SoLo
Jay-dogg Ain't Shit
If I Lose?, Ya Know Da Yard I Come Out Reincarnated
2...wtf??? where's the rhyme???
I Could Corner Him In Da Streetz
Beat Em Up A Little Cauze You Know He Ain't Shit To Me
2...again, where's the rhyme???
When You Fuck With Me Prepare For Retaliation
And I Be Doin It All Da Time Without Any Hesitation
4...basic wack shit!! Imrpove kid!!
Your Rhymes Be Bitin
Where I'm From You Gotta Be Disciplined
2...i shud really be givin u jack for these no rhyme bullshit lines!!
You Flyweight And I'm Heavy
This Is U.s. Not Scotland And I'ma Take Ya Lady
4...another wack line!! Make ure words rhyme dog, then after u master that we'll get down to serious elevatin!!


so we got Da Infamous standin wearin his dress/
after i pound his face, gonna be a terrable mess/
5...pretty basic, not really a punch!!
and whats up with that rap u spittin son/
ive seen better shit done by a hit n run/
4...bleh! u not doin that well either dog.
i thought i had a challange on my hands/
but this bitch is as good as 1 of those boy bands/
5...basic again, not gud really!!
better watch before he brakes into song n dance/
just like one of those gay ass frogs from france/
8...just for dissin france...lmfao...i hate those french lazy bastards!!
i bet you are a heavy weight, bet yo' ass weighs over 600lb's/
ass so big we could swear its perfectly round/
6...aight punch, no real power.
you gonna be the next bitch buried in the doggpound/
ill bury you so deep you'll never be found/
as soon as this is done youll be 6ft underground/
6...basic again! u need to elevate ure shit man!! beef up da personals, get sum multis, use creativity...that sort of shit ya know!!

POINTS BREAKDOWN
infamous - 14/50 (28%)
jay_dogg - 43/60 (71%)

V/- Jay_Dogg (OBVIOUSLY)

Agree^^^^^^^

Jay_Dogg 05-09-04 08:14 AM

uppin lets get more votes on this shiznit

Jay_Dogg 05-11-04 09:26 AM

uppin for some final votes.............

LyricalMethod 05-11-04 11:48 AM

Jay_Dogg yout ookt he cake. you had way better punches and multiples. i give you my vote b/c you really stepped it up from your last battles. infamous you need to step it up in lyrics and multiples.

vote=j.d.

Mc's Reaper 05-11-04 04:31 PM

Jay Dogg because all the way he had better structure, flow, and deceny.
v/J-dogg

Mc's Reaper 05-11-04 04:32 PM

Return the favor please will be appreciated, the links are in the sig.


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