fine mind vs j_da_monsta
 

1 post only
10 lines
no dick ridin

Yo i've just started, gonna spit rymes on ur head just landed/
these lyrics are eatin vital orgains inside, got your heart stuck in a microwave saved for burning for l8ter/
plz you don't see me, now leave, im gonna chop your words up like a shredder/
your treading on thin ice, with your stinkin fat ass, you'll fall down fast crashing/
these lyrics can't be submitted to hold back, it'll reinstall your brain, put your mind in a world o,f fucked/
spittin this shit for you it's dissin you've just missed your oppotunitry, try again next time/
the rymes have livened me up, and im anxiously trying to make you give up/
I get four stones thrown at you, ti'll i start seeing some action from my reaction/
watching you bleeding on some bigger stones, then think this an't good enough, throw your ass onto a enormous cliff, dropped head first watchin u die immediatly/
This battle has out spoken you, revealed that you don't have a clue about rap
start some other type of shit, but don't expect me to listen/

Yo J--Drop yo verse i wanna see dis battle........ plus im postin in everythang so i can get like 100 Postzzz

Fine Mind dat shit was CORNY like corn on da cob an shit LMAO! i dont think dat shit even rhymed...Ive read CAt in da hat books dat rhymed mo den dat

Game over nigga, you just lost anyway.

This nigga aint make it, his 'cuts' is fake//
But my words chop him up faster than "Helicopter Blades"//
One by one, your punches swing and hit air//
I ain't no bone crusher, but 'I aint scared"//
But as for me........im patiently waiting//
Have my words "solve" your problems like Algebraic Equations//
I got this fool shook, he ain't know what to do//
I won't waste the rest of my rhymes when I beat you in two//
Dudes can talk all this bull about killin man//
But they can get 'killed in battle' like "Pat Tillman"//(RIP)


Im done.

damn j-da took this battle

fine-your lines were way too long.....u need to shorten them up......and u didnt really even rhyme in your verse.......u need to fix your structure

j-da-u took this easy u started off whack but u picked it up......personally i didnt like your closer i thought it was grimey....but it was very creative....u had some ok punches.....u took this easily.....but u need to work on your consistancy

J I am sorry I cant vote yet but when i can i will be sure to you for this battle. You said some good shit. :laugh:

e.coil- Yeah that line wuz kinda Grimey, Im thinkin about just erasing that one outta my rhyme book. And the reason that I came a lil weak is cause, I put out three battle calls and only one got answered, mostly the one that I ain't think no one was gonna answer to. But good looking.

^^^^^^^^^uppin for votes, we need some voting to go on for this battle.
Im trying to close the battle.

hot
 

both of them was hot but i give it to J_da i cant vote yet either but soon i will